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Writer's Block

TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,423 Regulator
edited June 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
I'm sick of this writers block,
feels like I'm trapped in a prison with my soul on lock,
my creativity came to a stop,
I woke up one day and this shit came to a halt
It isn't even poetry's fault.
the mind scattered like pieces of glass shattered
don't know what the matter is,
the things that once mattered don't even matter.
constant remissions have me screaming fuck you Adam and Jesus
your ransom of forgivingness is all bullshit based on Gods business
Dr.s talmbout keep up with your fitness,
I'm like fuck you! my goodness!
like a lost child I ran into a empty church beginning for the lord's forgiveness
be my savior and I'll be that Jehovah's witness
on bended knee pleading with no relentless....




I'm just venting ya'll... on that writers block that be fucking with my creativity flow, fucking with my face glow, making the mind go slow- mo!
emaculate

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  • goldenjagoldenja Posts: 6,332 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited June 2011
    Tupacfan wrote: »
    I'm sick of this writers block,
    feels like I'm trapped in a prison with my soul on lock,
    my creativity came to a stop,
    I woke up one day and this shit came to a halt
    It isn't even poetry's fault.
    the mind scattered like pieces of glass shattered
    don't know what the matter is,
    the things that once mattered don't even matter.
    constant remissions have me screaming fuck you Adam and Jesus
    your ransom of forgivingness is all bullshit based on Gods business
    Dr.s talmbout keep up with your fitness,
    I'm like fuck you! my goodness!
    like a lost child I ran into a empty church beginning for the lord's forgiveness
    be my savior and I'll be that Jehovah's witness
    on bended knee pleading with no relentless....




    I'm just venting ya'll... on that writers block that be fucking with my creativity flow, fucking with my face glow, making the mind go slow- mo!


    good shit.. yeah writers block is a bitch ;)
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  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,423 Regulator
    edited June 2011
    goldenja wrote: »
    good shit.. yeah writers block is a bitch ;)

    thanks g, i'm barely getting off that.. have been writing a bunch lately..
  • RuffDraftRuffDraft Posts: 4,751 ✭✭✭✭
    edited June 2011
    Lol nice piece. I like the bit where you question God.
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  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,423 Regulator
    edited June 2011
    RuffDraft wrote: »
    Lol nice piece. I like the bit where you question God.

    lol, ahhh, writers block be having me coming up with wicked thoughts hahaha..
  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,423 Regulator
    edited June 2011
    Young-Ice wrote: »
    If you have writers block its best to put down the pen, and come back later

    You just dont have anything to say. go out and live life, play tennis, try new food, come back with new experience and wisdom and try it again

    my music teacher used to always tell me this.






    anyways, good poem. Like the similes. and its something everyone can relate too. Great job :)


    Thank you for the tips i already know lol.. i always try to do that.. and sometimes I'm afraid when I go on a hiatus, I will never touch poetry again, so I try and stay consistent.. but with constant bs, I always have something to write about lol..

    and thank you for commenting, i actually enjoyed venting on this piece..
  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,423 Regulator
    Damn... It is crazy how I spoke that 2nd line into existence. Uggg!

    I got some new shit tho!!! Lol
  • emaculateemaculate Posts: 545 ✭✭✭✭
    This was a great read. Very deep to me. Thank you for sharing. Actually very inspiring to me as well.
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