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LUClENLUClEN Absence makes the heart grow fonder of someone elsePosts: 20,520 ✭✭✭✭✭
I've been working on making soundtrack kind of music, but my sound is very basic right now. I want some honest feedback, preferably with some comments about what is lacking or what could be better





The rapper from linkin park would body the dudes in the xxxtentacion cypher

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  • onetoughmiracleonetoughmiracle NY Giants Fan...Always Keep the Strap On You! Posts: 2,227 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Throne of Games is dope! I like the ominous feel to it. So far my only critique is to bring the organs (at least that's what I think they are) out more.
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    "I was told a long time ago, ghosts and spirits don't like the fumes from ether, and I just wanted to affect him with my weapon and get to his soul."


    I feel it's the only way. I don't feel a need to play the whole part in the entire movement. But, yo, if you just raise your family right, if I just live righteously, I be all right. Yo, my whole life is dedicated to change.
    LUClEN
  • LUClENLUClEN Absence makes the heart grow fonder of someone else Posts: 20,520 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Thats a woodwind section. I def need to bring it up if it sounds like organs lol

    I'll work on my volumes
    The rapper from linkin park would body the dudes in the xxxtentacion cypher
  • onetoughmiracleonetoughmiracle NY Giants Fan...Always Keep the Strap On You! Posts: 2,227 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Civil War is cool. I like the build up to the drum pattern. I really like the addition of the strings at the 0:53 mark. I would turn the volume down a little bit.
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    "I was told a long time ago, ghosts and spirits don't like the fumes from ether, and I just wanted to affect him with my weapon and get to his soul."


    I feel it's the only way. I don't feel a need to play the whole part in the entire movement. But, yo, if you just raise your family right, if I just live righteously, I be all right. Yo, my whole life is dedicated to change.
    LUClEN
  • LUClENLUClEN Absence makes the heart grow fonder of someone else Posts: 20,520 ✭✭✭✭✭
    @onetoughmiracle thanks for the feedback fam. This is honestly a new genre for me but I'm glad you liked one of the pieces. I'm hoping by next year I can get a song placed in a movie or tv show or something.
    The rapper from linkin park would body the dudes in the xxxtentacion cypher
    onetoughmiracle
  • onetoughmiracleonetoughmiracle NY Giants Fan...Always Keep the Strap On You! Posts: 2,227 ✭✭✭✭✭
    @LUCIEN you're welcome. Your scores are definitely dope! I hope you reach your goals.
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    tumblr_lxw7usrzQl1rns9m8o1_500.gif

    giants-helmet.jpg

    "I was told a long time ago, ghosts and spirits don't like the fumes from ether, and I just wanted to affect him with my weapon and get to his soul."


    I feel it's the only way. I don't feel a need to play the whole part in the entire movement. But, yo, if you just raise your family right, if I just live righteously, I be all right. Yo, my whole life is dedicated to change.
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