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Love Yal vs. iMpIoDez

love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
edited May 2011 in Lyrical Executions
16 lines
Check in by Satuarday
Verse Due by Wendesday
20 post to vote
3-0 k.o
5 votes to win
Explain votes

Comments

  • love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
    Check in and good luck!
  • RiGGARiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    welfare checks, good luck!

    EDIT: Yo, can I drop first? I'm probably gonna be done by tomorrow
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    cant wait to vote on this one!
    i will try to be more detailed this time
  • RiGGARiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
    Yo this is my first battle, so excuse the extra 2 lines please...



    Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, right?
    Wrong, you’re just a 🤬 in a thong, a born 🤬

    Like, you a dog that may bite but I’m deadlier than a great white
    I’ll muzzle your bark after dark, pop you with the 9
    Watch the cannon spark to pastime like what kids find on the 4th at the park

    But see this isn’t about amusement
    I’m strapped with a license to 🤬 , so you know that I’ma use it
    Resistance is foolish, aimed at lips, the tool spit
    Demanded everything he had 🤬 turned ‘to a nudist (pause)

    Okay, Let that 🤬 marinate…now you lookin salty like a 🤬 caught starin’ late
    dryer than a barren lake, homie being thirsty
    Buddy sweatin’ cuz I’m bearin’ weight, inside he screaming “MERCY!!”

    Confused 🤬 cant scare this fate
    lookin’ mean n’ worried left him demeaned n’ buried, I won’t hesitate

    to spit heat for days like beat-ing sunrays
    No talkin it out, these guns blaze several ways
    🤬 You real as hetero 🤬 , Duckin’ incredible strays
    that tag marks like criminal game...in short I'm killin you, lame
  • love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
    Nothing seriously, line count should match, its a new style, but good luck.






    You no Eminem but raps get laughed like Lettermen
    Get booed like 106 & park, no good like expired tuna
    Relfection yo verse feel the ricochet, poetry played out like 1492
    You too young to handle ammunition, go play G.I Joes
    Special forces, dissmissed yo beliefs, try a new religon
    Blast off like contra and Duke Nukem, stomp you like army in fatigues
    You can rhyme but you mumble to hard, check yo you tube
    Also look like the next Redrat met the Predator, you 🤬 Gremlin
    Hater like who can't ride a skateboard, you no Tony Hawks
    Get boxed up like Game over, you not cool like Paid in full
    Razor sharp lookin like Tom Clancy you sound like broken down Buju Banton
    Get smoked like yo avi, but worser than Cali haze mixed that Blueburryin
    Casket broken, all you hear sword sound efx, Roca fella you won't get signed
    Hot 97 run you over Hummer 12, Kanye west Dmx, you no Ruff Ryder'n
    IMpIoDez remind me of ipod and Bi like he Do both Jay and Jane..
    No fusillade, police fundamental, no Dipset, yo lines are like a Funny bone
    Fusion you wannabe Lil Wayne mixed Wordworth, iMpIoDez match like forehand, you destroyed Tank!
  • RiGGARiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    yo son is 🤬 gon vote or wut?
  • love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited May 2011
    iMpIoDez wrote: »
    yo son is 🤬 gon vote or wut?
    We need votes...its almost a week!
  • love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited May 2011
    Uppin for votes, pretty please!
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited May 2011
    I'm going to vote on this be the end of tonight. Have to drop my verse in my battle first though.
  • RiGGARiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    votes.....
  • raw-material_ahhraw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited May 2011
    IDK what to think of love yal's verse. It was decent. The first two lines were his best and I felt he may have rushed the rest of his verse. iMpIoDez seemed a bit more focused and went for the 🤬 . Some of his multis were sick and made more sense. I liked the marinate/starin’ late/barren lake lines. Those put him over the edge to get my vote. Vote - iMpIoDez
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited May 2011
    i enjoyed reading this battle. i thought love yal didn't have no ammo at all!, shoulda kept it solid and went in for the gusto.. the other battler, his verse was well thought out, and went in with his punches..and becauase his punches hit more Im gonna go with iMpIodez
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    iMpIoDez wrote: »
    Yo this is my first battle, so excuse the extra 2 lines please...



    Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, right?
    Wrong, you’re just a 🤬 in a thong, a born 🤬 -i dont get the punch but good multi and internal slant rhyme plus a nice attack still

    Like, you a dog that may bite but I’m deadlier than a great white
    I’ll muzzle your bark after dark, pop you with the 9
    Watch the cannon spark to pastime like what kids find on the 4th at the park-nice attack in these bars but not that original

    But see this isn’t about amusement
    I’m strapped with a license to 🤬 , so you know that I’ma use it-meh
    Resistance is foolish, aimed at lips, the tool spit-i like the imagery here
    Demanded everything he had 🤬 turned ‘to a nudist (pause)-this line is dope, meaning very strong line

    Okay, Let that 🤬 marinate…now you lookin salty like a 🤬 caught starin’ late-nice original line with marinate/salty and starin late strong attack
    dryer than a barren lake, homie being thirsty-this is dope and original to me and i love the rhymin and structured multis
    Buddy sweatin’ cuz I’m bearin’ weight, inside he screaming “MERCY!!”this is dope with the continued multi and doublin up on the rhymin plus good attack

    Confused 🤬 cant scare this fate
    lookin’ mean n’ worried left him demeaned n’ buried, I won’t hesitate-good continued multis but soft attack still nice line though
    to spit heat for days like beat-ing sunrays
    No talkin it out, these guns blaze several ways-this couplet sounds like only a boast a waste of space in a battle imo
    🤬 You real as hetero 🤬 , Duckin’ incredible strays-dont understand this last couplet but excellent rhymin and i like the real as hetero 🤬 part for some reason
    that tag marks like criminal game...in short I'm killin you, lame
    i rate this verse a 5
    fav lines:8,9,10,11,12
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    love yal wrote: »
    Nothing seriously, line count should match, its a new style, but good luck.






    You no Eminem but raps get laughed like Lettermen-strong opener
    Get booed like 106 & park, no good like expired tuna-nice attack was expectin a rhyme but its ok in my book cause the similes were simple but funny to me
    Relfection yo verse feel the ricochet, poetry played out like 1492-i dont get the first half of this line but the second half has potential but no that strong
    You too young to handle ammunition, go play G.I Joes-i like this line nice attack
    Special forces, dissmissed yo beliefs, try a new religon-good attack
    Blast off like contra and Duke Nukem, stomp you like army in fatigues-nice continued army imagery
    You can rhyme but you mumble to hard, check yo you tube-good personal
    Also look like the next Redrat met the Predator, you 🤬 Gremlin-good disses but where are the rhymes?
    Hater like who can't ride a skateboard, you no Tony Hawks-i dont get it but atleast it is an attack
    Get boxed up like Game over, you not cool like Paid in full-good disses but could be more creative
    Razor sharp lookin like Tom Clancy you sound like broken down Buju Banton
    Get smoked like yo avi, but worser than Cali haze mixed that Blueburryin
    Casket broken, all you hear sword sound efx, Roca fella you won't get signed- all you hear is sword sound efx has original and sayin he wont get signed is a good personal
    reallyHot 97 run you over Hummer 12, Kanye west Dmx, you no Ruff Ryder'n-just sounds like your droppin words
    IMpIoDez remind me of ipod and Bi like he Do both Jay and Jane..-i dont get it
    No fusillade, police fundamental, no Dipset, yo lines are like a Funny bone-your lines are like a funny bone is strait but i dont understand the rest of this line
    Fusion you wannabe Lil Wayne mixed Wordworth, iMpIoDez match like forehand, you destroyed Tank!
    you destroyed tank! is alright and continues the army imagery but i dont get the rest of this line either

    i rate this verse a 3/10
    fav lines:1,2,4,7,10,and the ending of 16
    but didnt rhyme much if at all
    my vote is for impiodez
  • love yallove yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited May 2011
    This was a good match iMpIoDez!.....everybody thanks for voting!
  • RiGGARiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    yeah 🤬 is buggin' giving me a 5 tho but aye I gotta respect the opinion, good match indeed
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