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The Official Post Your Music Thread 2K17

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  • Cigarello SlimCigarello Slim Legalize Never Criticize Posts: 2,641 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Ghastly wrote: »
    Wassup fellas we've gotta drop more shit!
    FlyFreeCt wrote: »
    f.e.d.s. wrote: »
    X
    So last year I dropped a 16 or a track every month, just to get my shit out...let mufuckas know I got bars, no bull shit..but this here is the first drop of the year...snatched that Grand Master Flash beat and went to work....


    You flipped it decent. Thought it would've been better with 2 verse tho. Here is a track I recently posted. Sample has not been cleared so that's why it's only on SoundCloud. I call it Oh Baby
    https://soundcloud.com/red-hall-aka-da-burglar/oh-baby
    

    Kinda like a Texas flow, easy to vibe to, and the sample is dope. Real slick word wise...track me and my homeboy dropped from his new project "Sellout"...I spit 1st

    Bro I was really feeling your verse, dope 16. The visuals were nice too, where did you guys shoot this? Your boy was straight didn't catch my attention the way your verse did, but I can see him connecting with today's listeners who like energy & swagger which he did bring on this one.

    Ok so since it's been a drought in here I figured I'd drop something I released a while back to get some conversation started again. I just threw this up on YouTube few weeks back in memory of Sonny Liston former heavyweight champ of the world. The song is about bouncing back & not letting your shortcomings or failures define who you are, let me know what you think....




    I like it man, correct me if I'm wrong but your flow or delivery sounds GZA/Jay Electronica-influenced, or perhaps just Wu-Tang in general. Gave me that type of feel. Depending on what you're trying to do, if you wanna know what you can do to improve... I wouldn't say there's anything to improve per-say, but what I can say is this:

    I'm not bothered by the production, because of the music I grew up listening to. However, in terms of from the perspective of the average listener that exist in today's climate, I would say to rap over production that comes from today's climate. There are tons of producers too that do all types of lanes of hip-hop who you can collaborate with, and lay your narratives over their production.

    Again, it all depends on what you're trying to do. If you don't care for the music climate of today, nor to apease to the average listener, then it shouldn't matter.


    Here's a music video intended to look like a free-run video game, you know when they have those gaming competitions where you try to beat the game as fast as possible, and the best are the ones who take 0 damage and beat the opponents the fastest by already knowing the strategies... The song 'No Jumper' is about opponents' shots not hitting, and thus bricking. Entendres within guns, basketball, shots of liquor, etc.

    Check it out:


    Yo firstly props for the listen and feedback it's much appreciated. Your vid is tight mad creative went well with the concept. As far as me bro it's not so much that I don't do "today's" hip-hop I just do music I like. I'm a lil' older than the average MC on the come up so my influences are retro-based as you eluded to before but mainly my goal is to be an alternative to what today's artists bring to the culture.
    Smoke Sumthin' Ya Bish
    5th Letter
  • Ronin705Ronin705 Posts: 104 ✭✭
    Ghastly wrote: »
    Wassup fellas we've gotta drop more shit!
    FlyFreeCt wrote: »
    f.e.d.s. wrote: »
    X
    So last year I dropped a 16 or a track every month, just to get my shit out...let mufuckas know I got bars, no bull shit..but this here is the first drop of the year...snatched that Grand Master Flash beat and went to work....


    You flipped it decent. Thought it would've been better with 2 verse tho. Here is a track I recently posted. Sample has not been cleared so that's why it's only on SoundCloud. I call it Oh Baby
    https://soundcloud.com/red-hall-aka-da-burglar/oh-baby
    

    Kinda like a Texas flow, easy to vibe to, and the sample is dope. Real slick word wise...track me and my homeboy dropped from his new project "Sellout"...I spit 1st

    Bro I was really feeling your verse, dope 16. The visuals were nice too, where did you guys shoot this? Your boy was straight didn't catch my attention the way your verse did, but I can see him connecting with today's listeners who like energy & swagger which he did bring on this one.

    Ok so since it's been a drought in here I figured I'd drop something I released a while back to get some conversation started again. I just threw this up on YouTube few weeks back in memory of Sonny Liston former heavyweight champ of the world. The song is about bouncing back & not letting your shortcomings or failures define who you are, let me know what you think....




    I like it man, correct me if I'm wrong but your flow or delivery sounds GZA/Jay Electronica-influenced, or perhaps just Wu-Tang in general. Gave me that type of feel. Depending on what you're trying to do, if you wanna know what you can do to improve... I wouldn't say there's anything to improve per-say, but what I can say is this:

    I'm not bothered by the production, because of the music I grew up listening to. However, in terms of from the perspective of the average listener that exist in today's climate, I would say to rap over production that comes from today's climate. There are tons of producers too that do all types of lanes of hip-hop who you can collaborate with, and lay your narratives over their production.

    Again, it all depends on what you're trying to do. If you don't care for the music climate of today, nor to apease to the average listener, then it shouldn't matter.


    Here's a music video intended to look like a free-run video game, you know when they have those gaming competitions where you try to beat the game as fast as possible, and the best are the ones who take 0 damage and beat the opponents the fastest by already knowing the strategies... The song 'No Jumper' is about opponents' shots not hitting, and thus bricking. Entendres within guns, basketball, shots of liquor, etc.

    Check it out:


    This vid is dooope. Just thinking on hwo many times was needed to get the full continuous song is mind boggling to imagine. The track is chill too, i like how it had the video game sounds but didn't go full "nerdcore" with it. Can't wait to see what got you coming down the line (pause if needed)

    Heres my shit, i'll post a the new vid when i get around to it lol:
    5th Letter
  • FlyFreeCtFlyFreeCt Posts: 4,375 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Wassup fellas we've gotta drop more shit!
    FlyFreeCt wrote: »
    f.e.d.s. wrote: »
    X
    So last year I dropped a 16 or a track every month, just to get my shit out...let mufuckas know I got bars, no bull shit..but this here is the first drop of the year...snatched that Grand Master Flash beat and went to work....


    You flipped it decent. Thought it would've been better with 2 verse tho. Here is a track I recently posted. Sample has not been cleared so that's why it's only on SoundCloud. I call it Oh Baby
    https://soundcloud.com/red-hall-aka-da-burglar/oh-baby
    

    Kinda like a Texas flow, easy to vibe to, and the sample is dope. Real slick word wise...track me and my homeboy dropped from his new project "Sellout"...I spit 1st

    Bro I was really feeling your verse, dope 16. The visuals were nice too, where did you guys shoot this? Your boy was straight didn't catch my attention the way your verse did, but I can see him connecting with today's listeners who like energy & swagger which he did bring on this one.

    Ok so since it's been a drought in here I figured I'd drop something I released a while back to get some conversation started again. I just threw this up on YouTube few weeks back in memory of Sonny Liston former heavyweight champ of the world. The song is about bouncing back & not letting your shortcomings or failures define who you are, let me know what you think....


    Thanks man..Some of it was shot in Puerto Rico and some was shot here in GA..The guy Im on the song with is also the videographer, he does all the visuals

    "FLY FREE Still scream it ti'll my dying minute/authentic nature all these hatin' niggas try to mimic/They don't understand the realness ain't a game or gimmick/Speak without restraints & limits-Ti'll somebody aim & end it"-CtK
    5th LetterLOLCLCigarello Slim
  • LOLCLLOLCL Posts: 1,019 ✭✭✭✭
    edited July 21



    i'd appreciate honest criticism on this, did the mix myself so especially that. Or especially if you think it's wack
    5th Letter
  • LOLCLLOLCL Posts: 1,019 ✭✭✭✭
    Ok so since it's been a drought in here I figured I'd drop something I released a while back to get some conversation started again. I just threw this up on YouTube few weeks back in memory of Sonny Liston former heavyweight champ of the world. The song is about bouncing back & not letting your shortcomings or failures define who you are, let me know what you think....


    The production on this is really clean, whoever mixed it did it very well everything is blended together right. In terms of your flow you stay consistent & the vibe is really dope, you did the sound right honestly. Your lyrics are dope in terms of the way you put together the multi's & stay with the same chill subject content, like you stay on topic the whole time. Probably one of the best songs i've ever heard out of these threads on the IC.
    5th LetterCigarello Slim
  • [Trillmatic][Trillmatic] Posts: 3,530 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 22
    LOLCL wrote: »



    i'd appreciate honest criticism on this, did the mix myself so especially that. Or especially if you think it's wack

    I actually like this. Pretty trippy. Only thing think could be better is the mixing. The bass is drowning you out. Other than that it has potential to be really dope. Just get it correctly mixed and mastered.
    jamalcrawfordpattymillsproposal.gif?w=650
  • [Trillmatic][Trillmatic] Posts: 3,530 ✭✭✭✭✭


    This a video mean my homie did. Let me know what you think. I'm Lazo.
    jamalcrawfordpattymillsproposal.gif?w=650
  • LOLCLLOLCL Posts: 1,019 ✭✭✭✭
    edited July 22
    LOLCL wrote: »



    i'd appreciate honest criticism on this, did the mix myself so especially that. Or especially if you think it's wack

    I actually like this. Pretty trippy. Only thing I thing I like hunk could be better is the mixing. The bass is drowning you out. Other than that it has potential to be really dope. Just get it correctly mixed and mastered.

    That's the hardest part of doing it on your own with limited equipment man but my dream is to get it correctly mixed and mastered without an engineer and be fully independent. Searching for tips and tricks along the way honestly, the bass advice helps a lot. But thank you man I appreciate it.
  • [Trillmatic][Trillmatic] Posts: 3,530 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 22
    LOLCL wrote: »
    LOLCL wrote: »



    i'd appreciate honest criticism on this, did the mix myself so especially that. Or especially if you think it's wack

    I actually like this. Pretty trippy. Only thing I thing I like hunk could be better is the mixing. The bass is drowning you out. Other than that it has potential to be really dope. Just get it correctly mixed and mastered.

    That's the hardest part of doing it on your own with limited equipment man but my dream is to get it correctly mixed and mastered without an engineer and be fully independent. Searching for tips and tricks along the way honestly, the bass advice helps a lot. But thank you man I appreciate it.
    No problem man. Also make sure you either have correct studio monitors or good studio monitor headphones. If you try to mix your own music with stereo headphones/speakers, it's never going to come out right.

    jamalcrawfordpattymillsproposal.gif?w=650
  • Rum Middleton Rum Middleton Dedicated. Determined. Disciplined. Posts: 5,211 ✭✭✭✭✭


    This a video mean my homie did. Let me know what you think. I'm Lazo.

    Who is the lightskin nigga? He was nice..the beat was aight, just aight...I like the hook..thats some get pumped up shit..its cool..my nigga out there in tie and shit, straight from the job interview..thats whats up..cool joint overall though.
    Flytalk Specialist...
    Lurkristocrat
  • [Trillmatic][Trillmatic] Posts: 3,530 ✭✭✭✭✭


    This a video mean my homie did. Let me know what you think. I'm Lazo.

    Who is the lightskin nigga? He was nice..the beat was aight, just aight...I like the hook..thats some get pumped up shit..its cool..my nigga out there in tie and shit, straight from the job interview..thats whats up..cool joint overall though.

    I'm the light skin nigga lol. Thanks for the feedback.
    jamalcrawfordpattymillsproposal.gif?w=650
  • Rum Middleton Rum Middleton Dedicated. Determined. Disciplined. Posts: 5,211 ✭✭✭✭✭


    This a video mean my homie did. Let me know what you think. I'm Lazo.

    Who is the lightskin nigga? He was nice..the beat was aight, just aight...I like the hook..thats some get pumped up shit..its cool..my nigga out there in tie and shit, straight from the job interview..thats whats up..cool joint overall though.

    I'm the light skin nigga lol. Thanks for the feedback.

    Yeah, you came wit it..you got a soundcloud?
    Flytalk Specialist...
  • [Trillmatic][Trillmatic] Posts: 3,530 ✭✭✭✭✭


    This a video mean my homie did. Let me know what you think. I'm Lazo.

    Who is the lightskin nigga? He was nice..the beat was aight, just aight...I like the hook..thats some get pumped up shit..its cool..my nigga out there in tie and shit, straight from the job interview..thats whats up..cool joint overall though.

    I'm the light skin nigga lol. Thanks for the feedback.

    Yeah, you came wit it..you got a soundcloud?

    Nah I'm just starting to get back into the music thing actually. Ima set one up soon tho.
    jamalcrawfordpattymillsproposal.gif?w=650
  • Cigarello SlimCigarello Slim Legalize Never Criticize Posts: 2,641 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 25
    LOLCL wrote: »
    Ok so since it's been a drought in here I figured I'd drop something I released a while back to get some conversation started again. I just threw this up on YouTube few weeks back in memory of Sonny Liston former heavyweight champ of the world. The song is about bouncing back & not letting your shortcomings or failures define who you are, let me know what you think....


    The production on this is really clean, whoever mixed it did it very well everything is blended together right. In terms of your flow you stay consistent & the vibe is really dope, you did the sound right honestly. Your lyrics are dope in terms of the way you put together the multi's & stay with the same chill subject content, like you stay on topic the whole time. Probably one of the best songs i've ever heard out of these threads on the IC.

    Appreciate that bro.

    @FlyFreeCt Are u in GA?
    Smoke Sumthin' Ya Bish
  • wolfman91wolfman91 Posts: 101 ✭✭
    @FlyFreeCt Are u in GA? [/quote]

    Do you live in Atlanta Cig?

  • Lurkristocrat Lurkristocrat Posts: 8,221 ✭✭✭✭✭


    This a video mean my homie did. Let me know what you think. I'm Lazo.

    Who is the lightskin nigga? He was nice..the beat was aight, just aight...I like the hook..thats some get pumped up shit..its cool..my nigga out there in tie and shit, straight from the job interview..thats whats up..cool joint overall though.

    Song is kinda ass juice wont lie. I like the waddup part but the first nigga rappin with deacon swag was wack af and the mexican cat got flow but wasnt sayin much. Would wanna hear more tho.
  • Cigarello SlimCigarello Slim Legalize Never Criticize Posts: 2,641 ✭✭✭✭✭
    wolfman91 wrote: »
    @FlyFreeCt Are u in GA?

    Do you live in Atlanta Cig?

    [/quote]

    Yeah man from NY tho.
    Smoke Sumthin' Ya Bish
  • FlyFreeCtFlyFreeCt Posts: 4,375 ✭✭✭✭✭
    wolfman91 wrote: »
    @FlyFreeCt Are u in GA?

    Do you live in Atlanta Cig?

    [/quote]

    Yea I live in GA

    "FLY FREE Still scream it ti'll my dying minute/authentic nature all these hatin' niggas try to mimic/They don't understand the realness ain't a game or gimmick/Speak without restraints & limits-Ti'll somebody aim & end it"-CtK
  • Lurkristocrat Lurkristocrat Posts: 8,221 ✭✭✭✭✭
    After a charlotte battle event i was playin beats from the car and a fire ass cipha broke out featuring Big kannon, Bill Collector, Ty law, Tizzer and some local talent. Was such a dope night. Check it out. My bad on the portrait mode, i wasnt thinking lol.

    Part1


    Part 2
    Rum Middleton twenty2
  • twenty2twenty2 My Ideals May Not Be Ideal But I Deal...Posts: 229 ✭✭
    After a charlotte battle event i was playin beats from the car and a fire ass cipha broke out featuring Big kannon, Bill Collector, Ty law, Tizzer and some local talent. Was such a dope night. Check it out. My bad on the portrait mode, i wasnt thinking lol.

    Part1


    Part 2

    All them cats put in work...but hefty homie that closed out the first vid was spazzin! And since he was referrin to himself as "Bill" I'm gonna assume he was Bill Collector...LOL!...but homeboy was nice wit it too!

    Thread been kinda quiet... Here's some shit I did awhile back over the No Church In The Wild beat...

    https://twenty2.bandcamp.com/track/they-say
    5th LetterRum Middleton
  • Rum Middleton Rum Middleton Dedicated. Determined. Disciplined. Posts: 5,211 ✭✭✭✭✭
    twenty2 wrote: »
    After a charlotte battle event i was playin beats from the car and a fire ass cipha broke out featuring Big kannon, Bill Collector, Ty law, Tizzer and some local talent. Was such a dope night. Check it out. My bad on the portrait mode, i wasnt thinking lol.

    Part1


    Part 2

    All them cats put in work...but hefty homie that closed out the first vid was spazzin! And since he was referrin to himself as "Bill" I'm gonna assume he was Bill Collector...LOL!...but homeboy was nice wit it too!

    Thread been kinda quiet... Here's some shit I did awhile back over the No Church In The Wild beat...

    https://twenty2.bandcamp.com/track/they-say

    So many quotables in this shit..this shit flames..you sound like Royce a little...this is dope...you got a soundcloud, cause i'll follow this..this shit is my speed..
    Flytalk Specialist...
    twenty2
  • twenty2twenty2 My Ideals May Not Be Ideal But I Deal...Posts: 229 ✭✭
    twenty2 wrote: »
    After a charlotte battle event i was playin beats from the car and a fire ass cipha broke out featuring Big kannon, Bill Collector, Ty law, Tizzer and some local talent. Was such a dope night. Check it out. My bad on the portrait mode, i wasnt thinking lol.

    Part1


    Part 2

    All them cats put in work...but hefty homie that closed out the first vid was spazzin! And since he was referrin to himself as "Bill" I'm gonna assume he was Bill Collector...LOL!...but homeboy was nice wit it too!

    Thread been kinda quiet... Here's some shit I did awhile back over the No Church In The Wild beat...

    https://twenty2.bandcamp.com/track/they-say

    So many quotables in this shit..this shit flames..you sound like Royce a little...this is dope...you got a soundcloud, cause i'll follow this..this shit is my speed..

    'Preciate that homie! Royce one of the dopest so soundin even a little like him is definitely a compliment! HA!

    Twenty2mke is my soundcloud. I don't think I threw any of my loosies on there though. Think I just uploaded my last project and kinda left it. I may have to throw some more shit on there now that you brought my mind to it! LOL!
  • Rum Middleton Rum Middleton Dedicated. Determined. Disciplined. Posts: 5,211 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited October 12
    This my second release of the year...this called Big Leagues...whatever you do in life, and its time to step up to the plate and handle b.i...you in the Big Leagues...the words are below....enjoy..




    BOYZ IN DA HOOD INTRO

    Verse: 1
    I'm on a quest for bad bitches and good dope/
    3 Dutches (back to back, back) so I stay afloat/
    Throwin down shots of Hennessy, chase it wit the coke/
    Boooy I'm bout to blow, its your boy, Keynote, just know/

    Whoever takin shots, they're in the scope/
    They hang themselves, bring their body, just get the rope/
    I know killers that go to jail, just to drop the soap/
    For comin up short on dough, yeeeah they'll slit your throat/

    Its a dog-eat-dog world, I'm a Presa Canario/
    I rock the mic from the Hood to any Barrio/
    KeynoteGz, I'm a, One Man Army yo/
    Cut from a different cloth, built for many sce-NAR-ios/

    Oops, my bad, that's many scenarios/
    Watch them n****z, they singin just like canarys, yo/
    Snitches get their wings clipped, backyard get buried though/
    Think I'm out the park wit this one, this is that Barry Flow/

    (BREAK)

    Verse 2:
    I got these birds on my wood, no other n***a that's flyer/
    This the Big Leagues, im feelin like McGwire/
    Used to hit the street like a Michelin, tire/
    So I picked that mic up, started spittin that fire/

    You can put the mic down, Hip Hop aint for hire/
    I got a firm grip on the game like fuckin pliers/
    Kickin that hot shit, like im, fresh out the dryer/
    I aint even sold on your flow, get a new buyer/

    (YEAH) Flyin down Freddy in a blue Alero/
    Burin mota wit my Pandilleros/
    Wit some Red Raiders, (YEAH) like Graham Harrell/
    If they at your door late night, they aint singin Carols/

    Or my Blue flag n****z, they be swingin barrels/
    I don't bang, but one phone call can change, careful/
    This that gutter shit, real n****z got ears for/
    If you aint wit it, then what the fuck is you here for/
    Flytalk Specialist...
  • Peezy_JenkinsPeezy_Jenkins Posts: 33,034 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited October 12
    This my second release of the year...this called Big Leagues...whatever you do in life, and its time to step up to the plate and handle b.i...you in the Big Leagues...the words are below....enjoy..




    BOYZ IN DA HOOD INTRO

    Verse: 1
    I'm on a quest for bad bitches and good dope/
    3 Dutches (back to back, back) so I stay afloat/
    Throwin down shots of Hennessy, chase it wit the coke/
    Boooy I'm bout to blow, its your boy, Keynote, just know/

    Whoever takin shots, they're in the scope/
    They hang themselves, bring their body, just get the rope/
    I know killers that go to jail, just to drop the soap/
    For comin up short on dough, yeeeah they'll slit your throat/

    Its a dog-eat-dog world, I'm a Presa Canario/
    I rock the mic from the Hood to any Barrio/
    KeynoteGz, I'm a, One Man Army yo/
    Cut from a different cloth, built for many sce-NAR-ios/

    Oops, my bad, that's many scenarios/
    Watch them n****z, they singin just like canarys, yo/
    Snitches get their wings clipped, backyard get buried though/
    Think I'm out the park wit this one, this is that Barry Flow/

    (BREAK)

    Verse 2:
    I got these birds on my wood, no other n***a that's flyer/
    This the Big Leagues, im feelin like McGwire/
    Used to hit the street like a Michelin, tire/
    So I picked that mic up, started spittin that fire/

    You can put the mic down, Hip Hop aint for hire/
    I got a firm grip on the game like fuckin pliers/
    Kickin that hot shit, like im, fresh out the dryer/
    I aint even sold on your flow, get a new buyer/

    (YEAH) Flyin down Freddy in a blue Alero/
    Burin mota wit my Pandilleros/
    Wit some Red Raiders, (YEAH) like Graham Harrell/
    If they at your door late night, they aint singin Carols/

    Or my Blue flag n****z, they be swingin barrels/
    I don't bang, but one phone call can change, careful/
    This that gutter shit, real n****z got ears for/
    If you aint wit it, then what the fuck is you here for/

    solid lyrics n flow, delivery pretty good but kinda weird to hear a ny accent on a west coast type beat, kinda sounded like the 90's, also hook/break could be a lot better imo


    this one of my more recents, need feedback on the mixes as well that's the main thing I'm tryna get comfortable with

    https://www.audiomack.com/song/quiet-boy-millz/how-im-coming
    Scotty ATL feat. Bankroll Fresh-Thinkin Bout A Check



    Nebu Kiniza-Gassed Up



    Keef has quotables in the original that your remix isn't fuckin' wit.

    Them hoes they do it for Sosa
    Tadoe off the Molly water
    So nigga be cool like water
    Fore you get hit with this lava

    Bitch I'm the trending topic
    Don't care no price I'll cop it b
    And yo bitch steady jockin' me

    ....
    R.D. wrote: »
    You just don't know much about basketball

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    R.D. wrote: »
    And Wall isn't better than Rondo

    Even this moody, play when he want Rondo

    Give s2j his swag back n let him Mack disabled children in peace, lame ass nigga
    Rum Middleton
  • Rum Middleton Rum Middleton Dedicated. Determined. Disciplined. Posts: 5,211 ✭✭✭✭✭
    This my second release of the year...this called Big Leagues...whatever you do in life, and its time to step up to the plate and handle b.i...you in the Big Leagues...the words are below....enjoy..




    BOYZ IN DA HOOD INTRO

    Verse: 1
    I'm on a quest for bad bitches and good dope/
    3 Dutches (back to back, back) so I stay afloat/
    Throwin down shots of Hennessy, chase it wit the coke/
    Boooy I'm bout to blow, its your boy, Keynote, just know/

    Whoever takin shots, they're in the scope/
    They hang themselves, bring their body, just get the rope/
    I know killers that go to jail, just to drop the soap/
    For comin up short on dough, yeeeah they'll slit your throat/

    Its a dog-eat-dog world, I'm a Presa Canario/
    I rock the mic from the Hood to any Barrio/
    KeynoteGz, I'm a, One Man Army yo/
    Cut from a different cloth, built for many sce-NAR-ios/

    Oops, my bad, that's many scenarios/
    Watch them n****z, they singin just like canarys, yo/
    Snitches get their wings clipped, backyard get buried though/
    Think I'm out the park wit this one, this is that Barry Flow/

    (BREAK)

    Verse 2:
    I got these birds on my wood, no other n***a that's flyer/
    This the Big Leagues, im feelin like McGwire/
    Used to hit the street like a Michelin, tire/
    So I picked that mic up, started spittin that fire/

    You can put the mic down, Hip Hop aint for hire/
    I got a firm grip on the game like fuckin pliers/
    Kickin that hot shit, like im, fresh out the dryer/
    I aint even sold on your flow, get a new buyer/

    (YEAH) Flyin down Freddy in a blue Alero/
    Burin mota wit my Pandilleros/
    Wit some Red Raiders, (YEAH) like Graham Harrell/
    If they at your door late night, they aint singin Carols/

    Or my Blue flag n****z, they be swingin barrels/
    I don't bang, but one phone call can change, careful/
    This that gutter shit, real n****z got ears for/
    If you aint wit it, then what the fuck is you here for/

    solid lyrics n flow, delivery pretty good but kinda weird to hear a ny accent on a west coast type beat, kinda sounded like the 90's, also hook/break could be a lot better imo


    this one of my more recents, need feedback on the mixes as well that's the main thing I'm tryna get comfortable with

    https://www.audiomack.com/song/quiet-boy-millz/how-im-coming

    I aint even from NY....but even if I was, wouldnt that be cool and different though? Like a west coast nigga on a just blaze track, or jadakiss on a down south track...im gonna take that as a compliment though. .
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