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LE Tournament #2 SEMI-FINALS - Disciplined InSight -VS- thedesolateone

raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
edited April 2011 in Lyrical Executions
Disciplined InSight -VS- thedesolateone

Check in by Thursday, April 14, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Verses are due by Saturday, April 16, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Voting will end on Monday, April 18, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.

These due dates are final. Beware, 1 minute late will result in a DQ.
Only when the site's goes down will the due dates extend.

Rules
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
5 votes first wins or most votes wins when voting is over.
3 votes to 0 votes is a KO.
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING!!!
BITING is an instant DQ.


Take criticism like a man. Quit trying to vote sway and explain your bars. Everyone has their own opinion.
Use the Predictions/🤬 Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread.
Good luck.

Comments

  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited April 2011
    I'm going with thedesolateone
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    *punches the microphone around*
  • Disciplined InSightDisciplined InSight The Clairvoyant One.... Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    Check..............
  • frozenheartwjlbfrozenheartwjlb Members Posts: 206
    edited April 2011
    This one should be good. I am pullin for D.I. though, only cause I want a shot at him as the champ again next time haha. Good luck guys
  • C.MelendezC.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    wanna see how this one plays out
  • Disciplined InSightDisciplined InSight The Clairvoyant One.... Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    R.I.P Desolateone...


    No explanations needed, this loser's a dead duck on sight.
    Your name makes sense now...what a waste you seriously suck at life.
    You're a 🤬 lightweight. No time for stressing with chumps.
    But you're caught in the mix of a batter..and left with definite lumps.
    You're not on my level 🤬 . I'll break you with more hell open.
    Your opportunity knocks without the ring..considering your doorbell's broken.
    I'm militant with a pen. You'll get compound skull fractures all over.
    The best part of waking up..you won't experience again so forget the Folgers.
    Maintain composure, 🤬 . Matching wits against me, I dare you try it.
    You never step out of line again..'cause your corpse is surrounded by it.
    Look, it's a fact I'm brutal and your bars lacked aggravation.
    His battles don't hold ANY weight..especially the ones with Gravitation.
    Stray flights of iron projectiles black out your daylights.
    You're the type..
    ..that's GLAAD to get physical, but there's no reason to exercise your 🤬 rights.
    You never was built for duels. I'm L.T..this 🤬 will get 🤬 in this.
    This beating was 🤬 given but you STILL remain in denial..a typical atheist.
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    slaughter the lot of ya the tide will be crimson then * rick james voice:🤬 your location*
    all of your followers are swallowers they know discipline *🤬 you trainin for?*
    im a ryder , this is vehicular homicide to settle the score
    on another plane when i train and when i bus i blow up your car *whoa*
    damage your brains right hemispere im so nice *you need help with that?*
    paralyze your whole leftside so you can be all right *you ok now?*
    your avatar is for certain types you dont know what to do with that mic
    no! its not a 🤬 and you aint tight !*ouch*
    heres why this 🤬 cabbage in a basket like french revolution: *you still a fruit though*
    my bars go over the champs head like a guillotine,comes down for lyrical execution *only hurt a bit*
    i got insight a noose wrapped type breaks neck cartilage didnt even have to google it
    cause i fill letters in and hang man from his branch of knowledge*a fool can never play a wiseman*
    rakim is NOT the father ,insight of my 🤬 *hello son*
    use to dip my nuts in ginseng an tea bag your moms *she was askin for it*
    when my metafives subract your metafours it leaves me the one remainder * a beautiful mind*
    my shots bust through doors like kramer ,d.i.'s crown is in danger *most kings*
  • sniperksniperk Members Posts: 1,562 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    🤬 damn! This is an epic battle...

    Looks like I will be battling the winner in the Finals as Tupacfan DQ'ed (wanted to see her spit, too).

    I'm not going to vote but I will say my favourite part of each 16:

    D.I.: All sorts of nice punches but my favourite was:
    "The best part of waking up..you won't experience again so forget the Folgers"

    That line had me laughing and at the same time was as slick as 🤬 .

    thedesolateone: This might have been the strongest battle verse I have read from you so far.

    Again, lots of ill lines but I killed myself laughing right away with that "* rick james voice:🤬 your location*" adlib, that 🤬 had me spitting my drink out of my nostrils and 🤬 (reminding me of that hamburger guy who was throwing out the Jeezy adlibs during the last tournament)

    Entertaining battle...peace
  • love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
    Discipline InSight vs. Thedesolateone
    This was a very good battle very creative and powerful!

    Punchline: tie
    Metphor: tie
    Rhymes: tie
    Multie: Discipline InSight
    Verse: tie
    Vocab: thedesolateone
    Creative: tie
    Structure: tie

    Favorite line from Discipline InSight: you never was built for duels, I'm L.T will get 🤬 in this/ This beating was 🤬 giving but you still remain in dinal a typical atheist.

    Favorite line from thedesolateone: when my metafives subract your metafours it leave the one remainder * a beauitful mind*
    Bust through doors like kramer, d.i's crown is in danger * most king*

    This vote was very hard to choose, both came with strong lines, and strong images....I try to say tie...but my vote is thedesolateone.....and good luck to Discipline InSight your verse was very creative keep up the good work. And good luck to
    both. Thanks for letting me vote.

    Vote: thedesolateone
  • Legend24Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited April 2011
    Solid battle. I gotta go with Disciplined InSight on this one. I found his verse flowed a lot better, which just adds to the effectiveness of the punchline when it arrives. That folgers line was gold. He went in on his last four bars, pretty hard to top that. Desolate had a solid verse as well and although he had funnier punches, they weren't as precise as InSight's. Was hard to follow Desolate's flow at times, had to re-read it once or twice to get it, which shouldn't be the case in a battle.
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited April 2011
    Im going with desolateone on this one.
    I liked Insights folger line but after the plane, car, bus line i had made my decision.
    🤬 dides mom closed the casket
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited April 2011
    Sorry I didn't vote on this battle. It's the first time I didn't vote and I should have. Looks like we will have a new champ soon! thedesolateone wins 2-1 and moves on to battle sniperk.
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