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LE Tournament #2 CHAMPIONSHIP - sniperk -VS- thedesolateone

raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
edited April 2011 in Lyrical Executions
sniperk -VS- thedesolateone
THE CHAMPIONSHIP
LYRICAL EXECUTIONS TOURNAMENT #2

Check in by Thursday, April 21, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Verses are due by Saturday, April 23, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Voting will end on Monday, April 25, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.

These due dates are final. Beware, 1 minute late will result in a DQ.
Due dates will be extended only when the site goes down.

Rules
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
5 votes first wins or most votes wins when voting is over.
3 votes to 0 votes is a KO.
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING!!!
BITING is an instant DQ.


Take criticism like a man. Quit trying to vote sway and explain your bars. Everyone has their own opinion.
Use the Predictions/🤬 Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread.
Good luck.

Comments

  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    my mic sounds nice check one
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited April 2011
    sniperk is def going to lose if dude has been getting passes through most of them
  • sniperksniperk Members Posts: 1,562 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    my mic sounds nice check two
  • Disciplined InSightDisciplined InSight The Clairvoyant One.... Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    sniperk is def going to lose if dude has been getting passes through most of them

    You got your pom poms and cheer leading outfit out for desolateone again I see...
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited April 2011
    You got your pom poms and cheer leading outfit out for desolateone again I see...

    you mad cuz he beat you again?
  • Disciplined InSightDisciplined InSight The Clairvoyant One.... Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    you mad cuz he beat you again?

    desolateone never beat me before...but your 🤬 riding is atrocious, but it's nothing you're use to.
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited April 2011
    desolateone never beat me before...but your 🤬 riding is atrocious, but it's nothing you're use to.

    why would i 🤬 ride a dude i dont know?
    i cant just see that dude has skill?
  • Disciplined InSightDisciplined InSight The Clairvoyant One.... Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    why would i 🤬 ride a dude i dont know?
    i cant just see that dude has skill?

    No........
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    rofl........i will battle d.i. again sometime
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    if sniper k dont drop soon i will
  • sniperksniperk Members Posts: 1,562 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    🤬 this sweet transvestite freak from 🤬 , Transylvania
    Your so-so 🤬 flow's so weak not even Mister Cee will claim ya
    Now I will 🤬 ' maim ya... slit your throat, impale your heart
    No JUST-ICE for "the desolate one" 'cuz Sniper Van Helsing will R.I.P. you apart
    What do 🤬 ' vampires have to do with hiphop? 🤬 , I wanna know...
    Biting my punchlines like necklines? You rushin' your flow / I'm Russian your flow
    This Nosferatu will drop off like Andropov once I pop the Kalashnikov off
    My "metasixes" be crucifixes, metaphorically lop them Red Sox off
    You claiming to be off the same block the New Kids On the Block's off (you that soft?)
    Boston-bred "Booga Bandit 🤬 " got get Solar to get them rocks off
    'Cuz I don't give a massive two 🤬 about this Massachusettes Rubic's Cube snitch
    This I.C. square is so 🤬 he got two 🤬 and a 🤬 like that rude 🤬
    That sang "Umbrella-ella-ella", I'll put this dirt dog down like Old Yeller
    Exposing your tricks like Penn and Teller, ya feel me 🤬 ? (no Helen Keller)
    So eat this final meal of Easter ETHER before I burn you with this cross
    No resurrection this time 'round either, looks like thedesolateone finally lauce

    Taste+the+Blood+of+Dracula+-+Cross.jpg
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    think you in a horror flick when i torture you like auschwitz
    put a gun in every orifice and knuckles to your chin like philosophers
    last tourney you got ko'd like a wussie for spitting flowery poetry
    did your conscience feel guilty? just reinforces the stereotype snipers are cowardly 🤬
    though your rhymes are infantry your really not a shooter and are diagnosed with aerophobia
    behind your computer this weakling is a week-end rhyme warrior
    now your already biting at mic check ? im so surreal have you eat every word
    stuff my rap pages down your tight neck; internal rhyme tookin to the level of absurd
    🤬 my arm back for long range,slap fire out of you so hard only arms you will handle are arm slings
    wash you up when i 🤬 it back a-gain and slap water out of you ..........palm springs!
    between you and me you will be last like y and z
    creep with the gun i named irony to blast sniper k close range,wont hear my footsteps like a silent e
    when i hear a siren, flee
    to your moms place spray starch on your wrinkled moms face
    then put the iron to her , chop her up ,and stuff her in a guitar case
    wont leave a print or trace to avoid a foot or car chase
  • love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
    Sniperk vs. Thedesolateone

    Favorite line from Sniperk
    That sang Umbrella ella-ella I'll put this dirt dog down like Old yeller Exposing your tricks like Penn and Teller

    Favorite line from Thedesolateone
    Think you in a horror flick when I torture you like auschwitz knuckes to your chin like philosophers

    No hate vote not against of no battlers but this match is really good and creative

    Punches:tie
    Structure verse:tie
    Creative: Sniperk
    Metaphor: thedesolateone
    Multies: tie
    Flow:tie
    Rhymes: tie

    Its hard vote, I was going to say tie, but my vote goes to : Thedesolateone.....both champs came very strong, verses good to read.
    Good luck to thedesolateone and Sniperk, continue with your good work

    Vote: thedesolateone
  • Disciplined InSightDisciplined InSight The Clairvoyant One.... Members Posts: 13,478 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    Young-Ice wrote: »
    DI is a sore loser

    lol

    talkin like he superior when i got DQ'd over 🤬 , but then QQ when he loses legitimately

    this is humoerous,



    as for this battle, post your verses already!

    i wanna vote.

    Please....you're nobody special.

    I'm not a sore loser plus I didn't lose legitimately, but it is a MINOR problem with the process of voting on TEXT battles, which nobody knows how to do (only a select few)..and oh I see you didn't vote on that battle. I wonder why?But that's okay, no need to answer.

    Shut the 🤬 up.
  • ItzGravitationItzGravitation Members Posts: 7,205
    edited April 2011
    i really liked Sniperks verse
    even tho his verse towards me was wack dude did a lil research for these
    dude did start off with some weak 🤬 and ended with some 🤬 but like a sandwhich the good stuff was in the middle
    Right around the time he dissed ice i think
    Desolates ones verse was more organized tho while sniper ks verse seemed based on word association.
    id give this one a tie tho
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited April 2011
    A little over an hour left for votes! Bout to make mine in a few minutes. Up.
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited April 2011
    Each battler had some real sick lines. For example, I liked these from sniperk:
    Now I will 🤬 ' maim ya... slit your throat, impale your heart
    No JUST-ICE for "the desolate one" 'cuz Sniper Van Helsing will R.I.P. you apart
    So eat this final meal of Easter ETHER before I burn you with this cross
    No resurrection this time 'round either, looks like thedesolateone finally lauce
    'Cuz I don't give a massive two 🤬 about this Massachusettes Rubic's Cube snitch
    This I.C. square is so 🤬 he got two 🤬 and a 🤬 like that rude 🤬

    and these from thedesolateone:
    last tourney you got ko'd like a wussie for spitting flowery poetry
    did your conscience feel guilty? just reinforces the stereotype snipers are cowardly 🤬
    now your already biting at mic check ? im so surreal have you eat every word
    stuff my rap pages down your tight neck; internal rhyme tookin to the level of absurd
    though your rhymes are infantry your really not a shooter and are diagnosed with aerophobia
    behind your computer this weakling is a week-end rhyme warrior

    With that said, I like the JUST-ICE and R.I.P. wordplay in sniperk's verse. And in the last two lines of his verse, they were SICK. Nice rhyming with a punch that made sense. The Massachusetts line was hot too, plus nice rhymes. In thedesolateone's verse, that "stereotype snipers" personal was crazy. Nice personal. I was also feeling the line about stuffing rap pages down sniperk's tight neck/internal rhyme. That was sick. And I loved the wordplay off "week-end."

    With that said, each battler had weak lines, IMO, these were them:

    sniperk
    What do 🤬 ' vampires have to do with hiphop? 🤬 , I wanna know...
    Biting my punchlines like necklines? You rushin' your flow / I'm Russian your flow
    🤬 this sweet transvestite freak from 🤬 , Transylvania
    Your so-so 🤬 flow's so weak not even Mister Cee will claim ya

    thedesolateone
    🤬 my arm back for long range,slap fire out of you so hard only arms you will handle are arm slings
    wash you up when i 🤬 it back a-gain and slap water out of you ..........palm springs!
    when i hear a siren, flee
    to your moms place spray starch on your wrinkled moms face
    think you in a horror flick when i torture you like auschwitz
    put a gun in every orifice and knuckles to your chin like philosophers
    then put the iron to her , chop her up ,and stuff her in a guitar case
    wont leave a print or trace to avoid a foot or car chase

    It was just a mixture of lack of wordplay, corniness, easy rhyming, filler and cutting some stuff short. They could have been improved.

    What I did was read every line without knowing who wrote them unless it was obvious if I got the personals like the sniper-stereotype line, then I rated each line and ranked them from best to worst. I do this every time I vote on an important battle to eliminate bias. After doing this, I averaged the lines which gave sniperk a verse of 7.2 and thedesolateone a verse of 6.8. My vote goes to sniperk barely.
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited April 2011
    Congratulations to thedesolateone for winning LE Tournament #2! You beat Plap Star, NuffRespect No-Showed against you in round 2, you beat the former champ in the Semi-Finals, Disciplined InSight and you beat sniperk who also made it to the Semi-Finals last year. You have skills and congratulations again!

    And gotta tip my hat off to sniperk who made it to the final 4 last tournament and final 2 this tournament. Good work.
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