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LE Tournament #2 ROUND ONE - tupacfan -VS- deadpoolRKO

raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
edited March 2011 in Lyrical Executions
tupacfan -VS- deadpoolRKO
  • Check in by Friday, March 25, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • Verses are due by Sunday, March 27, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • Voting will end on Tuesday, March 29, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Rules
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
5 votes first wins or most votes wins when voting is over.
3 votes to 0 votes is a KO.
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING!!!
Take criticism like a man. Everyone has their own opinion. Use the Predictions/🤬 Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread. Lastly, caught biting will disqualify you. Good luck.

Comments

  • deadpoolRKOdeadpoolRKO Members Posts: 441
    edited March 2011
    i'm right hurr right hurr
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
    check check check checking in..
  • deadpoolRKOdeadpoolRKO Members Posts: 441
    edited March 2011
    okay so , i know you're a female , normally it's ladies first. but I got 🤬 to do tommorow. So imma go head.



    ahem.


    I'm in my zone right now, like a 1-3-1



    I heard the outside of your 🤬 looks like chewed up gum.



    I'm new to the IC , But I C that you're see through.



    The whole IC will C U , get put in ICU.




    I don't ever sleep , i might as well cut off my eyelids.



    You look like Billy Ray Cyrus came down with the AIDS Vi-riss



    I don't make Tennis Supplies but i'm makin a racket



    Reppin the East Coast like a play for the Magic.



    Come around my hood , actin stupid




    All you'll hear is gunshots like Waka Flocka's music.




    I'm spittin like Porky pig or a pastor gettin his P's wrong



    If i wasn't broke as 🤬 i'd get a caddy and Throw some D's on



    I'm not from St. Louis but i 🤬 with Murphy Lee



    Ambidextrious when i box , so what the 🤬 the hook gonn be ?



    yes imma white kid, but please no comparisons to Eminem


    you're just a washed up old female rapper tryna get attention... Lil Kim.
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    Excited to see what tupacfan has. Good luck to both of you.
  • deadpoolRKOdeadpoolRKO Members Posts: 441
    edited March 2011
    Excited to see what tupacfan has. Good luck to both of you.

    i was / am too.


    so .. its monday and verses were do sunday. what's that mean ?
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
    My apologize I'm late as 🤬 . I ain't know the due date was Sunday.. I didn't read thru the rules..

    Anyways, I'm gonna still post my verse in a few minutes... it ain't like I'm 24 hours late..opearating on west coast time ya'll :)
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
    Microphone checka, this is the return of the real mecca 1

    New battle, new day, new scene, same mission with a vision for these sucka's 2

    I don’t care if your in lyrical execution, your bars ain’t smoove me, 3

    You’s frail like a 🤬 with no 🤬 , 4

    Rip you apart with my lyrical cynical at its pinnacle 5

    Your see through like a veil with ya’ mama’s wedding gown, so I’mma teach you a lesson 6

    Stay in your lane, I’m a cold tyrant, a beast with no leash armed with my Smith & Wesson 7


    Like the West I’ll bomb on you like Ghadaffi in the Middle Eastern. 8

    I smell 🤬 kats like you from afar, call me out, your in for a war. 9

    Herd you carry fishes so you could smell like a 🤬 , you tryna hang with the girls? 10

    You soft like vanilla swirls, the new kid on the block, 11

    That’s been dropped and got popped not 1, 2, but 4 pop shot. 12

    On my phoenix block we feast on new 🤬 like you that don’t spit hot 13

    🤬 you and your battle wishes like a snitch 🤬 you better off cleaning my dishes, I’ll cake ya spot and ya riches, 14

    I’m straight O’g not some straight 🤬 playing hide n seek, You’s a mama’s girl, playing with ya mama’s PC, 15

    you ain't build for rhyme fitness, this is survival of the fittest..16
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    Young-Ice wrote: »
    can other battlers vote?

    Yep. In the first round, anyone can vote. In the later rounds, you can't vote on a battle if that winner will face the winner of you and your opponent.
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    I hate to say this but it wasn't even close. deadpoolRKO was boasting on 11/16 of his lines whereas tupacfan was only boasting on 2/16. The way I see it, boasting are punches that are misses and battle oriented rhymes range from slaps, to jabs or power punches. So seeing deadpoolRKO only had 5 punches to tupacfan's 14, the only way he would win is if he threw some crazy power punches BC tupacfan came out to fight. She didn't waste time talking about herself. The sad things is neither MC had anything worthy of quoting. Maybe a slap or a jab here and there, but nothing that made me say DAMN. Gotta give my vote to tupacfan but whoever ends up moving on, I hope they focus more on trying to come up with something sick. Maybe some personals that'll hurt. Vote - tupacfan
  • sniperksniperk Members Posts: 1,562 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    deadpoolRKO: his verse made me laugh... he actually had some funny lines in there... a little bit corny but in a good way... I think raw-material is being a little harsh because I thought the battle was a little bit closer than he made it out to be... deadpool's flow was really basic and reminded me of those freestyles people like Kurtis Blow and Busy B would have back in the day... "bread to the butter, butter to the bread, if you acted your age then you probably be dead...uh-who-ha-ha...LOL"

    tupacfan: right off the top, superior flow...multis... some nice punchlines... verse a little disjointed at times but I just pictured her growling like DMX everytime she threw barb at her opponent with a mean grill to match (don't let the pic fool you, tupacfan can get raw with it)... her battle experience showed

    MY VOTE: Tupacfan
  • love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
    The match with deadpoolrko vs tupacfan was cool match

    Favorite line from deadpoolrko: yes I'mma white kid, but please no comparision to enimem, you're just a washed up old female rapper trnya get attention..Lil Kim

    Favorite line from tupacfan: rip you apart with my lyrical cynical at it's pinnacle....and like the west I'll bomb on you like Ghadaffi in the Middle Eastern.

    My vote goes to Tupacfan...because she had a stronger verse

    Flow: tupacfan
    Metaphor: tie
    Rhymes: tie
    Creativity:tie
    Punches: tupacfan

    Good luck to both battlers.
  • deadpoolRKOdeadpoolRKO Members Posts: 441
    edited March 2011
    Thanks for the love. My first battle.

    Good 🤬 tupacfan.


    Damn Raw , you barely got enough to do this tourney. You keep being that harsh on new rappers you'll never build this up.
  • Plop StarPlop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    both were kinda lazy to me...they could have came better

    but deadpool i feel like you were more writing a verse for a song than a battle

    and tupacfan tried to came at him almost every line

    so i give it to tupacfan
  • Rocket KiddRocket Kidd Members Posts: 2,212 ✭✭
    edited March 2011
    loved the aggression coming from Tupacfan...

    my vote- Tupacfan
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
    Thank's to aye body's votes.. preciate that..

    My opponent, keep doing ya thang and thank you for the battle!


    I'm definitely going to be cooking up some marvelous 🤬 , in the words of raekwon the chef...
  • frozenheartwjlbfrozenheartwjlb Members Posts: 206
    edited March 2011
    Now if that is tupacfans real picture she gets my vote :) lol just messing, its cool to see her doing her thing on here. Most girls would stray away from doing this. Both verses were alright, but she had way more punches. My favorite lines from deadpoolrko were his ending "I'm not from St. Louis but i 🤬 with Murphy Lee, Ambidextrious when i box , so what the 🤬 the hook gonn be ?, yes imma white kid, but please no comparisons to Eminem, you're just a washed up old female rapper tryna get attention... Lil Kim." I feel if he would have kept his whole verse in that fashion he would have had this battle won. It was just too long of a build up, good to know I was not the only one worried about Eminem/Vanilla Ice references. But tupacfan just killed him with this line "🤬 you and your battle wishes like a snitch 🤬 you better off cleaning my dishes, I’ll cake ya spot and ya riches" and "Stay in your lane, I’m a cold tyrant, a beast with no leash armed with my Smith & Wesson ". My vote tupacfan, keep it up though deadpoolrko I would like to battle you sometime soon. Goodluck guys.
  • nex ginnex gin Keep It Simple Stupid Members Posts: 10,698 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    Tupacfan FTW
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    Thanks for the love. My first battle.

    Good 🤬 tupacfan.


    Damn Raw , you barely got enough to do this tourney. You keep being that harsh on new rappers you'll never build this up.

    Lol. My bad. I didn't know you were knew. To this forum yeah but I didn't know you just started rapping. The way I see it is both battlers are throwing punches at each other and when they aren't talking about who they are battling since this is a battle, then those punches are misses (IMO). It's all good though. You got skills.

    tupacfan moving on. GL!
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