LE Tournament #3 Round One - iMpIoDez -VS- love yal

raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Posts: 554
edited July 2011 in Lyrical Executions
iMpIoDez -VS- love yal

LYRICAL EXECUTIONS TOURNAMENT #3

Check in by Sunday, July 24, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Verses are due by Tuesday, July 26, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Voting will end on Thursday, July 28, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.

These due dates are final. Beware: 1 minute late will result in a DQ.
Due dates will be extended only when the site goes down.

Rules
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
First to 3 votes wins. (The voting panel of 5 will vote. Only their votes count.)
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING!
BITING is an instant disqualification.


Take criticism like a man. Quit trying to vote sway and explain your bars in. Everyone has their own opinion.
Use the Predictions/SH!T Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread.
Good luck.

Replies

  • love yallove yal Posts: 1,327
    edited July 2011
    Check in...and good luck!
  • RiGGARiGGA Posts: 3,213 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    Checker pieces....good luck bruh'
  • love yallove yal Posts: 1,327
    edited July 2011
    This Romeo must die, break yo bones like Jet Li
    Radiologist leave yo coffin lyrics dead Tuxedo

    I'm good like Jackie Chan, you lost this match
    Because you was Jeolous OneS Envy, a wannabe Fat Joe

    iMpIoDez loses Victory when Bad meets Evil
    Your not Dj Khaled or Eminem even unreal on this tournment

    iMpIoDez is played out like Midway games
    Listen to the Darkside, while I chainsaw you rapidly

    like the Texas chainsaw Massacre, make you example of Heavy Duty
    First time I saw this sawft Beast, I ripped his horns

    So he can see seven heads, meet authority, destroy his mortality
    Sit down for captivity, blast this fool like entrepreneurial publicity

    Violent hailstorm, iMpIoDez couldn't survive his words of testimony
    Even if he had the vision of heavenly worship, burned your body crispy

    Because you are not acceptable for global opportunities
    Never will get hired for a job, I murdered like headless zombies plus you stupid for the economy!
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Posts: 554
    edited July 2011
    ^^ Not 16 lines. Edit your verse before the verse due date.
  • love yallove yal Posts: 1,327
    edited July 2011
    ^^ Not 16 lines. Edit your verse before the verse due date.

    Thanks Raw-Material!
  • love yallove yal Posts: 1,327
    edited July 2011
    Waiting for iMpIoDez verse, nothing seriously but another nice third friendly battle. Good luck again!
  • RiGGARiGGA Posts: 3,213 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    Go easy on em' boss!


    Okay yal it’s round one lets go, toe to toe
    Tag on yours cuz you bodied, lyrical pump, 12 gauge shotty
    Gotta blow a hole in your soul
    Lyrical ether this nigga’s a bitch and I beat her
    Follow the leader, cuz.. Rigga’s fuckin stylin on you
    Diarrhea pilin’ disgusting, tec foulin on you
    And I hope you get the references…subliminals is packed like Mexicans
    You a loser tryna fit in, like waterboys in Lettermans!
    I tell em when--it’s his turn, but when I’m through his piss burn
    Verbal bullets leave him fucked nasty vastly,
    intercontinental disease spread from Degrassi to Pittsburgh
    or wherever you from, me I be the lyricist from under the slum
    Auditory artillery abundant my spit is a gun
    “no wonder he killin me” bitch it’s only begun..
    Nah but really I can waste this bar cuz still I’m the best
    3-0 K.O and ayo raw, you next.
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Posts: 554
    edited July 2011
    love yal wrote: »
    Waiting for iMpIoDez verse, nothing seriously but another nice third friendly battle. Good luck again!

    That's 23 lines. You can only post 16. Edit your verse and then the voting will begin.
  • love yallove yal Posts: 1,327
    edited July 2011
    That's 23 lines. You can only post 16. Edit your verse and then the voting will begin.

    Just edit my verse, we ready for votes.
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Posts: 554
    edited July 2011
    love yal wrote: »
    Just edit my verse, we ready for votes.

    I can't. You have to pick which 16 you want to keep. The rules say 16 lines only. The 5 judges aren't going to vote until you edit your verse. 16 lines, remember.
  • love yallove yal Posts: 1,327
    edited July 2011
    I can't. You have to pick which 16 you want to keep. The rules say 16 lines only. The 5 judges aren't going to vote until you edit your verse. 16 lines, remember.

    Alright, you can now check my verse it's 16 lines and I also changed the structure, voters can now read my 16 lines verse.
  • deaththreatsdeaththreats Posts: 1,602
    edited July 2011
    Pretty good battle....good luck to both
  • SionSion Moderator, AHH Content Producer, AHH Editor Posts: 22,350 Regulator
    edited July 2011
    Alright Im gonna vote Impiodez.

    love yal had punchlines but the last 4 verses aint really make too much sense, he also posted up 23 lines when the rule was 16 & re-edited his verse so i guess he trimmed his stuff down a bit which I think hurt him. Impiodez was consistent, it flowed together nice & was simply the hotter verse. Nothing really jumped out at me except for:


    "I tell em when--it’s his turn, but when I’m through his piss burn
    Verbal bullets leave him fucked nasty vastly,
    intercontinental disease spread from Degrassi to Pittsburgh"


    iMpIoDez also won me with this:

    "Auditory artillery abundant my spit is a gun
    “no wonder he killin me” bitch it’s only begun..
    Nah but really I can waste this bar cuz still I’m the best
    3-0 K.O and ayo raw, you next."


    Ballsy move by going at other competitors & showing lyrical versatility using a metaphor as ammunition (no pun intended). I think this was a dope match up but iMpIoDez clearly outshined love yal. I was gonna vote love yal but his verse got chomped down & aint really flow proper.

    Ayo u gonna have to break down waterboys in lettermans cuz that shit went over my head - wtf is a lettermans ? lolol


    ImpIoDez gets my vote.

    & yes fam I am a judge.
  • RiGGARiGGA Posts: 3,213 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    sionb55 wrote: »
    Ayo u gonna have to break down waterboys in lettermans cuz that shit went over my head - wtf is a lettermans ? lolol


    3572915371_2ed46dbf53.jpg

    Letterman jackets, what people on various highschool/college teams receive; The rest should be pretty self-explanatory...
  • MasteryMastery Posts: 7,543 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    love yal - Your verse was tight, you had alot of punchlines, but for me, it didnt flow so smoothly.

    ImpIoDez - Your verse was ill as well, plus it flowed smoothly. Lyrics were on point. I liked how you called out Raw :tu

    My vote: IMpIoDez
  • StewStew Im In My Permanent PRhyme We run this spot like a Chinese sweatshopPosts: 34,938 Regulator
    edited July 2011
    iMpIoDez gets my vote. Wasnt hearing the rhyming in more then a few lines by love yal
  • RiGGARiGGA Posts: 3,213 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    Ice that's some pretty harsh judgement there buddy, I'll be sure to throw some haymakers for you next time okay boss??
  • love yallove yal Posts: 1,327
    edited July 2011
    Congradulation to iMpIoDez good luck towards the tournament, this match was a great battle, I'm not a her I'm a him...lol..thanks to Raw-Material for letting me enter the tournament, and thanks to the voters and their advices , thanks for support Sionb55, Walh, Young-Ice, HIF, and Deaththreats...good luck to all, I look foward later in future, battles, tournaments, and lyrical excuation hopel
    ly by then I will improve my skilsl much better..lol. Again nothing seriously but iMpIoDez good luck in tournament!
  • 7thwardslim7thwardslim Posts: 1,238
    edited July 2011
    Imp.....u did your thang.....and the waterboy and letterman jacket was pretty dope....
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