Young Ice vs Deaththreats Topic Battle

deaththreats

RULES:
16 BARS (TOPIC: CLUBBING/NIGHT CLUB LIFE)
50 POST TO VOTE (Some vote examples...METAPHORS, FLOW, MULTIS, HOTTEST VERSE)
NO FEEDING
DEADLINE BY TUES. 3/15

thedesolateone

this should be interesting

deaththreats

Mannnnnn...soon as I hit the doe (door)
Its like a spotlight be on me cause ya boy's jewelry glow (2)
When them diamonds changing colors lets you know they worth
a couple grand fam, shirt lookin like some fireworks (4)
I swag at will, my wrist on chill, gave my arm frostbite
1/2 carrot earrings poking out of my ear looking like a overbite (6)
comfy money shit, swag top knit, im so ridiculous
cause im fly.. (how fly?)....man i think I need a cockpit (8)
insect bug shit, mosquito on airplane and I tried to told 'em
Im looking good like Halle Berry's thighs...........wit BABY OIL on 'em (10)
rollin on' em, im starched down got my khakis wit a hard crease man
I got the club chicks like "DAMN............he musta used the whole can" (12)
I nod my head walking to the bar wit plenty cash
Ice is young and broke..nigga will never have a bar tab (14)
And while he's in the club talking about the recession man
Shit....I keep money and drinks..... call me a concession stand (16)

deaththreats

nice verse playboy...let the voting begin....

deaththreats

Upping for votes

deaththreats

Damn...we got some views but no votes...oh well, another battle bites the dust..hopefully people will need alink for the tourney and have to vote

thedesolateone

after rereading these verses 3 times i vote for young ice because his verse was more visual
deaththreats i thought went too far talkin about the creases in his pants and spent 3/4 of the verse describing his fashion
but deaththreats last bars were ill .still i gotta give it to young ice his verse was very creative

methaphors:deaththreats
flow:young ice
multis:tie
hottest verse:young ice

my vote goes to young ice

tupacfan

I re-read these verse's a few times, and after re-reading them. I thought both verse's were creative and I also like the fact that it had a topic to go along with..

My vote goes to young ice, nice flow that painted a picture.. creative in other terms.

Now deaththreats, his verse was nice too, I like the last 2 bars.. I thought it was cool... cause we definitely in a recession so go on head with that concession stand.. hahaha..

Peace! thanks for letting me vote!

raw-material_ahh

Both verses were hot. deaththreats had pretty decent metaphors. They were sick. Had a good flow too, I think. Multis were not a factor or focus. Young Ice was not really sick with the metaphors but everything else was crazy. I guess flow was the same. Multis were cool. Painted a better picture too. Hotter verse got my vote. That means my vote is for Young-Ice.