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thetruth391

TheEyeronic1 wrote: »

what does soundclick beats hafta do with my skillset as a LYRICIST?


not a FUCK.


and as far as the jae millz comparison goes.....nah, not at all.


if you were the first nigga rappin in that video, u are rapping like wiz and i can show u how, bro.


i wouldnt just say that shit for giggles.

k

but before we do all that you should listen to the zshare link i put up for a better idea of me as an artist

and yeah u sound like jae millz dude, either that or one of them new york grime era niggas, no hate

and your lyrics are very like see through. you didnt havta think to get em, whereas both of my verses in the vid require such

585music

ayyy check this out, sounds quality is kinda butt so just check it for lyricism, flow, etc

give some feedback plz!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wxd8Rgp6b9Q

TheEyeronic1

thetruth391 wrote: »

k

but before we do all that you should listen to the zshare link i put up for a better idea of me as an artist

and yeah u sound like jae millz dude, either that or one of them new york grime era niggas, no hate

and your lyrics are very like see through. you didnt havta think to get em, whereas both of my verses in the vid require such

see thru lyrics? what? if my shits is "see thru", your shits aint even there to see to begin with.


you aint TALKING about shit. even in your Kings Disertation. Talking about "your hooks made it but your concepts didnt"? nigga WHAT concepts are YOU bringing to the table? the 2 songs i've heard from you sound like structured free verses over original production.

TheEyeronic1

thetruth391 wrote: »

yeah im not diggin that song too much either, and smh @ i sound like wiz khalifa thats the first time i got that comparison

http://www.zshare.net/audio/819714188c40ec1c/

proofs in the pudding

and the fact that i didnt even know if it was you who was rapping like wiz and you come in here saying "i sound like wiz?" makes my statement all the more true.

all i said was "one person in that video sounds like wiz"

you obviously can hear it in some way shape or form.

chriskyte410717

Anybody check my shit out yet lol

TheEyeronic1

chriskyte410717 wrote: »

Anybody check my shit out yet lol

i will as soon as i get home.

thetruth391

^^^^no

and i figured itd be me cuz its no way in hell my mans sound like wiz. but thats fine with me though, one song out of many

and i dont make music "with a message" i make music that is appealing to listen to. my beats are good and my lyrics are better than the beats. had we had this exchange in a different fashion youd agree

Old Fart

LOL the dude started a thread and came off sounding like he wanted to show some love and support to fellow Reason MCs, then when they posted up, mofo switch and insult people's drops saying he better than everybody. Damn that's some hatin ass shit right there. That's the IC for yo ass

thetruth391

Old Fart wrote: »

LOL the dude started a thread and came off sounding like he wanted to show some love and support to fellow Reason MCs, then when they posted up, mofo switch and insult people's drops saying he better than everybody. Damn that's some hatin ass shit right there. That's the IC for yo ass

man it was a joke lol

well a half joke, it was only meant to stir friendly competition and bring some people to the thread. but eh

Old Fart

thetruth391 wrote: »

man it was a joke lol

well a half joke, it was only meant to stir friendly competition and bring some people to the thread. but eh

If you as nice as you say you are you shoud've gotten in this battle

http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?75787-IC-Freestyle-Tournament-General-Information

been some nice battles up in there so far

Old Fart

if you as nice as you say you are, you should've got up in this...

http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?75787-IC-Freestyle-Tournament-General-Information

Been some nice battles so far

chriskyte410717

just some more shit I did. a collaborative mixtape with my man Swish called The Playground. Here is the link

http://www.guiltypeople.org/music/the-playground-mixtape/

Its on Datpiff too if you wanna just listen to it

TheEyeronic1

Old Fart wrote: »

LOL the dude started a thread and came off sounding like he wanted to show some love and support to fellow Reason MCs, then when they posted up, mofo switch and insult people's drops saying he better than everybody. Damn that's some hatin ass shit right there. That's the IC for yo ass

im saying.


i came in here thinking "bet, this'll be an easy way to hear anybody on the IC who has talent". like i was genuinely excited to hear people express themselves.


then this nigga flips the script on some "im better" shit.


so if you wanted bring the niggas out to this thread....... bam, a nigga here. i'll tell you straight up: you're not garbage, but dont be in here thinking you are better than niggas. you aint shown shit to prove it.


stop it, 5.

Chillin&Postin

how you gonna diss soundclick beats,,,its some cats wit really good beats on soundclick...hrap on soundclick matter of fact,he got some real nice joints

585music

still tryin to get feedback on my shit
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wxd8Rgp6b9Q

Chillin&Postin

585music wrote: »

still tryin to get feedback on my shit
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wxd8Rgp6b9Q

first verse--- nice,nice flow

second verse---jus horrible

-third verse--awe ite

i like the concept of a posse joint cuz that beat gives me that 90's posse joint feeling,but only the second verse was worthy of the beat

get some better recording and i can see myself listening to whoever did the first verse on a regular basis... kinda remind me of doomtree

585music

Chillin&Postin wrote: »

first verse--- nice,nice flow

second verse---jus horrible

-third verse--awe ite

i like the concept of a posse joint cuz that beat gives me that 90's posse joint feeling,but only the second verse was worthy of the beat

get some better recording and i can see myself listening to whoever did the first verse on a regular basis... kinda remind me of doomtree

thanks for the feedback! were tryin to work on better recording and just keep improving

goobs

video nice

G.R.I.P. Money $$$

lol wtf happened in here...

let a young playa get some feed back too, i look to improve all da time...

BlackAX410

An old track I did

SheNLA

TheEyeronic1 wrote: »

no beats that i could think of. surprise me.

the strengths i hear are obviously in your flow and rhyme schemes. all u gotta work on is your actual delivery and strengthen your voice. and that shit all comes with more practice. it sounded like you recorded those songs while someone else was in a nearby room or something. the vocals were understandable, they just sounded like u didnt want to make too much noise while u were recording.

yea, all recorded in my laundy room & i download the instrumentals from youtube off my iphone and set it on my laptops keyboard then just use sound recorder & start speaking. i used kanye's "trouble" but couldnt find the instrumental this time & just talked over pusha haha. i think about making it longer but the quality erks me. just trying to see if i'm actually decent or should i consider being a ghostwriter? LOL

lyrics on youtube page

Lex!

Lex!


Lex!


Good Weed & Liquor

http://www.zshare.net/audio/8264347860a2afe9/

Limousine Lex!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/814200071bc0ebc2/

Old Fart

lmao...dude said "I'ma star not a D-R...I have no patience"

damn that line was corny as hell and dude said it like he was saying some hard ass shit. wow

chriskyte410717

nobody still aint download or check my shit out......smh for yall missing out lol

TheEyeronic1

^^i got it, i just havent listened.


just got back from a show.