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LE Tournament #2 ROUND ONE - C.Melendez -VS- ItzGravitation

raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
edited April 2011 in Lyrical Executions
C.Melendez -VS- ItzGravitation
  • Check in by Friday, March 26, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • Verses are due by Sunday, March 27, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
  • Voting will end on Tuesday, March 29, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Rules
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
5 votes first wins or most votes wins when voting is over.
3 votes to 0 votes is a KO.
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING!!!
Take criticism like a man. Everyone has their own opinion. Use the Predictions/🤬 Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread. Lastly, caught biting will disqualify you. Good luck.
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Comments

  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited March 2011
    Checking in now
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    im here turn my mic up...turn me down
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    just saw this thread haven't been on but if im dqed im good if not i'll whip up a verse real quick for sun
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited March 2011
    so i can drop my verse whenever aye?
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited March 2011
    i guess i'll wait to see if its still going
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    You both are checked in. Verses can drop anytime. Good luck.
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited March 2011
    ok i'll have my verse in by tonight
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited March 2011
    C.Melendez, square like Sodoku,
    , I’m just saying like Goku
    Or Gohan, I run it like a Shogun
    You tongue kiss the hoe and I just busted on yo hoe tongue.
    Who you think you 🤬 with? We aint gangbanging on Beyonce.
    I'm lava you picante, i'll eat you an entree
    Ill with the pen, murder Inc, no Ashanti.
    I kick it all day like soccer you just a punt play
    The winner takes it all like that song by ABBA.
    I hulk smashed this 🤬 Bruce Banner full of Gamma
    My radiance it radiates, shining like a constellation.
    Melendez, i'm unimpressed, like constipation.
    I dont give a 🤬 , like a window pane, you see through.
    I'm down right fierce like Hadoukens from Ryu.
    By the way i'm jewish, this 🤬 Hebrews.
    I am number four, fireman, C2
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    C.Melendez, square like Sodoku,
    , I’m just saying like Goku
    Or Gohan, I run it like a Shogun
    You tongue kiss the hoe and I just busted on yo hoe tongue.
    I go dumb; I go nuts, you sweeter than a donut.
    I’m bout to act a donkey you a white girl with no butt.
    The first verse was the worst the ppl said it wasn’t sick enough.
    You know that 🤬 is, 🤬 ridiculous.
    I hope that’s not biting, if it is may the lightning.
    Start striking, me times ten before the night end.
    The winner takes it all like that song by ABBA.
    I hulk smashed this 🤬 Bruce Banner full of Gamma
    My radiance it radiates, shining like a constellation.
    Melendez, i'm unimpressed, like constipation.
    I dont give a 🤬 , like a window pane, you see through.
    I'm down right fierce like Hadoukens from Ryu.

    aight fam decent 🤬
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    last battle I lost, 1st round with bad explanations/
    he or she not feeling tis...obviously 🤬 hating/
    got yall *snooping* around to peep the flow....slowly *catching vapors*/
    Only 1 thing better than beating this 🤬 ....Its stacking papers/
    A 🤬 bound to *fall* tonight by my *theory* *Its Gravitation*
    Grav got *wicked* rhymes but Melendez here....His matches *Satan*/
    Imma grab his face and, beat him to a pulp
    Taste from the cup of defeat?....Nah Grav's taking a gulp
    Heard the kids nice but not when compared to I the adult
    *Lyrical Execution* taking place...Im compared to *Adolph*
    Machete bleeding him here,walk away smoothly but leaving him here
    🤬 his funny lines ain't no comedians here (liking men line extra "funny")
    But Keep *snicker*ing I got a gun *Kit* for *kat*
    *Good bars* out of the rapper I stay kicking that
    He's *butterfingers* with the Mic...he ain't firmly gripping it
    Milky smooth flow like Nestle during Crunchtime...check me spitting it
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited March 2011
    nice verse.you can change that line about me liking men tho since i changed it
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
    I'll be back to vote on this tomorrow!
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited March 2011
    ItzGravitation had some clever lines spread throughout his verse form the window pane/haduken line to the opener. There were also pretty basic lines too like the murder inc/punt play line and the shogun/hot tongue line. C.Melendez only basic line to me was his opener set but after that, he went hard. Gotta say, C.Melendez verse kind of impressed me from the vapors/papers line to the Gravitation/satan line to the kat/that line and the closer. It was sick. Wack thing is, ItzGravitation's verse wasn't wack at all. Better than average IMO but C.Melendez caught fire. Best verse I've seen from him in awhile. Plus, most of C.Melendez's lines were battle oriented, meaning directed at ItzGravitation. Vote - C.Melendez
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    C.Melendez wrote: »
    last battle I lost, 1st round with bad explanations/
    he or she not feeling tis...obviously 🤬 hating/-talk of past battles
    got yall *snooping* around to peep the flow....slowly *catching vapors*/i dont get the asterisks
    Only 1 thing better than beating this 🤬 ....Its stacking papers/-called opponent a 🤬
    A 🤬 bound to *fall* tonight by my *theory* *Its Gravitation*-good wordplay
    Grav got *wicked* rhymes but Melendez here....His matches *Satan*/nice line
    Imma grab his face and, beat him to a pulp-good set up set up
    Taste from the cup of defeat?....Nah Grav's taking a gulp- nice punchline
    Heard the kids nice but not when compared to I the adult-nice-filler
    *Lyrical Execution* taking place...Im compared to *Adolph*-filler but nice lines not attacking opponent though
    Machete bleeding him here,walk away smoothly but leaving him here
    🤬 his funny lines ain't no comedians here (liking men line extra "funny")
    But Keep *snicker*ing I got a gun *Kit* for *kat*-nice set up and wordplay
    *Good bars* out of the rapper I stay kicking that -more braggin about your bars but not really attackin opponent
    He's *butterfingers* with the Mic...he ain't firmly gripping it-
    Milky smooth flow like Nestle during Crunchtime...check me spitting it

    mostly braggadocious material but really good wordplay my vote goes to itz gravitation because his verse was aimed more at the opponent even though it was simple
  • sniperksniperk Members Posts: 1,562 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    I know I'm allowed to place a vote here but since I'm battling the winner of this match, I'm going to sit this one out.

    Nice verses from the both of you.

    See you next round.
  • love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
    The match between C. Melendez and ItzGravitation was very interesting battle...they both different styles

    Favorite lines from ItzGravitation- I kick it all day like soccer you just a punt play, the winner takes it all like that song by Abba
    Farorite lines form C. Melendez- Lyrival Execution talking place I'm compared to Adolph Machete bleeding him here, walk away smoothly but leaving him here.

    But my vote goes to C.Melendez because came with a stronger verse...but good luck to both battlers keep the good work.
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    mostly braggadocious material but really good wordplay my vote goes to itz gravitation because his verse was aimed more at the opponent even though it was simple
    playing on the fact i lost last battle and yall would catch on to this battle.....Snoop Dogg song The Vapors
  • deadpoolRKOdeadpoolRKO Members Posts: 441
    edited March 2011
    , I’m just saying like Goku



    Am i the only one who caught this ?

    i'm just Saying like Goku = I'm just SAYAIN like Goku

    that was a nice line.

    Melendez was nice with the wordplay , but My votes for ItzGravitation.

    Overall i liked his verse better and it had more nice diss lines imo
  • Plop StarPlop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    gravitation started off slow but picked it up after a while............i liked the muder inc, no ashanti 🤬 and the i kick it all day like soccer you just a punt play.....the rest of it was okay

    melendez had some nice wordplay, and a flow wit his but i gotta give it to...........

    Gravitation
  • Plop StarPlop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    Am i the only one who caught this ?

    i'm just Saying like Goku = I'm just SAYAIN like Goku

    that was a nice line.

    Melendez was nice with the wordplay , but My votes for ItzGravitation.

    Overall i liked his verse better and it had more nice diss lines imo

    that sayin 🤬 went right over my head
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
    i enjoyed this battle, it was versatile with lot's of word play from both sides..


    any more votes on this??

    if so, I'm gonna have to vote for C.melendez because his word play was just sick, altho It'sgrav's verse was up to par too, but i felt like he was light weight on the punch lines, honestly i was expecting an all out battle lol. Idk why i had those expectations but eventually it came to surface.
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited March 2011
    i'm done with these txt battles cuz you guys must judge by a different standard than the real world.
    i dont even see this sick wordplay you guys speak of or these weak lines.
    Who are you guys comparing me to, Lupe?
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited March 2011
    Young-Ice wrote: »
    it's text tho
    not audio

    so u have to visually show wordplay, which is much easier than verbally doing so

    you mean much harder
    Cuz i never lost a real rap battle.
    I try and make it so that anyone reading my verse can find the rhythm.
    but 🤬 it. I know now
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
    both battlers did well

    just saying like goku
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited March 2011
    i think i went o hard for these dudes.
    How you lost by line two
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