What's up everybody! Just a quick message. We will be relaunching AllHipHop.com with the goal of keeping the community front and center. I have worked with Jamal and select moderators, to make sure The Illl Community's needs are being addressed as we evolve. We are encouraging you to use the new platform.

We will NOT be closing the current community, but we will be porting user data over to the new system over time, so please get used to using the new community!

We will be working on it every single day until it's exactly what you want!

Please feel free to join now, test, as we are in beta:

https://www.allhiphop.com

Dreams - By Tupacfan

TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,426 Regulator
edited February 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
So folks, this piece was inpired by another poet shout outs to Prophet, it was written a way's back but never shared it with the masses and yesterday I was going thru some of my material and thought I share this one with ya'll.



Dreams

While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness
Courageous for the unwanted timeless endured
The last I had infer my dreams, was when I thought I was ready to
take my last breath.
I had to wish upon the farthest star
Realizing my dream is to afar from actuality
From all the mortality of humanity due to animosity
Were just another causality of America’s hostility
Where tragedy is another man’s comedy.
Philosophizing why all these children are dying
A conception that I’m still not understanding.

The dream I’m reflecting
Is the opposite of my perspectives.
A world with no affliction but affection
Kids receiving parental attention
The hopeless overcoming life’s exception
And fulfilling expectations.
A place where unity and peace exists
with plenty of food to eat
people shouldn’t have to sleep with empty stomachs.
Less inequality so there’s equality
A place where racism and prejudice is never herd of
Letting justice be laws of morals and principals
However I don’t see that inevitable.

I dream for love, for purpose
And I dream a vandal would chisel me off this earth
Because that for me is death, or because that for me is life
So tell me how should a women live?
A petroglyph on a rock.

That’s one of my many countless dreams
While they remain unfilled
I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell
As my dreams don’t come in refills
It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s
Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel
Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail
Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,
but waiting for it to be felt
Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody
But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.






- 2pacfan

Replies

  • jayy.primejayy.prime Posts: 22
    edited April 2010
    soooo weird..i just dropped one called "a dream" .....strrrangggeee.....lol...but i've always found your pieces very clean and simply...for lack of a better word, beautiful....you have a great talent, you're work is well put together, clean and beautiful to read..(thanks for the props on my joint by the way) bottom line..i love ur work...keep it up miss lady!
  • VSOPVSOP Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited April 2010
    WOW @ your "i dream for love, for purpose" line

    you still got it mama-GREAT read

    i always learn new words when i read your joints lol its like listenin to canibus
  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,426 Regulator
    edited April 2010
    Aww...Thanks for the wonderful comment Jay! you know it means a lot when you get feed back from other fellow poets and I appreciate your's because your always on point with your material and sub par, always felt and just solid with it too. Yea I notice your topic too! I read it and felt inspired to write one of em jawn's like that lol.




    Aye VSOP,

    It always an honor to have my material with the alikes of canibus, a walking dictionary or thesaurus lol.. That's love yo! preciate that..
  • VSOPVSOP Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited April 2010
    Tupacfan wrote: »

    Aye VSOP,

    It always an honor to have my material with the alikes of canibus, a walking dictionary or thesaurus lol.. That's love yo! preciate that..

    lol no doubt mama-thats why i like readin everyones pieces on here cuz i learn a new word or idea that i gotta run with
  • callingmachinecallingmachine Posts: 1
    edited April 2010
    Thank you for sharing your poem, it made my day, and really hope to read some more soon, cheers.
  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,426 Regulator
    edited April 2010
    Thank you for sharing your poem, it made my day, and really hope to read some more soon, cheers.



    No, Thank you for reading my poem! Glad I could make your day with this drop.. and keep dropping by, I will have some new material posted in due time. Thanks for reading as well.

    Cheers back to you!
  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,426 Regulator
    edited December 2010
    This poem is still relevant for me..



    Choke choke.. My dreams are so afar,
    further than a shining star,
    still bleeding from all my deep scars,
    From fighting many wars,
    that rage further than the deserts of Qu'tar.....

    To be continued.....
  • deaththreatsdeaththreats Posts: 1,602 ✭✭
    edited January 2011
    That’s one of my many countless dreams
    While they remain unfilled
    I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell
    As my dreams don’t come in refills
    It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s
    Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel
    Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail
    Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,
    but waiting for it to be felt
    Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody
    But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.

    The WHOLE poem is good, but this is my favorite part..I know this poem is from way back, but after I seen your battles its crazy how you able to write something like this too so I had to post my 2 cents on it...
    Tupacfan
  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,426 Regulator
    edited February 2011
    That’s one of my many countless dreams
    While they remain unfilled
    I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell
    As my dreams don’t come in refills
    It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s
    Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel
    Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail
    Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,
    but waiting for it to be felt
    Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody
    But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.

    The WHOLE poem is good, but this is my favorite part..I know this poem is from way back, but after I seen your battles its crazy how you able to write something like this too so I had to post my 2 cents on it...


    Thanks for dropping in and reading some of my material..

    I'm a poet, not a battler.. But I do dabble with freestyle battles and stuff like that. I have that hate and love relationship with poetry and i feel I needed to take a break for a minute so its why I joined the tourney.. But def do get use to seeing me in future battles over in LE.. Its a new journey and I'm loving it..
  • sweellprioriasweellprioria Posts: 13
    edited February 2011
    liz vega playboy videos caught sniffing mum s panties 1 0.0069 pollyanna woodward nipples 1 0.0046 old kkk pictures 1 0.0180 mls open tryoutsmoving on and letting go quotes ohio government grants cooper discoverer h t vs. h t plus 1 0.0224 clifford trafzer willie boy lecture 1 0.0206 5 gallon glass jug tilting holder 1 0.0220 portable generator sheltermujeres bonitas tijuana donkey show www.-k6.thinkcentral.com 4 0.0164 what happened to hogrockcafe.com 1 0.0069 college pennant templateollege penna 1 0.0679 kiyah rainperi gilpin nude Fairvilla mega store halloween costumes daniella monet nude pics 2 0.0100 is poochman still on 100.3 the beat 1 0.0244 what store sells snapback hats 1 0.0234 suboccipital lymph node swollenfeeling sad poems
    presentadoras usplaystation.com suport 1 0.0038 play monthly manful online 1 0.0208 shape of the supply of labor curvem 1 0.0293 jamie colby legsinformative speech outline example 3.9 and 4.6 baseband bootloader nuke egg pattern 1 0.0329 blonde fredericks of hollywood model 1 0.0272 20 2 74 86334 1 0.0181 sales slogans examplesjudy reyes naked layla kayleigh naked formal regions of brazil 1 0.0182 bowtech soldier 1 0.0348 flushing sex tubes 1 0.0139 miss you more than sayingsscott mcgillivray wife sabrina Melissa dettwiller stripping fix 22 rifle chamber 1 0.0251 afe vibrators 1 0.0329 colonoscopy rectal exam video 1 0.0752 yugioh sacred cards romnewspaper name generator

    old vodka 1 0.0160
    hot rod manual brak
    printing free hand
    apex 46 inch 60hz lcd tv 1 0.0333
    gruesome drunk driving photos 3 0.0235
  • MeTaLMeTaL Posts: 6,553 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
    Tupacfan wrote: »
    So folks, this piece was inpired by another poet shout outs to Prophet, it was written a way's back but never shared it with the masses and yesterday I was going thru some of my material and thought I share this one with ya'll.



    Dreams

    While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness
    Courageous for the unwanted timeless endured
    The last I had infer my dreams, was when I thought I was ready to
    take my last breath.
    I had to wish upon the farthest star
    Realizing my dream is to afar from actuality
    From all the mortality of humanity due to animosity
    Were just another causality of America’s hostility
    Where tragedy is another man’s comedy.
    Philosophizing why all these children are dying
    A conception that I’m still not understanding.

    The dream I’m reflecting
    Is the opposite of my perspectives.
    A world with no affliction but affection
    Kids receiving parental attention
    The hopeless overcoming life’s exception
    And fulfilling expectations.
    A place where unity and peace exists
    with plenty of food to eat
    people shouldn’t have to sleep with empty stomachs.
    Less inequality so there’s equality
    A place where racism and prejudice is never herd of
    Letting justice be laws of morals and principals
    However I don’t see that inevitable.

    I dream for love, for purpose
    And I dream a vandal would chisel me off this earth
    Because that for me is death, or because that for me is life
    So tell me how should a women live?
    A petroglyph on a rock.

    That’s one of my many countless dreams
    While they remain unfilled
    I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell
    As my dreams don’t come in refills
    It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s
    Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel
    Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail
    Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,
    but waiting for it to be felt
    Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody
    But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.






    - 2pacfan

    Get material I like it, it has a lot of compassion, self projection, thus an informative approach of reality "While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness" That was dope right there. Good stuff.
    人々は外の広い世界を知っ決して、自分の狭い経験によって物事を判断するために満足していま
    ms.jones wrote: »
    As for the black man...he can be one of the hardest, most heart-wrenching person to love and cherish...but the love that he gives makes it all worthwhile...his skin, his back, his character, and his soul is what makes me love him for all eternity...be him right or be him wrong, I am his rib, and his wisdom...to forsake him is to be my death. I love him, because he is me.
    :-) :-)
    ms.jones wrote: »
    Mannnnn listen, he's feeling like a bum ass nigga, and wants to release those feelings of aintshitness. He spent his whole tax return on some other broad's kid (s), and now he feel like shit for not doing right by his own flesh and blood.

    He wants you to bring babygirl to Subway so he can take a few pics and post them shits on Facebook with the caption 'Had lunch with my #1lady. #Daddydaughterday'

    Psssh, you already know what it is. I'd take a picture of the back of my baby's head and be like 'We looking past you.'

    grwJXrX.jpg


    tumblr_n0p241uQ0Y1rkxks9o1_500.png
    tumblr_mjiettCibc1rju5cqo1_250.gif
    4556.gif
    icecoldchampagne.gifc1.jpg
    tumblr_m9h3qkWE2l1ruz6zso1_500.gif
  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,426 Regulator
    edited February 2011
    MeTaL wrote: »
    Get material I like it, it has a lot of compassion, self projection, thus an informative approach of reality "While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness" That was dope right there. Good stuff.

    Aye Metal,

    thanks for taking the time to peep this jawn right here.. and you know that's my favorite line too.. fa real..

    peace..
  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,426 Regulator
    I still love this piece to pieces....
  • yahwehprofetyahwehprofet Posts: 974 ✭✭✭✭
    Tupacfan wrote: »
    So folks, this piece was inpired by another poet shout outs to Prophet, it was written a way's back but never shared it with the masses and yesterday I was going thru some of my material and thought I share this one with ya'll.



    Dreams

    While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness
    Courageous for the unwanted timeless endured
    The last I had infer my dreams, was when I thought I was ready to
    take my last breath.
    I had to wish upon the farthest star
    Realizing my dream is to afar from actuality
    From all the mortality of humanity due to animosity
    Were just another causality of America’s hostility
    Where tragedy is another man’s comedy.
    Philosophizing why all these children are dying
    A conception that I’m still not understanding.

    The dream I’m reflecting
    Is the opposite of my perspectives.
    A world with no affliction but affection
    Kids receiving parental attention
    The hopeless overcoming life’s exception
    And fulfilling expectations.
    A place where unity and peace exists
    with plenty of food to eat
    people shouldn’t have to sleep with empty stomachs.
    Less inequality so there’s equality
    A place where racism and prejudice is never herd of
    Letting justice be laws of morals and principals
    However I don’t see that inevitable.

    I dream for love, for purpose
    And I dream a vandal would chisel me off this earth
    Because that for me is death, or because that for me is life
    So tell me how should a women live?
    A petroglyph on a rock.

    That’s one of my many countless dreams
    While they remain unfilled
    I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell
    As my dreams don’t come in refills
    It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s
    Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel
    Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail
    Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,
    but waiting for it to be felt
    Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody
    But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.







    - 2pacfan


    By prophet which username.... I'm hoping not Yahweh profet???

  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,426 Regulator
    [/quote]


    By prophet which username.... I'm hoping not Yahweh profet???

    [/quote]

    Na, I'm sure its a different poet.
  • FiyahRapsFiyahRaps Posts: 10
    Zoom zoom im racing escaping this reality grasping no concept calamity ive fallen cant get up mind altering steps faltering.Chasing a dream i think i fell and missedKiss of death times up no hope left so i turn the page ink stains my hands my hands they itch money green like yo bitch when she see meAint got shit to say cant beat me my mouth dont run but my hands they walk so ill walk on her face make her rethink twice bout swinging my waySidetracked i switch lanes back on it cant shake this thang my future calling but i wont answer still got messages from the past i left last present aint left yet so why talk to the future when my present still relevanyI teach a speech of a million words insults unheard of my insides they burn up see why they call me fiyah bc my flow hard and i burn hotter the more i write the harder i fightMy haters they motivate help me create let the words escape a destination unknown but in solice it will find homeIngrained n the membrane forever and alw!
    ays so i treat the beat like a reverend and i praise it giving a voice to the voiceless choice to the choiceles
Sign In or Register to comment.