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When She's Gone - By 2pacfan

TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,423 Regulator
edited November 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
When she's gone,

You can shed tears that she is gone.
Or you can smile because she has lived.
You can close your eyes and pray,
That she will come back,
Or you can open your eyes.
And see all that she has left.
Your heart can be empty,
because you can’t see her,
Or you can be full of love,
That you shared.
You can turn your back
Tomorrow and live yesterday,
Or you can be happy for tomorrow,
Because of yesterday.
You can remember her only
that she is gone.
Or you can cherish her memory
And let her live on,
You can cry and close your mind,
Be empty and turn your back,
Or you can do what she would want,
Smile, open your eyes, love, and go on.


By 2pacfan 11/23/2010
TWMorris

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  • DrMindbender122DrMindbender122 Posts: 1,553 ✭✭✭✭
    edited November 2010
    Excellent work. Is this about a loved one/relative or a guy thinking about a lost love? Either way, great poem.
  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,423 Regulator
    edited November 2010
    Excellent work. Is this about a loved one/relative or a guy thinking about a lost love? Either way, great poem.

    Thank you for reading first and foremost!

    It's for my friends, family, and loved ones for when I 'm gone.."she" is me.. With my current situation and everything, tomarrow isn't guranteed and therefore I was inspired to leave something for my folks for when she is gone.. remember "she" is me..

    Anyways thanks for reading and commenting.

    Peace!
  • L.I.P.L.I.P. Posts: 366 ✭✭✭
    edited November 2010
    I have this feeling about my mom sometime.......thanks for sharing this i might post something i have similar to this sometime.

    My favorite lines:

    "You can remember her only
    that she is gone.
    Or you can cherish her memory
    And let her live on,
    You can cry and close your mind,
    Be empty and turn your back,
    Or you can do what she would want,
    Smile, open your eyes, love, and go on. "

    good piece!
  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,423 Regulator
    edited November 2010
    L.I.P. wrote: »
    I have this feeling about my mom sometime.......thanks for sharing this i might post something i have similar to this sometime.

    My favorite lines:

    "You can remember her only
    that she is gone.
    Or you can cherish her memory
    And let her live on,
    You can cry and close your mind,
    Be empty and turn your back,
    Or you can do what she would want,
    Smile, open your eyes, love, and go on. "

    good piece!

    Thank you for reading and commenting! ESP from someone I enjoy reading them material :)

    You should share that poem your talking about.. I'd love to read it!

    and those lines are actually my favorite lines too.. ESP the last one because that's what I'd truly want my love ones to do..

    Thanks for the props btw..
  • Rocket KiddRocket Kidd Posts: 2,212 ✭✭
    edited November 2010
    this hit me right in the heart.
  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,423 Regulator
    edited November 2010
    this hit me right in the heart.

    I'm sorry :( I know its hard 1. Just think positive and hopefully their is positive results 4. If not, think of this poem and hopefully your heart will be at ease or give you some comfort 3.

    I feel bad!
  • goldenjagoldenja Posts: 6,301 ✭✭✭✭✭
    yo, is she really gone?!?
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  • RickyRichRickyRich almighty ricky rich Posts: 11,762 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Tupacfan wrote: »
    When she's gone,

    You can shed tears that she is gone.
    Or you can smile because she has lived.
    You can close your eyes and pray,
    That she will come back,
    Or you can open your eyes.
    And see all that she has left.
    Your heart can be empty,
    because you can’t see her,
    Or you can be full of love,
    That you shared.
    You can turn your back
    Tomorrow and live yesterday,
    Or you can be happy for tomorrow,
    Because of yesterday.
    You can remember her only
    that she is gone.
    Or you can cherish her memory
    And let her live on,
    You can cry and close your mind,
    Be empty and turn your back,
    Or you can do what she would want,
    Smile, open your eyes, love, and go on.


    By 2pacfan 11/23/2010

    thanks i will be using this into a rap
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  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,423 Regulator
    Dam this jawn hit hard still!!!! For the 2010!
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  • Vader_F_KennedyVader_F_Kennedy Behind MissKPosts: 17,700 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited September 2015
  • felliwondafelliwonda Posts: 395 ✭✭✭
    Dope poem I like what you did there I could relate to it about another she but after you explained who she would be I said ok I see i see lol good poem
    Arsenall
  • TupacfanTupacfan Posts: 2,423 Regulator
    felliwonda wrote: »
    Dope poem I like what you did there I could relate to it about another she but after you explained who she would be I said ok I see i see lol good poem

    I know i am extremely late but i appreciate that you digg this jawn I wrote. It is old, 7 years old.

    Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
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