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LE Tournament #2 ROUND ONE - thedesolateone -VS- Plap Star

raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
edited March 2011 in Lyrical Executions
thedesolateone -VS- Plap Star
  • Check in by Friday, March 25, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • Verses are due by Sunday, March 27, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • Voting will end on Tuesday, March 29, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Rules
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
5 votes first wins or most votes wins when voting is over.
3 votes to 0 votes is a KO.
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING!!!
Take criticism like a man. Everyone has their own opinion. Use the Predictions/🤬 Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread. Lastly, caught biting will disqualify you. Good luck.

Comments

  • Plop StarPlop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    Put me in the game coach
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    deal me in
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    round 1 other words guess this egghead is breakfast he'll be salted
    after i strait cook him, face lookin like brian peppers; real 🤬
    you'll never be successful though your name is plap star
    because my heat will burst you till you're a collapsed star
    when my gat goes plap! the sound off turns you around like your name was now called
    if we have to be at odds i prostitute your sister , pimpslap your childs moms
    have her fake teeth broke let all of them freaks know about thedesolateone's peepshow
    starrin plaps milf, and lesson one's: 🤬
    🤬 all over her black 🤬 like lukes freakshow located in plap city
    need to call the coroner after im finished 🤬 her
    your sister is like lebrons free throws : money shots in florida
    talked 🤬 🤬 in your wack bars you really capin; i really mack broads
    let random 🤬 🤬 in your sisters slacked jaws
    Star from the sunshine state of rick ross; COs pointing 🤬 out at trial
    detectives take a p out of plap , read his name from the back:
    hes a rats pal ; mike jack on his 2nd album
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    Nice!

    Verses due by tomorrow before midnight ET, Plap Star. Good luck!
  • Plop StarPlop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    they call me plap because i grind tight
    im that lil 🤬 that done hit more licks than a 🤬
    always come from left field they say my mind aint right
    cause ill do some 🤬 🤬 like snitch and get you 20 to life
    you do 20 get out and i murk you on sight
    just so i can say im the only 🤬 who sent to somebody to hell twice
    funny how i got yo sister she caught me in yo house with no clothes on
    before you kno it hers was gone and yo mother walked out with my shorts on
    i 🤬 em both but that aint the only thing that got my homeboys laughin
    yo mama introduce me at family reunions as her son in law and her baby daddy
    and im banned from boston my problem solving became a public nuisance
    because the nesw cut off the celtics game to talk about how i was shooting
    talkin player 🤬 but everybody know desolate 🤬 aint got no hoes
    tryin to study me but real players know players get chose
    and these hoes get wet when they hear about my cashflow
    i had no choice but to be the 🤬 cause my pops was an 🤬
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    IDK. This was a real hard battle to judge. Nothing specifically jumped out at me. I'd vote a tie but I don't like taking the easy way out. I want someone to win. First, I'll talk about what I liked. In thedesolateone's verse, I liked the first line, the money shots in florida line, and he stayed battling. As for Plap Star, his first 4 lines were not battle oriented IMO. That's a mistake to waste 25% of your verse right off the bat on upping yourself. I felt though the rest of the verse was decent enough but was fighting an uphill battle because thedesolateone's creativity stayed jabbing, was consistent. Vote - thedesolateone
  • sniperksniperk Members Posts: 1,562 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    thedesolateone: had me laughing right outta the gate... even though this verse isn't going to win points based on style or lyrical dexterity, it was the funniest battle rhyme I have read thus far... the whole bedroom scenario reminded me of one of those grimey songs MC Ren used to spit back in the day that would make you laugh and cringe at the same time (the things he would do to people with 'broomsticks'...LOL)...des one smacked around Plap Star pretty bad with his lines...

    PlapStar: flow was a bit nicer... came out the gate with a cocky swagger that can sway a crowd to your side in a battle... "feeding" a little bit with his own version of events about what he would do to desolateone and his moms, sister, etc... but that 🤬 was funny too so I'm not going to take off any points for that... raw material touched on part of the problem with the verse though, too much taking about yourself and not enough about your opponent... all right to brag at the start of your verse but you don't want to waste valuable lines bragging at the close... that's where you need to hit them with the knockout blow...

    VOTE: thedesolateone
  • love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
    Good match between Thedesolateone vs Plap star both came strong.

    Favorite line from Thedesolateone: round 1 other words guess this egg head is breakfast will be salted after I strait cook him, face looking like brain pepper 🤬
    Favorite line from Plap Star: always come the left field they say my mind anit right... I'm banned from Boston my problem solving became a public nuisance.

    Punches: thedesolateone
    Flow: tie
    Creativity: tie
    Multies: tie
    Structure: tie
    Metaphor: thedesolateone
    Personals: tie

    My vote: Thedesolateone....Plap star verse was interesting but Thedesolateone verse was stronger...good luck to both battlers.
  • deadpoolRKOdeadpoolRKO Members Posts: 441
    edited March 2011
    this was a ridiculously awesome battle.

    Desolate's verse was nice with punches and metaphors.
    that Collapsed star line was so ill.


    My votes for Plap Star.

    That " Sent someone to hell twice " line and his whole verse was consistent with flow and it made me laugh multiple times.
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
    dang, this was a nice battle, i thourougly enjoyed this..

    But right off the bate, I have to give to desolateone, he really came thru and battled all the way.. the punch lines hit hella hard too lol.. that's tight.. i'm definitely taking notes hahaha.. But i digg the metaphors, the multis, out of all battles, by far this is one of his great piece imo..

    Moving on, palp star came with it too, but it didn't hit as hard as desolateone.. but i like the flow though.

    Good luck to both of ya'll..

    Peace!
  • Plop StarPlop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    preciate the advise
    and when i saw his vere i was like damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn but im comin back next tournament to get in somebody ass
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    i still have no idea what plap means can you fill me in, is it florida slang?

    i like to thank all the voters for doing what they do even if you voted against me thnks for providin your attention and judgin
    i got three votes in a row so i think thats a rap
    i wanna thnk plap star for showin up to the battle and competin
    i was a little unsure if i should post first cause by readin his threads i saw he was kinda witty im sure he will be better prepared in his next battle
  • Plop StarPlop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    i still have no idea what plap means can you fill me in, is it florida slang?

    i like to thank all the voters for doing what they do even if you voted against me thnks for providin your attention and judgin
    i got three votes in a row so i think thats a rap
    i wanna thnk plap star for showin up to the battle and competin
    i was a little unsure if i should post first cause by readin his threads i saw he was kinda witty im sure he will be better prepared in his next battle

    lol cant let you know what that means but good battle you did that 🤬
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    Young-Ice wrote: »
    plap = a slap to the face using the 🤬

    good lookin out on the decipherin . i never heard of that but it makes sense.
    wished i knew that before the tournament
  • frozenheartwjlbfrozenheartwjlb Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    Both came hard, nothing to fancy just some solid verses. I agree with Raw that nothing really jumped out at me. My favorite line from thedesolateone was, "need to call the coroner after im finished 🤬 her
    your sister is like lebrons free throws : money shots in florida" that 🤬 was tight. My favorite line from plap was, "funny how i got yo sister she caught me in yo house with no clothes on
    before you kno it hers was gone and yo mother walked out with my shorts on" lmao that 🤬 had me laughin. My vote goes to Plap Star, he had the humor on his side. And when I am listen to rap battles I like to hear comedy jabs more than anything else. Props to both and goodluck.
  • Plop StarPlop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    Young-Ice wrote: »
    plap = a slap to the face using the 🤬

    thats the most creative thing anybody guessed
  • Plop StarPlop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    Young-Ice wrote: »

    lol thats run by crackers, somethin gotta be in the streets 10 years before it get on there

    we only at 4
  • Plop StarPlop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    Young-Ice wrote: »
    11. Plap

    buy plap mugs, tshirts and magnets

    To 🤬 out 🤬 onto another person's face.
    "My girlfriend spat 🤬 up my 🤬 last night so i plapped 🤬 outta her"

    lmao 🤬 no, you might as well start the "what does plap mean" thread
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    Hoping to see you in the next tournament Plap Star! thedesolateone moving on. 2nd round threads going up very soon.
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