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Raw-Material -vs- iMpIoDez

raw-material_ahh
raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
edited May 2011 in Lyrical Executions
16 lines.
50 posts to vote. Votes must be explained.
No feeding, no biting, no editing verses after second person has dropped.
5 votes to win. 3-0 KO rule. Whoever has the most votes after 2 weeks wins if neither battler has 5 votes yet.

Do you want to make a verse due date? Thursday night by midnight ET? or Friday? It's up to you.
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  • RiGGA
    RiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    16 lines.
    50 posts to vote. Votes must be explained.
    No feeding, no biting, no editing verses after second person has dropped.
    5 votes to win. 3-0 KO rule. Whoever has the most votes after 2 weeks wins if neither battler has 5 votes yet.

    Do you want to make a verse due date? Thursday night by midnight ET? or Friday? It's up to you.

    son it takes me like an hour to make a verse, and maybe another hour or so for revisions. So it all depends on how long you need to write it. I'm ready whenever....mic check

    oh and vote on this joint yo http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?119433-Love-Yal-vs-iMpIoDez
  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited May 2011
    iMpIoDez wrote: »
    son it takes me like an hour to make a verse, and maybe another hour or so for revisions. So it all depends on how long you need to write it. I'm ready whenever....mic check

    oh and vote on this joint yo http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?119433-Love-Yal-vs-iMpIoDez

    Aight. Since I'm just getting on and IDK if you are, then Friday, tomorrow, by midnigt ET.
  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited May 2011
    This boy is a coward cuz my punches like planes enter towers/
    Cuz this 🤬 is going down like 🤬 in the shower/~
    I'm the pound-for-pound scrapper and he's just another "underground rapper"../
    When he digs his own grave cuz spitting that weak 🤬 makes you drown faster/~
    Moving the force forward is the only time you'll see me "break my lines"/
    Bout to invade your territory with atom bombs, 🤬 up your internet or should I say "state of mind"?/~
    Won't let this 🤬 hide, every punch I spit connects and spreads his head/
    Cuz like the old Nikes I just threw away, you getting "checked" and left for dead/~
    This dude is "gassed" up, bet if I put Mentos down his neck, his body implodes (iMpIoDez)/
    That's the only way he spits sick looking like 🤬 driven nymphos/~
    I'm looking at a dead man, punches over your head like sweatbands/
    Cuz I'm so sick, I always gotta lay down, 🤬 on you homie like bed pans/~
    No one is fading me dumb 🤬 , not "weak in force" like your ladies be/
    First battled love yal and now me? He's the new LE dump truck, dropping trash a few days a week/~
    Feel like I'm battling Freddy Krueger cuz this dude afraid of the way my flames spit/
    And people thinking I'm "🤬 " cuz I killed you with an "insane script"/~
  • RiGGA
    RiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    Check this, expect this…Hexes sever ya nexus
    Aimin at ya core, pull the .44 bangin’ from the Lexus

    Bodies sprawled out over the floor
    🤬 say he eatin but to me he 🤬 poor

    barely saw some cereal but tryna talk imperial
    Metrics is in use when dealing with raw material

    Lead tricks execute I aint known to be hospitable
    I spit at you…listen dude, mommy shoulda finished you

    Chemicals not in ya physical, that 🤬 don’t mix
    In heat ya pistol drew but won’t let the chrome dispense

    Son Get shown some bricks, watch dem boys Hit lickss
    in ya spot, shot, for packages..still the block, hot, we savages

    for cabbages, and speaking of the green 🤬
    I’m smoking sticky weed on some trippy fiend 🤬

    But back to the topic, this 🤬 ’s soft as Downy magic
    He’ll never stop, 🤬 it and pop it, pussier than beauty pageants
  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited May 2011
    Cool. Uppin for votes.
  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited May 2011
    We need some votes on this battle. Up!
  • bbkg79
    bbkg79 Members Posts: 613 ✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    1 vote for Raw
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited May 2011
    Nice battle!

    Favorite line by Raw-Material - feel like I'm battling Freddy Krueger cuz this dude affraid of the way my flames spit
    And people thinking I'm 🤬 cuz I killed you with an insane script.

    Favorite line by iMpIodez- But back to topic this 🤬 soft as downy magic
    He'll never stop, 🤬 it and pop it, pussier than beauty pegant.

    Flow-~Raw
    Rhymes-Tie
    Punches-Raw
    Structures-Tie
    Metaphor-Raw
    Mulites- tie
    Vocab-tie


    Good battle, verses were good from both..keep up the good work..thanks for letting me vote.
    My vote: Raw-Material
  • gns
    gns Bleeding 24/7 Members Posts: 21,285 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    vote for the implode guy. reason: he was better
  • Vader_F_Kennedy
    Vader_F_Kennedy Behind MissKMembers Posts: 17,715 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    Raw............................
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    votes must be explained
  • RiGGA
    RiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    lol honestly I rushed my verse so I can't exactly blame people for voting raw, but at least explain why...
  • white715
    white715 Members Posts: 7,744 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    it would help if ya post the instrumental yall wrote to
  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited May 2011
    white715 wrote: »
    it would help if ya post the instrumental yall wrote to

    IDK about him, but I didn't write to an instrumental. This was just a text battle, my 16 lines against his 16 lines. Then people jump in and vote based off the lyrics solely; metaphors, punches, rhyming, creativity, wordplay, best verse, just whatever you can think of.

    And I agree with iMpIoDez, if you take the time to vote, at least explain why you voted that way BC anyone can hop in and say, "I vote for this guy BC he was better." How was he better and how was I better?
  • RiGGA
    RiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    I wrote to Araab Muzik "I Got Em Hands Down"

    EDIT: yeah tell these lil 🤬 son...(lol)
  • coopersgirl
    coopersgirl Members Posts: 86
    edited May 2011
    i would vote but I don't have 50 posts, nice battle though
  • jonlakadeadmic
    jonlakadeadmic Members Posts: 4,735 ✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    as a diss ill go Raw

    but on some 🤬 i could hear in a actual song, id go with the other dude
  • MC The Rapper
    MC The Rapper Members Posts: 8,140 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    I vote the dude with the weed avi because his 🤬 flowed better
  • cobbland
    cobbland "Shorty": Belly (1998) Chicago...Members Posts: 3,768 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    Raw's flowed better, but iMpIoDez had some nice lines, though it could have been longer.
  • damnkp
    damnkp Members Posts: 1,824 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    i gotta go with raw material. more punches and metaphors. but implodez was good as well. more radio ready
  • RiGGA
    RiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    Appreciate the votes people, keep 'em coming...And as far as mine sounding radio ready/ better songwise it's because before I found this site, I never tried to battle. I started rapping a year ago and my main focus was just flow (cuz my 🤬 was wack as fucc lol) so much more attention was spent learning structure, multi's and delivery as opposed to punchlines...I feel I'm adapting aight though if I do say so myself nah mean.
  • dalyricalbandit
    dalyricalbandit Co-Owner Of AllhipHop.com, Super Moderator, Administrator, Moderator Members, Moderators Posts: 67,918 Regulator
    edited May 2011
    right now its a toss up for me both did your thing

    fave lines from iMploDez:

    Lead tricks execute I aint known to be hospitable
    I spit at you…listen dude, mommy shoulda finished you

    Chemicals not in ya physical, that 🤬 don’t mix
    In heat ya pistol drew but won’t let the chrome dispense

    fave line from Raw:

    Moving the force forward is the only time you'll see me "break my lines"/
    Bout to invade your territory with atom bombs, 🤬 up your internet or should I say "state of mind"?/~

    right now ill give it to raw not by much tho............how many rounds ya gonna go at it
  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555
    edited May 2011
    iMpIoDez wrote: »
    Appreciate the votes people, keep 'em coming...And as far as mine sounding radio ready/ better songwise it's because before I found this site, I never tried to battle. I started rapping a year ago and my main focus was just flow (cuz my 🤬 was wack as fucc lol) so much more attention was spent learning structure, multi's and delivery as opposed to punchlines...I feel I'm adapting aight though if I do say so myself nah mean.

    LOL!! I get you man. I'm probably the opposite, a punchline rapper that tries to incorporate a fair amount of multis and whatnot.
    ............how many rounds ya gonna go at it

    Just one.
  • iphucq
    iphucq Members Posts: 961 ✭✭
    edited May 2011
    iMpIoDez wrote: »
    Check this, expect this…Hexes sever ya nexus
    Aimin at ya core, pull the .44 bangin’ from the Lexus

    Bodies sprawled out over the floor
    🤬 say he eatin but to me he 🤬 poor

    barely saw some cereal but tryna talk imperial
    Metrics is in use when dealing with raw material

    Lead tricks execute I aint known to be hospitable
    I spit at you…listen dude, mommy shoulda finished you

    Chemicals not in ya physical, that 🤬 don’t mix
    In heat ya pistol drew but won’t let the chrome dispense

    Son Get shown some bricks, watch dem boys Hit lickss
    in ya spot, shot, for packages..still the block, hot, we savages

    for cabbages, and speaking of the green 🤬
    I’m smoking sticky weed on some trippy fiend 🤬

    But back to the topic, this 🤬 ’s soft as Downy magic
    He’ll never stop, 🤬 it and pop it, pussier than beauty pageants

    vote 4 whateva ya name is
  • RiGGA
    RiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
    iphucq wrote: »
    vote 4 whateva ya name is

    (em-plo-dz) but I go by RiggaNomics on the mic so you can just call me Rigga...and explain ya vote homie.
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