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LE Tournament #2 ROUND ONE - Disciplined InSight -VS- frozenheartwjlb

raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
edited March 2011 in Lyrical Executions
Disciplined InSight -VS- frozenheartwjlb
  • Check in by Friday, March 25, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • Verses are due by Sunday, March 27, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • Voting will end on Tuesday, March 29, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Rules
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
5 votes first wins or most votes wins when voting is over.
3 votes to 0 votes is a KO.
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING!!!
Take criticism like a man. Everyone has their own opinion. Use the Predictions/🤬 Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread. Lastly, caught biting will disqualify you. Good luck.

Comments

  • Disciplined InSightDisciplined InSight The Clairvoyant One.... Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    Check one, two...
  • frozenheartwjlbfrozenheartwjlb Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    Count me in
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    Yo frozen, take your time homie. D.I. has skills. Interested to see how this one turns out. Verses due by tomorrow midnight E.T.
  • frozenheartwjlbfrozenheartwjlb Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    Yeah man. I checked his battle from the 1st tournament, he's good. This is the first battle rap I have done, so I am playing around with different punchlines right now. I should be droppin in the next hour or so.
  • frozenheartwjlbfrozenheartwjlb Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    I'm a militant, runnin on pure adrenalin,
    Preachin disciplin without proper InSite,
    He's really just a small man in need of Inzite,
    Victory is in my sights, my foots on your neck never coming off,
    Thinking your flows sick when its barely a cough,
    Prepare for the loss, I'm the voice of a generation,
    Contemplatin how you were already 🤬 , no 🤬 ,
    The reason you lost.. Your lyrics suffer constipation,
    No hesitation, I got the championship claimed, reservation,
    Gettin off on destroying you, I call it 🤬
    Never lacking motivation, I know my fate
    While you get 🤬 like a 🤬 , no second date
    Second rate lyricist tryin to step to me,
    When I know your flow, its fake Esco, you see,
    I'm ready for war, like a Kamikaze from Nagasaki,
    Steppin to Frozen just know it takes more than an A-Bomb to stop me.
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    this going to be good
  • frozenheartwjlbfrozenheartwjlb Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    Man... So D.I. missed the deadline?
  • Disciplined InSightDisciplined InSight The Clairvoyant One.... Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    I need an extension....
  • sniperksniperk Members Posts: 1,562 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    nah man... let D.I. post... i want my rematch from last tourney...
  • Disciplined InSightDisciplined InSight The Clairvoyant One.... Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    I seriously been working, and totally forgot about the deadline..if I can get an extension until tomorrow I would appreciate it.
  • frozenheartwjlbfrozenheartwjlb Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    I mean this is my first time doing these tournaments, so I don't know how it works. But the extension decision is up to Raw though right?
  • sniperksniperk Members Posts: 1,562 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    Just giving my two cents...

    Disciplined InSight is the reigning champ so we should give him the benefit of the doubt and let him post.

    Frozenheart you came raw with it and I think this battle could be an epic one.

    Would be a shame to see the champ of tourney #1 go out on a DQ.
  • frozenheartwjlbfrozenheartwjlb Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    It would be a 🤬 move if I was not cool with an extension, and besides no one wants to win on a DQ, winning that way makes my verse worthless. 24hrs is too long of one though. I would be down with giving him until Noon.
  • Disciplined InSightDisciplined InSight The Clairvoyant One.... Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    I'll drop this..I sent a PM for the extension...

    I'll 🤬 this poser with one snap in fact it's over.
    My prose a royal flush after 🤬 on you this match is poker.
    You lack composure, your punches failed this punk is frail.
    You Frozen so melt in my flames..just another chump in hell.
    You'll get stomped as well. A shame you're white from the D.
    You biting on one Eminem too many..it's not nice for the teeth.
    Ain't no fight in this geek. He'll die by his own devices.
    Paint this 🤬 like a still life..inaminate and lifeless.
    Pay the price it's over. Your spits 🤬 and low in spark.
    Take a ice pick to the chest..the only way to 🤬 a Frozenheart.
    So I'll concave your jaw and make this battle a short summary.
    One shot'll make you Niel, son..except this Naked Gun's no comedy.
    So prepare, stand..and fall without aid 🤬 your care plans.
    He's ripped in a grizzly manner..and I'm not using bear hands.
    I swear man..your verses soft your skull I'll break open.
    I'll leave ya face open..like snitches with buck 50's now the place soaking.
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    i really thought we had a upsetting about to happen but the rebuttal was strong from insight

    frozen heart going to be strong in these tourneys had flow and everything to win but insight threw some nice shots back

    I'll 🤬 this poser with one snap in fact it's over.
    My prose a royal flush after 🤬 on you this match is poker.
    You lack composure, your punches failed this punk is frail.
    You Frozen so melt in my flames..just another chump in hell.
    You'll get stomped as well. A shame you're white from the D.
    You biting on one Eminem too many..it's not nice for the teeth.
    Ain't no fight in this geek. He'll die by his own devices.
    Paint this 🤬 like a still life..inaminate and lifeless.
    Pay the price it's over. Your spits 🤬 and low in spark.
    Take a ice pick to the chest..the only way to 🤬 a Frozenheart.

    So I'll concave your jaw and make this battle a short summary.
    One shot'll make you Niel, son..except this Naked Gun's no comedy.
    So prepare, stand..and fall without aid 🤬 your care plans.
    He's ripped in a grizzly manner..and I'm not using bear hands.
    I swear man..your verses soft your skull I'll break open.
    I'll leave ya face open..like snitches with buck 50's now the place soaking.

    The bolded is what won me over the eminem teeth or cavities however u said it was 1 of my favs

    good battle though
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
    Frozen heart had some good bars, word play was on point.. The flow was grasped after reading into 3-4 bars. Came with creativity but I feel it lacked some punch lines.. Out of 10 I'd give it a 7 cause when its a battle, your going in for the gusto not the cream..

    Now, Di, came really strong. His verse was up to par, metaphor was nice, and had the multi's going.. And his punch lines hit harder than frozen. Over all, Di braught it.. And that's I love in battles!

    Therefore my vote goes to the champ DI..for all the reasons I've mentioned above..

    Thanks for letting me vote.. Peace!
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    frozenheartwjlb got the drive to spit. I'm sure it'll sound sick in audio but I wasn't seeing anything real hard worth quoting. Some boast but some personals. Lack of metaphors. Overall decent verse from frozenheartwjlb. Ad far as Disciplined InSight's verse goes, I've seen better. The D/teeth line was sick though. The rest of the verse ranged from decent to above average but it was enough to get my vote BC there wasn't as much filler. Vote - Disciplined InSight
  • sniperksniperk Members Posts: 1,562 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    I'm not going to lie, I was hoping for DI's downfall.

    Frozenheart had one of the doper verses I have seen on here in a minute and it SEEMED like he might have had DI a little shook.

    But DI spits out those multis and body blow punchlines so effortlessly that even my hating ass had to admit DI had the stronger verse.

    I'd like to see more of what Frozenheart has for us in the future because I have a feeling he was just warming up.

    MY VOTE: Disciplined Insight
  • love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
    This battle was very good, I enjoyed both verses from Frozenheartwjlb and Disciplined Insight

    Favorite line from Frozenheartwjlb: the reason you lost..your lyrics suffer constipation, no hesitation I got the championship clamied, reservation

    Favorite line from Disciplined Insight: he's ripped in a grizzly manner, and I'm not using bear hands I swear man your verse soft your skull I'll break open

    Both verse came strong

    Punches:tie
    Multies:tie
    Metaphor:tie
    Creativity:tie
    Structure:tie
    Flow: frozenheartwjlb

    Hard choice...my vote: frozenheartwjlb...stronger verse....good luck to both battlers.
  • deaththreatsdeaththreats Members Posts: 1,602 ✭✭
    edited March 2011
    REAL GOOD BATTLE...BOTH BATTLERS DID THEY THANG
    FROZEN:

    I'm a militant, runnin on pure adrenalin,
    Preachin disciplin without proper InSite,
    nice wordplay, decent jab, ok opener
    He's really just a small man in need of Inzite,
    Victory is in my sights, my foots on your neck never coming off,
    Thinking your flows sick when its barely a cough,
    decent punch on the end, 1st line was filler
    Prepare for the loss, I'm the voice of a generation,
    Contemplatin how you were already 🤬 , no 🤬 ,
    nice wordplay, decent jab, nice metaphor
    The reason you lost.. Your lyrics suffer constipation,
    No hesitation, I got the championship claimed, reservation,
    nice wordplay, nice multi's, nice metaphor
    Gettin off on destroying you, I call it 🤬
    Never lacking motivation, I know my fate
    While you get 🤬 like a 🤬 , no second date
    nice first line, ok jab on end
    Second rate lyricist tryin to step to me,
    When I know your flow, its fake Esco, you see,
    nice flow, nice wordplay, nice jab
    I'm ready for war, like a Kamikaze from Nagasaki,
    Steppin to Frozen just know it takes more than an A-Bomb to stop me.
    decent closer

    Insight:
    I'll 🤬 this poser with one snap in fact it's over.
    My prose a royal flush after 🤬 on you this match is poker.
    nice wordplay, nice multi's, nice jab, nice opener
    You lack composure, your punches failed this punk is frail.
    You Frozen so melt in my flames..just another chump in hell.
    nice wordplay, decent jab
    You'll get stomped as well. A shame you're white from the D.
    You biting on one Eminem too many..it's not nice for the teeth.
    nice wordplay, nice multi's hard punch
    Ain't no fight in this geek. He'll die by his own devices.
    Paint this 🤬 like a still life..inaminate and lifeless.
    nice wordplay, nice jab
    Pay the price it's over. Your spits 🤬 and low in spark.
    Take a ice pick to the chest..the only way to 🤬 a Frozenheart.
    solid punch, nice metaphor
    So I'll concave your jaw and make this battle a short summary.
    One shot'll make you Niel, son..except this Naked Gun's no comedy.
    nice set up jab and then solid punch
    So prepare, stand..and fall without aid 🤬 your care plans.
    He's ripped in a grizzly manner..and I'm not using bear hands.
    nice wordplay, hard metaphor at the end
    I swear man..your verses soft your skull I'll break open.
    I'll leave ya face open..like snitches with buck 50's now the place soaking.
    decent closer

    Punches: Insight had more landed shots
    Metaphors: tie
    Wordplay: Frozen edged him out
    Multis: Insight had more multis
    Structure: tie
    Overal Post: Insight took it when I count up line per line...

    Vote: Insight

    Frozen took on the champ and held his on wit this being his first text battle..much respect
  • frozenheartwjlbfrozenheartwjlb Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    Thanks for the input guys, I'm going to have to step my game up though for next time lol. D.I. next tournament I am coming for ya, haha. I might start working on my 16 now so when the time comes I will be on some No Vaseline/Ether type 🤬 haha. Good luck to everyone, and I look forward to seeing who takes this battle home. I am open for any open challenges, so get at me. I look forward to battling you guys.
  • Disciplined InSightDisciplined InSight The Clairvoyant One.... Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    No doubt..good battle Frozenheartwjib...
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    Congratulations Disciplined InSight. You're moving on. Next tournament in the summer frozenheartwjlb!!
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