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LE Tournament #2 ROUND ONE - Young-Ice -VS- b.c.o.dcru

raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
edited March 2011 in Lyrical Executions
Young-Ice -VS- b.c.o.dcru
  • Check in by Friday, March 25, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • Verses are due by Sunday, March 27, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • Voting will end on Tuesday, March 29, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Rules
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
5 votes first wins or most votes wins when voting is over.
3 votes to 0 votes is a KO.
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING!!!
Take criticism like a man. Everyone has their own opinion. Use the Predictions/🤬 Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread. Lastly, caught biting will disqualify you. Good luck.

Comments

  • b.c.o.dcrub.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    ...............yeah
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    You both are checked in and take your time BC I want to see a good battle. I know the both of you will come through.
  • b.c.o.dcrub.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    I was gonna post by tonite but, I kinda wanted Y-I to drop first...whatever happens I'm still droppin tonite
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    Young-Ice wrote: »
    i had to work this weekend

    as such, i would like a 48 hr extension please

    I can make verses due Monday night if your opponent agrees.
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    You need 2 more lines ^^^

    Mandatory 16 lines.
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    Young-Ice wrote: »
    no i only need 14 lines to beat him like premo

    No exceptions. If you don't want to follow the rules, I'll have to do what I did last tournament. Once your opponent posts his 16, the thread will be closed and won't be open to voting until you PM me your 16. You can edit your verse now until he posts his.
  • b.c.o.dcrub.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    Following ol' Nike slogans since yung swear 🤬 sweet
    phom at da mouth when I posit feet that skatter ya teeth
    He's like a 🤬 u can't trust never happy at home*
    U can always catch this 🤬 at the mall on da phone
    Prone ta get*blush on my fist when I catch u off guard
    Exposein bobby drakes brain when I split his eye pod
    *knockin dat baggy 🤬 off this 🤬 half pint frame
    light weight lame, ice in ya vains, but don't claim u tough
    *it's *evident when things get raw, *da yung boy freeze up
    Sun so rob vanwinkel wit non hedero flows
    There ain't no punch in ya lines, them just some rear end jokes
    Disapate this square, leave his shape befuttled, and what remains of ya existance are some Luke warm puddles
    Removing ya jaw, dislocate his arms wit dis rap 🤬
    fall in and outta love wit y'all loss confidence an he quit
    Sick wit da ice pick cru sculptin youngin paradyme shift
    *
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    Young-Ice
    I got a rolex flow 🤬 , watch your defeat
    You're not lebron - you can't rock wit the heat
    Sick 2nd line.
    Go get a map - cause you lost on a beat
    an Eye one like a cyclops from the street
    Kind of like the first line.
    You'll die like craps - i'm fly like bats
    You're 🤬 - paws like i high five cats
    This is kind of wack. Lol.
    You got no soul - like a pair of old kicks
    You're a sewer pipe 🤬 , everythin you flows 🤬
    Like it.
    You swing both ways tryna bi yourself skills
    And got your femail ass stamped and billed
    Decent first line.

    b.c.o.dcru
    Prone ta get*blush on my fist when I catch u off guard
    Exposein bobby drakes brain when I split his eye pod
    Kind of like the first line.
    *knockin dat baggy 🤬 off this 🤬 half pint frame
    light weight lame, ice in ya vains, but don't claim u tough
    Decent.
    *it's *evident when things get raw, *da yung boy freeze up
    Sun so rob vanwinkel wit non hedero flows
    Tight first line.

    Off the bat, both MCs had sick lines. Young-Ice edged b.c.o.dcru in the punch category IMO. On closer inspection, he also edged b.c.o.dcru on multis and wordplay. It was not as one-sided as I thought it was going to be. I picked out a few bars above to comment on. Vote - Young-Ice
  • sniperksniperk Members Posts: 1,562 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    Young Ice: after learning the difference between 16 bars and 14 bars (I know, I know... you were trying to say that you only needed 14 bars to 🤬 him), came with a nice tight verse... lots of multis... lots of punchlines... some funny... some witty... some wack as hell (raw pointed out the cat paws/pause one... though, in retrospect, if Lil Wayne said some 🤬 like this STANS would probably declare it the best punchline ever written)... Ice has got the type of flow that is easily accessible...

    b.c.o.dcru: Imma going to be honest, it took me a couple reads before I could understand the rhythm or the flow you were trying to come with... however, you didn't mess around and threw some angry-ass punches that I love to see in these battles...the "ice pick" line, young ice "freezing up" (and was that a little barb at raw material or am I reaching? "when things get raw") and the Vanilla Ice / Robert Van Winkle line previously mentioned.

    This was a close battle for me. For me, personally, a battle verse has to have punchlines, style, humour and originality... I think Young Ice had the slight edge today.

    VOTE: Young Ice
  • b.c.o.dcrub.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    Ice no showed in a battle wit raw...I ain't tryin sway votes but some lines goin over heads.
  • love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
    Both verse were nice...young ice came different with styles...but b.c.o.dcru came with stronger punches.

    Favorite line from young ice: you couldn't hold a candle to me with a menorah, I spit a plethora of rhymes to 🤬 you like ya live in gomorrah.

    Favorite line from B.c.o.dcru: light weight lame ice in ya vains but don't claim you thought it's evident when things get raw da young boy freeze.

    My vote: b.c.o.dcru

    Flow: tie
    Verse structure: young ice
    Metaphor:tie
    Rhymes: tie
    Creativity: tie
    Punches: b.c.o.dcru
  • Plop StarPlop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    i vote for the bc dude just because i dont like canadians
  • deaththreatsdeaththreats Members Posts: 1,602 ✭✭
    edited March 2011
    Plap Star wrote: »
    i vote for the bc dude just because i dont like canadians

    LMFAOOO....well damn...
  • deaththreatsdeaththreats Members Posts: 1,602 ✭✭
    edited March 2011
    NICE ASS BATTLE MAN...

    YOUNG ICE:

    I got a rolex flow 🤬 , watch your defeat
    You're not lebron - you can't rock wit the heat
    nice punch
    Go get a map - cause you lost on a beat
    an Eye one like a cyclops from the street
    nice setup, but the jab was light
    🤬 16s - no 🤬 i don't need mo
    Than fourteen lines to beat you like premo
    decent jab, decent trash talk
    Never fall, i stay up like an eagle
    You're a 🤬 , put it on the record like a needle
    ok jab
    You'll die like craps - i'm fly like bats
    You're 🤬 - paws like i high five cats
    nothing landed
    You got no soul - like a pair of old kicks
    You're a sewer pipe 🤬 , everythin you flows 🤬
    nice setup jab, decent punch
    You swing both ways tryna bi yourself skills
    And got your femail ass stamped and billed
    ok jab
    you couldn't hold a candle to me with a menorah
    i spit a plethora of rhymes to 🤬 you like ya live in gomorrah
    nice closer, nice metaphor, nice wordplay

    BCO:

    Following ol' Nike slogans since yung swear 🤬 sweet
    phom at da mouth when I posit feet that skatter ya teeth
    nice wordplay, decent jab
    He's like a 🤬 u can't trust never happy at home*
    U can always catch this 🤬 at the mall on da phone
    LMAO...nice punch coming from the avi
    Prone ta get*blush on my fist when I catch u off guard
    Exposein bobby drakes brain when I split his eye pod
    nice greasy talk, nice visual
    *knockin dat baggy 🤬 off this 🤬 half pint frame
    light weight lame, ice in ya vains, but don't claim u tough
    *it's *evident when things get raw, *da yung boy freeze up
    nice greasy talk, nice play off the clothes from avi, nice punch at the end
    Sun so rob vanwinkel wit non hedero flows
    There ain't no punch in ya lines, them just some rear end jokes
    nice set up jab wit the vanilla ice, and solid punch on the next line
    Disapate this square, leave his shape befuttled,
    and what remains of ya existance are some Luke warm puddles
    nice set up jab, and solid punch with the lukewarm puddle play off the name
    Removing ya jaw, dislocate his arms wit dis rap 🤬
    fall in and outta love wit y'all loss confidence an he quit
    Sick wit da ice pick cru sculptin youngin paradyme shift
    Nice closer

    Punches: bco (had the harder landing punches IMO)
    Structure: Tie
    Wordplay: Ice
    Metaphors: Tie
    Opener: Ice (had the better opening 2 bars)
    Closer: Tie
    Overall Post: BCO (line per line, to me he edged it)

    VOTE: TIE
    This was close, and I hate to vote Tie, but I would have felt guilty by giving it to either rapper just for the sake of not calling it like I seen it
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
    this was good battle..

    Lines that I like from young ice

    You got no soul - like a pair of old kicks
    You're a sewer pipe 🤬 , everythin you flows 🤬

    Lines that I like from b.c.o,

    Removing ya jaw, dislocate his arms wit dis rap 🤬
    fall in and outta love wit y'all loss confidence an he quit
    Sick wit da ice pick cru sculptin youngin paradyme shift

    that being said, both battlers came with the punch line, the multi's i digg from young ice, i had to re-read B.c.o verse a few times to get the jist.. young ice had flow though, B.c.o came with the metaphors..

    Like others stated, this was a close one and my vote today goes to........

    Young ice..

    because he brought creativity, flow up to par, multi's and nice punches..
  • frozenheartwjlbfrozenheartwjlb Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    I am going to have to say a tie as well. I agree with the dude above it was to close to call. Both had some sick lines, and both had some lines that were just kinda 'ehh'. It was evenly matched, and I feel like both could have came harder. But thats just my opinion. But I would'nt want to settle this battle based on a 🤬 vote, when I honestly think it was a dead lock.
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    Damn. Close battle! It's a shame only one can move on. Congrats Young-Ice. Hope you enter the next tournament b.c.o.dcru!
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