LE Tournament #3 Round One - maxseveneight -VS- C.Melendez

raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Posts: 554
edited July 2011 in Lyrical Executions
maxseveneight -VS- C.Melendez

LYRICAL EXECUTIONS TOURNAMENT #3

Check in by Sunday, July 24, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Verses are due by Tuesday, July 26, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Voting will end on Thursday, July 28, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.

These due dates are final. Beware: 1 minute late will result in a DQ.
Due dates will be extended only when the site goes down.

Rules
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
First to 3 votes wins. (The voting panel of 5 will vote. Only their votes count.)
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING!
BITING is an instant disqualification.


Take criticism like a man. Quit trying to vote sway and explain your bars in. Everyone has their own opinion.
Use the Predictions/SH!T Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread.
Good luck.

Replies

  • maxseveneightmaxseveneight Posts: 41
    edited July 2011
    mic check one two
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    CHECK!!! should be a good battle
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    stay tuned...
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    selection process set u up for a bad day straight misery
    1st round u got the hard a way .....a bad break literally
    I got this thread bagged up sorta like Macy's
    this kid's in a pool with a shark,and the lifeguard's Casey
    Thinking he's a star..well shit i thinks he's square
    I can get him offed quicker than Lacy's or Pinky's wear
    and thats a promise Max...I pinky swear
    ya face bloodied and charred like steak cooked pink & rare
    wash this pussy up imma summer eve him
    knife or pistol either way imma slump and leave him
    send him to God yall......air born is the path for him
    Told u I was sick boy like airborne pathogens
    "10 bullets" will bury him call it "dimed" out
    this chicken is done who else wanna dine out
    I got so many punchlines i can take a winehouse buisness
    RIP 78...yo tell me how Winehouse living

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  • maxseveneightmaxseveneight Posts: 41
    edited July 2011
    its time for your retribution
    you say your dope but who ya fooling
    your rhymes diluted
    mines pure
    you say your sick im the cure
    your such a kiddie rapper your immature
    lyrical criminal blows trial
    when its time to battle melendez acts senile
    chopping him down with my sword style
    im a whale of an emcee call me blubber
    i speak clearly while melendez studders
    i make his chicks legs spread like butter
    for you they snap back like rubber
    you aint ready to rumble like micheal buffer
    maxs a smooth talker
    if its a wack rhyme melendez is the author
    im a cereal killer fruit loop emcees i slaughter
  • SionSion Moderator, AHH Content Producer, AHH Editor Posts: 25,009 Regulator
    edited July 2011
    Dayum dayum dayum....

    For this battle I'm gonna vote C.Melendez this nigga said:

    I can get him offed quicker than Lacy's or Pinky's wear
    and thats a promise Max...I pinky swear
    ya face bloodied and charred like steak cooked pink & rare
    wash this pussy up imma summer eve him


    &

    "send him to God yall......air born is the path for him"

    Cold blooded, ruthless, witty, punchlines, originality & aggression my vote goes to C.Melendez. LOL @ the pinky/lacey verse.

    maxseveneight had a dope verse too dont get me wrong but being that he went second I was expecting him to come with something way more potent the start of his rhyme was mediocre but got strong after "when its time to battle melendez acts senile" on down.


    C.Melendez gets my vote.
  • MasteryMastery Posts: 9,567 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    C.Melendez - Got dayum! He ripped it. this nigga came with punchlines like a mug. nigga was like a stone cold killer out chea! This did it for me:
    "this kid's in a pool with a shark, and the lifeguard's Casey" (big ups casey anthony lol)

    maxseveneight - You started off kind of slow for the first few lines but you picked up steam afterwards. Your lyrics were on point but they just werent enough.

    My vote: C.Melendez
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    felt i needed to bring some massive heat with an 0-2 record ock
    I bought the EAGLES out b4 the lockout ended lol
  • maxseveneightmaxseveneight Posts: 41
    edited July 2011
    good job melendez you brought the heat
  • 5th Letter5th Letter AKA 5th Element Posts: 28,013 Regulator
    edited July 2011
    c melendez gets my vote clever punchlines, wordplay and creativity with the pinky sequence.
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    good job melendez you brought the heat

    ive seen ya work max and knew i had to come with it.....but good battle fam
  • 7thwardslim7thwardslim Posts: 1,238 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    CeJota..... u got my vote my fam.....pinky swear.....
    u went at this dude neck, thats how a battle supposed to go...
    I mean i dont he had a chance.....u came off focused my man
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    CeJota..... u got my vote my fam.....pinky swear.....
    u went at this dude neck, thats how a battle supposed to go...
    I mean i dont he had a chance.....u came off focused my man

    i wanted to meet u in the tourney bad Damn why u had to be late
  • 7thwardslim7thwardslim Posts: 1,238 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
    shit nigga..... Raw Material aint stopping nothing....we both real niggas..... we can go head to head one day..... im bout that....
  • Fazeem_Blackall Fazeem_Blackall Posts: 4,216 ✭✭
    edited July 2011
    C melendez Beasted in this Battle shit was a slaughter still shaking my head saying damn...
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Posts: 554
    edited July 2011
    C.Melendez wins 3-0. Thanks for voting.
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