iMpIoDez vs b.c.o.dcru

b.c.o.dcru

16 lines.
50 posts to vote. Votes must be explained.
No feeding, no biting, no editing verses after second person has dropped.
5 votes to win. 3-0 KO rule. Whoever has the most votes after 2 weeks wins if neither battler has 5 votes yet.


Due date June first/wedsday

RiGGA

Check .

RiGGA

Well seeing how that due date wasn't acheivable, let's say Monday?? (the 6th)

b.c.o.dcru

Darryl has a problem...I'll let it be known, fuck it!
He came to the table treed up, this week he looks dusted
aniversery commin' verses cru that's early death money, your foundations incomplete continue reading "Spittin for Dummies"
Neal to a Hierarchy who's proficiant in verbal archery, that flip real niggas, don't implodez..we spill niggaz
the "riggas" set in as outta this youngn hiphop trickles....illlll
on da real..chill! wit da firearm banter you Chi, I'm up north jabin ya whore tounge bout ta hit up her southside
she lies about love in her emails u skim, she makes the illisit-nois at the career acadamy of simeon
you got the news coolin...them desolate bitches had you tickled
mood switched, loaded ya tool clips, took it out on the N.I.U campus like on each shoulder was two chips
back home they like..."pimpin went simple, over a slut?" "heck yeah! Dude flipped."
big cash on deck! Explodein newb pussy...I dooooos this!
Rip windpipe from Imp's neck, punch the batery out ya back, lyricly rape u wit raw material five hours straight...yal love dat!
Ya lame lines I soar above, ya brains splat on charger mud flaps
Laserations and scrapes disfigure ya face..where the simi's and revolvers?
At any rate...it's a great chance you'll be digraced
but it's ur rhymes that cause this

RiGGA

I don't know where you found out what schools I went to n shit, I almost thought I was done for....Then I remembered I don't need to do a background check to body bitch niggas...


Okay, so homie did his research….but this phony’s still de-ssert
I eat you, this free work…Ice cream, my teeth hurt
Sweet lick like a fuckin lollipop so talk shit and get fuckin mollywhopped
Run wit a crew? Me too, ya man’s see-through cuz now he popped
His Body stopped n dropped reeking like “peee-uuuu” =[
Slumped the pussy n left his soul to decay’s what we do
Evil’s beneath you, kind hearted--y’aint built for this
You reluctantly timid diss while I muzzle the(e) wickedest
Check the temperatures this heat’ll give ‘em hemorrhages
And if you runnin wit packs then I got gats that’ll leave ya sacked
Like behind the line of scrimmages
See All that work you put into defaming my name’s in vain
Stay in ya lane to be avoidin the pain, but you stepped out ya boundary
Devoid of the shame in expressing that lame shit
Rigga’s bad for ya health so you crippled yaself,
All I did was snatch ya cane, bitch

C.Melendez

iMpIoDez wrote: »

I don't know where you found out what schools I went to n shit, I almost thought I was done for....Then I remembered I don't need to do a background check to body bitch niggas...


Okay, so homie did his research….but this phony’s still de-ssert
I eat you, this free work…Ice cream, my teeth hurt
Sweet lick like a fuckin lollipop so talk shit and get fuckin mollywhopped
Run wit a crew? Me too, ya man’s see-through cuz now he popped
His Body stopped n dropped reeking like “peee-uuuu” =[
Slumped the pussy n left his soul to decay’s what we do
Evil’s beneath you, kind hearted--y’aint built for this
You reluctantly timid diss while I muzzle the(e) wickedest
Check the temperatures this heat’ll give ‘em hemorrhages
And if you runnin wit packs then I got gats that’ll leave ya sacked
Like behind the line of scrimmages
See All that work you put into defaming my name’s in vain
Stay in ya lane to be avoidin the pain, but you stepped out ya boundary
Devoid of the shame in expressing that lame shit
Rigga’s bad for ya health so you crippled yaself,
All I did was snatch ya cane, bitch

you got the news coolin...them desolate bitches had you tickled
mood switched, loaded ya tool clips, took it out on the N.I.U campus like on each shoulder was two chips
back home they like..."pimpin went simple, over a slut?" "heck yeah! Dude flipped."
big cash on deck! Explodein newb pussy...I dooooos this!

prob the best part of the story formatted diss....haven't seen a storline diss in a minute...pretty tough shit

Evil’s beneath you, kind hearted--y’aint built for this
You reluctantly timid diss while I muzzle the(e) wickedest
Check the temperatures this heat’ll give ‘em hemorrhages
And if you runnin wit packs then I got gats that’ll leave ya sacked
Like behind the line of scrimmages

caught my eye with the multis

both did good but i was feeling implodez overall verse...but creativity with the storyline while still using slick punches....the illinois one was nice....Imma vote bco

thedesolateone

damn this is a difficult battle to judge

thedesolateone

b.c.o.dcru wrote: »

Darryl has a problem...I'll let it be known, fuck it!
He came to the table treed up, this week he looks dusted -great personal to start off in this couplet
aniversery commin' verses cru that's early death money, your foundations incomplete continue reading "Spittin for Dummies"-
Neal to a Hierarchy who's proficiant in verbal archery, that flip real niggas, don't implodez..we spill niggaz-good lyricism line
the "riggas" set in as outta this youngn hiphop trickles....illlll
on da real..chill! wit da firearm banter you Chi, I'm up north jabin ya whore tounge bout ta hit up her southside-this is dope good attack
she lies about love in her emails u skim, she makes the illisit-nois at the career acadamy of simeon-good personal about chicago again and attack about his girl
you got the news coolin...them desolate bitches had you tickled - nice ricochet shot with the wordplay
mood switched, loaded ya tool clips, took it out on the N.I.U campus like on each shoulder was two chips -nice rhymin multis and attack
back home they like..."pimpin went simple, over a slut?" "heck yeah! Dude flipped."
big cash on deck! Explodein newb pussy...I dooooos this!
Rip windpipe from Imp's neck, punch the batery out ya back, lyricly rape u wit raw material five hours straight...yal love dat!- the second half of this line is good
Ya lame lines I soar above, ya brains splat on charger mud flaps
Laserations and scrapes disfigure ya face..where the simi's and revolvers?
At any rate...it's a great chance you'll be digraced
but it's ur rhymes that cause this-good ending with the last three lines

rate:7/10
this is a good verse alot of personals good name flips and double meanings
attacked throughout
rhymed good with a nice flow

thedesolateone

iMpIoDez wrote: »

I don't know where you found out what schools I went to n shit, I almost thought I was done for....Then I remembered I don't need to do a background check to body bitch niggas...


Okay, so homie did his research….but this phony’s still de-ssert
I eat you, this free work…Ice cream, my teeth hurt-nice multis and methaphor in this couplet
Sweet lick like a fuckin lollipop so talk shit and get fuckin mollywhopped-dope worplay and muti with continued methaphor from the last line
Run wit a crew? Me too, ya man’s see-through cuz now he popped-dope mutis in this couplet and strong attack
His Body stopped n dropped reeking like “peee-uuuu” =[
Slumped the pussy n left his soul to decay’s what we do
Evil’s beneath you, kind hearted--y’aint built for this
You reluctantly timid diss while I muzzle the(e) wickedest-dope wordplay in this couplet
Check the temperatures this heat’ll give ‘em hemorrhages-clean multi rhyme and wordplay in this line continued from the last two lines
And if you runnin wit packs then I got gats that’ll leave ya sacked
Like behind the line of scrimmages-good football methaphor and rhymes in this couplet
See All that work you put into defaming my name’s in vain
Stay in ya lane to be avoidin the pain, but you stepped out ya boundary
Devoid of the shame in expressing that lame shit
Rigga’s bad for ya health so you crippled yaself,
All I did was snatch ya cane, bitch-good methaphor and wordplay strong ending in the last three bars

rate: 8/10

verse has a good delivery and alot of mutis
some dope methaphors and wordplay
with some double meanings and attackin all the way thru
vote:implodez

RiGGA

ayo lets get a tie-break vote so we can chalk this one up in the record books...good luck to bco

raw-material_ahh

b.c.o.dcru
Darryl has a problem...I'll let it be known, fuck it!
He came to the table treed up, this week he looks dusted
Pretty nice.
aniversery commin' verses cru that's early death money, your foundations incomplete continue reading "Spittin for Dummies"
Neal to a Hierarchy who's proficiant in verbal archery, that flip real niggas, don't implodez..we spill niggaz
Okay first line.
the "riggas" set in as outta this youngn hiphop trickles....illlll
on da real..chill! wit da firearm banter you Chi, I'm up north jabin ya whore tounge bout ta hit up her southside
Sick wordplay.
she lies about love in her emails u skim, she makes the illisit-nois at the career acadamy of simeon
you got the news coolin...them desolate bitches had you tickled
Just funny.
mood switched, loaded ya tool clips, took it out on the N.I.U campus like on each shoulder was two chips
back home they like..."pimpin went simple, over a slut?" "heck yeah! Dude flipped."
Sick multis.
big cash on deck! Explodein newb pussy...I dooooos this!
Rip windpipe from Imp's neck, punch the batery out ya back, lyricly rape u wit raw material five hours straight...yal love dat!
What? Lol.
Ya lame lines I soar above, ya brains splat on charger mud flaps
Laserations and scrapes disfigure ya face..where the simi's and revolvers?
Ehh.
At any rate...it's a great chance you'll be digraced
but it's ur rhymes that cause this
Kind of weak closer.

iMpIoDez
Okay, so homie did his research….but this phony’s still de-ssert
I eat you, this free work…Ice cream, my teeth hurt
Sick multis. Like the connection and wordplay but 2nd line is weak.
Sweet lick like a fuckin lollipop so talk shit and get fuckin mollywhopped
Run wit a crew? Me too, ya man’s see-through cuz now he popped
LOL!!
His Body stopped n dropped reeking like “peee-uuuu” =[
Slumped the pussy n left his soul to decay’s what we do
Decent.
Evil’s beneath you, kind hearted--y’aint built for this
You reluctantly timid diss while I muzzle the(e) wickedest
I like the connections again. Decent punch.
Check the temperatures this heat’ll give ‘em hemorrhages
And if you runnin wit packs then I got gats that’ll leave ya sacked
Ehh.
Like behind the line of scrimmages
See All that work you put into defaming my name’s in vain
Nice punch on the first line from the previous line.
Stay in ya lane to be avoidin the pain, but you stepped out ya boundary
Devoid of the shame in expressing that lame shit
Rigga’s bad for ya health so you crippled yaself,
All I did was snatch ya cane, bitch
Nice rhymes. No big punches but creative lines nonetheless.

Both verses were somewhat above average. I would vote a tie but seeing as it's been 1-1 for awhile and no votes have came in since June 5th, I'm not.
b.c.o.dcru won on personals but those personals didn't mix in with great punches but they were still good punches. Both battlers had a lot of rhymes too. More than your average verse. Both came with extra rhymes inside their lines. Also, both fell off for me about the last 4-5 lines so it's hard not to call a tie. After reading the verses about 5 times each and going line by line, I have to say one edged it out barely with slightly harder lines. Vote - b.c.o.dcru

RiGGA

I'd like to forfeit this battle and the one with love yal, I told you I aint competing anymore.

RiGGA

Young-Ice wrote: »

^ cry baby.

You're Canadian, your government worships us, and our governments are representative of the general populace. Get on your knees faggot.