Ayo somebody battle me...

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  • b.c.o.dcrub.c.o.dcru Posts: 206
    edited May 2011
    i not givin him the satisfaction of an answer

    That answer proves ur a girl
  • OFWGKTAOFWGKTA Posts: 1,202
    edited May 2011
    Blow a couple Ls, eyes lower then a chink
    Get your bitch wetter then a mother fucken sink
    I dont no what to think
    cause the last time i raped a bitch, the judge ordered me to see a shrink
    Pick my prey up at the local skating rink
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Posts: 4,488
    edited May 2011
    b.c.o.dcru wrote: »
    That answer proves ur a girl

    why and even if i was a girl so what
  • OFWGKTAOFWGKTA Posts: 1,202
    edited May 2011
    why and even if i was a girl so what

    he thinks girls are icky
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Posts: 4,488
    edited May 2011
    eat a couple girls,beautiful shade of pink
    make me blow my load like a mutha fuckin tank
    i dont know what to drink
    last time i approached a bitch i acted like a dink
    i spit game fuck if my breath stank
  • OFWGKTAOFWGKTA Posts: 1,202
    edited May 2011
    eat a couple girls,beautiful shade of pink
    make me blow my load like a mutha fuckin tank
    i dont know what to drink
    last time i approached a bitch i acted like a dink
    i spit game fuck if my breath stank

    you bit my flow man. why you do that. damn cuz thats fucked up.........
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Posts: 4,488
    edited May 2011
    OFWGKTA wrote: »
    you bit my flow man. why you do that. damn cuz thats fucked up.........

    sorry
    just fuckin around i thought you where spittin lines from tyler the creator
  • b.c.o.dcrub.c.o.dcru Posts: 206
    edited May 2011
    why and even if i was a girl so what

    Jus sounds like the reply of a female...i don't care if ur a dude or a girl.
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Posts: 4,488
    edited May 2011
    b.c.o.dcru wrote: »
    Jus sounds like the reply of a female...i don't care if ur a dude or a girl.

    your gender obsession leads me to wonder if your a male .or have you ever been romantically involved with a male?
  • RiGGARiGGA Posts: 1,849
    edited May 2011
    your gender obsession leads me to wonder if your a male .or have you ever been romantically involved with a male?

    lol .
  • b.c.o.dcrub.c.o.dcru Posts: 206
    edited May 2011
    your gender obsession leads me to wonder if your a male .or have you ever been romantically involved with a male?

    Obsession tho? Not only are u lonely but, dilutional. Fukouttahere wit that Internet fag shyt. Gone
  • love yallove yal Posts: 1,327
    edited June 2011
    look under that rock and you will see me
    these dope rhymes inject you like mosquitos till you nod
    knowing you will never rest against these bars
    you just cant do it in the same vein
    the things drained!
    love yals fate
    will be like in the last days of james coltrane
    if you wasnt offended then you now are!
    hurt as if i touched your gals bra
    or are you in awe
    and drop your jaw at tim mcgraw?
    do you love a ho down?
    whats your pronoun?
    him her shim sher uh...
    with a name like love yal wouldnt be a surprise what your gender was
    male or female i will still drag you through the mud

    You still the champ
    When you hear my flow
    No offense, winning is temperory
    Neurotic, no worry stop hating
    The name, I use it on weak combacks
    I'm too good that why you weak bastards
    Still love yal, lines like miltary piss off
    War on like rap revelation, yo lines can't match like Timothy
    Introduction you attack the wrong Isaiah, simply you become five face
    My lines too fast like wasp, even if you catch one, this isn't my girl
    Are you the girl or the boy, what does thedesolateon mean? But good battle verse
    like I got more, what's the deal with the summer tournament? and did I get better in my verse?
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Posts: 4,488
    edited June 2011
    love yal wrote: »
    You still the champ
    When you hear my flow
    No offense, winning is temperory
    Neurotic, no worry stop hating
    The name, I use it on weak combacks
    I'm too good that why you weak bastards
    Still love yal, lines like miltary piss off
    War on like rap revelation, yo lines can't match like Timothy
    Introduction you attack the wrong Isaiah, simply you become five face
    My lines too fast like wasp, even if you catch one, this isn't my girl
    Are you the girl or the boy, what does thedesolateon mean? But good battle verse
    like I got more, what's the deal with the summer tournament? and did I get better in my verse?


    i been watchin your verses and you definitely got better
    but some verses you rhyme better than others
    i think you got to just work on being clearer so others can understand what you're saying
    you still sound like a foreigner
    you need more practice with your english sentence structure and grammar
    your a hardworker ,keep it up and study more
    i suggest you focus on the verses you have already posted and tryin to improve them over and over till you hit the ceiling
    i will be in the tournament most likely to win again so it will be difficult to discredit me
    i hope their is an increase in voting in the summer tournament
  • love yallove yal Posts: 1,327
    edited June 2011
    look under that rock and you will see me
    these dope rhymes inject you like mosquitos till you nod
    knowing you will never rest against these bars
    you just cant do it in the same vein
    the things drained!
    love yals fate
    will be like in the last days of james coltrane
    if you wasnt offended then you now are!
    hurt as if i touched your gals bra
    or are you in awe
    and drop your jaw at tim mcgraw?
    do you love a ho down?
    whats your pronoun?
    him her shim sher uh...
    with a name like love yal wouldnt be a surprise what your gender was
    male or female i will still drag you through the mud

    You still the champ
    When you hear my flow
    No offense, winning is temperory
    Neurotic, no worry stop hating
    The name, I use it on weak combacks
    I'm too good that why you weak bastards
    Still love yal, lines like miltary piss off
    War on like rap revelation, yo lines can't match like Timothy
    Introduction you attack the wrong Isaiah, simply you become five face
    My lines too fast like wasp, even if you catch one, this isn't my girl
    Are you the girl or the boy, what does thedesolateon mean? But good battle verse
    like I got more, what's the deal with the summer tourment and did I get better in my verse?
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Posts: 4,488
    edited June 2011
    b.c.o.dcru wrote: »
    Obsession tho? Not only are u lonely but, dilutional. Fukouttahere wit that Internet fag shyt. Gone



    i see you evaded my question/s ? you sound closeted.i am willin to bet you have gay porn on your hard drive.here are some more questions you probably wont answer:how old are you?at what age did you discover you was gay if in fact you are gay?why do you say i am lonely.did you read your comments?and your sayin i am lonely.i hope thats was not a come on because i dont go that way sorry. nobody can comfort me like my rhymes.lol
    what do you have against gays anyway?are you one of them self-hatin gays?are you religious?
    first the discussion was if i am a male or female now its internet fag shit?wonder where your headed with this?
    i am gonna stay tuned.

    *plays pateintly waiting by 50 cent*
  • love yallove yal Posts: 1,327
    edited June 2011
    i been watchin your verses and you definitely got better
    but some verses you rhyme better than others
    i think you got to just work on being clearer so others can understand what you're saying
    you still sound like a foreigner
    you need more practice with your english sentence structure and grammar
    your a hardworker ,keep it up and study more
    i suggest you focus on the verses you have already posted and tryin to improve them over and over till you hit the ceiling


    Thanks, I'ma keep working on my english, hopely I can sound better than a twelve grader..lol
    My main focus like you said sound more clear, more sense, and better grammer...thanks again I'm keep working my verse
    Rhymes and punchlines are my favorite...how about you?
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Posts: 4,488
    edited June 2011
    love yal wrote: »
    Thanks, I'ma keep working on my english, hopely I can sound better than a twelve grader..lol
    My main focus like you said sound more clear, more sense, and better grammer...thanks again I'm keep working my verse
    Rhymes and punchlines are my favorite...how about you?

    im workin on my rhyme schemes,internal rhymes and four and five syllable rhymes
    and studyin url and grindtime battles on youtube and also famous rap battles like remy ma and lady luck
    i am working hard to develop lines that are multi-syllabic and punchlines simultaneously without sounding forced or predictable
    also i am studying rappers weaknesses
  • TriggyTriggy Posts: 137
    edited June 2011
    Damn left this shit slide for a minute, seen too many gimmicks,
    bunch of popeyes without the spinach, damn the kings back in this, time for sparks to fly
    i carved these guys, now he on some butterfly shit / soft like big titties bout to run a train on this broad,
    im kosher like a synague song, war to the day you gone, my robes fine italion silks and gold
    my mode, grip from snow bitches give up the kitty, i pimp on road, flip the script and hold, 38 calico blow the city
    my money fithy, move weight through states like a gypsy, plus im too pretty
    these niggas is jokes, your bicycle sick only thing you peddled thats dope, you man hoe
    i got a tangerine colored lambo, a light tanned viper like randall
    to cold to know, to hot to let go, im the champ, MK47 when i stamp, i got rank
    wall street stocks, to get bank !
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Posts: 4,488
    edited June 2011
    you soft your skin is pastry
    you said it your self that you blow the city
    give everyone dome
    get back in the closet with you gay fashion sense
    italian silks and fools gold
    you imagine dream cars you'll never own
    get your bars up cant fuck with my poems
    you throw like a girl fags shouldnt hurl stones
    just gonna get you bashed and left with broke bones
    wall street stocks ha! so ambitious now you dow jones
    i wouldn't envy you even if you rhymes werent so obviously fictitious
  • TriggyTriggy Posts: 137
    edited June 2011
    you soft your skin is pastry
    you said it your self that you blow the city
    give everyone dome
    get back in the closet with you gay fashion sense
    italian silks and fools gold
    you imagine dream cars you'll never own
    get your bars up cant fuck with my poems
    you throw like a girl fags shouldnt hurl stones
    just gonna get you bashed and left with broke bones
    wall street stocks ha! so ambitious now you dow jones

    i wouldn't envy you even if you rhymes werent so obviously fictitious

    thats ill, im out for now but imma be back to bash you mr.butterfly !
  • b.c.o.dcrub.c.o.dcru Posts: 206
    edited June 2011
    i see you evaded my question/s ? you sound closeted.i am willin to bet you have gay porn on your hard drive.here are some more questions you probably wont answer:how old are you?at what age did you discover you was gay if in fact you are gay?why do you say i am lonely.did you read your comments?and your sayin i am lonely.i hope thats was not a come on because i dont go that way sorry. nobody can comfort me like my rhymes.lol
    what do you have against gays anyway?are you one of them self-hatin gays?are you religious?
    first the discussion was if i am a male or female now its internet fag shit?wonder where your headed with this?
    i am gonna stay tuned.
    *plays pateintly waiting by 50 cent*


    ^allll that....internet gay shit. To tell the thruth you talk like a female. If you know the meaning of the name u chose u would get the lonely comment, and to end it off ur just dumb. The question was are YOU and male or female? I just made the assumption ur a female based off ur reply to the question.
    Now u wanna make me the target of questioning....neat trick but, ur just dumb off that do you tho. If u wanna battle we can do that cause going back and forth is for...you get what I'm sayin.
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Posts: 4,488
    edited June 2011
    b.c.o.dcru wrote: »
    ^allll that....internet gay shit. To tell the thruth you talk like a female. If you know the meaning of the name u chose u would get the lonely comment, and to end it off ur just dumb. The question was are YOU and male or female? I just made the assumption ur a female based off ur reply to the question.
    Now u wanna make me the target of questioning....neat trick but, ur just dumb off that do you tho. If u wanna battle we can do that cause going back and forth is for...you get what I'm sayin.

    set up the thread and rules
  • TriggyTriggy Posts: 137
    edited June 2011
    one two, we aint on what the desolate ones do,
    we come through with noise, we aint scared of dem boys
    let the sirens ring, we cover e'thing wit the scuba divers find the corpse when we win
    game finito, bout that papaya extract from puerto rico, the game thang, you don chi chi man butterfly screens
    we let the 9 milli metre, torch kings / even if you aint man enough to claim it
    i'll say it, 2 glock gats to laminate it
    my aim is, I.C champ battle record famous, couldnt even switch to some cartoon chat
    but i'd rather your face on that milk carton fast, you carlton banks, im big willie style got fresh prince stacks
    so put that shit on mute bruh, i distribute them keys like computers / the hard nigga from favella villas
    go back to being a caterpillar, the team serve herses on 4 wheelers
    im more realer !
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Posts: 4,488
    edited June 2011
    if your aim is ic battle record famous
    your gonna need more training
    your behind like caveman
    those punches you wailin
    have you surrounded by ominous ravens
    the aura of daemons
    leave you shook like an 8.7
    or three jasons
    cause you a little fruity like craisins
    my flow alone leave you lost in the caymans
    i put that work in
    i punch that mic around
    while you tryna get fresh at niketown
    i set hours aside
    i put that pen game down
    while you make drug deals on the other side of town
    your bars aint mature yet
    they underages
    pretendin you money makin
    when you sit around makin funny faces
  • tupacfantupacfan Posts: 2,344
    edited June 2011
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