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MY IMPERFECT SONG by VSOP *written to Jean Grae-still a love song instrumental*

VSOPVSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
edited April 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
like Real P said....you retire and then you start to get creative-where else to share? comments welcome

whas happenin strangers?!




shes the singer to my daydreams chorus
my perfect lil nightmare of course
she gave me the finger,
press stop, record, no more goin forward,
i wish i could rewind this tape with a finger and record over her
she lingers in my memories playlist
every day things remind me of her
the empty faces of dames run adjacent to her sexy face
those dimples
simply put, my demise
that smile
so innocent, my demise
those eyes
those lips
my perfect song
that sensitive spot on her neck that I used to kiss on and lick
her goosebumps coming from everytime I would whisper somethin into her eardrums
her tongue dipped in sanscript
her kiss translates into tantric
I could read her mind so I would push her against the pantry
her soul sweated passion everytime her panties leaked
I fulfilled every single fantasy
speechless and taking breaths
of her breathtaking essence
I called her name, she didn't respond
so I left a message
no response
left pacing impatiently
waiting to see if she would take this relationship off pause
ignored
life goes on
shes still my favorite song
that I don't wanna hear anymore
every now n then
I hear her name
I wanna scream but somethin takes over
I can't get over you
I'm intoxicated by your overproof
🤬 as 🤬
screamin 🤬 love
cuz I'm love 🤬 and you're sober
its like the song is skippin through my mind
and I can't turn the tape over
I need to move on
I dont need her
so I unplug the speakers

it doesn't work...
cuz shes still there playin me...

Comments

  • REAL_POETICALREAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited March 2010
    i see you still got it in you man....you never skipped a beat with poetry just keep getting better...i'm diggin this piece because it reminds me of past flames that i use to have in my walkman and they leave me with a pop tape and memories of what was dope...bottom line good 🤬 as always...keep droppin those lines that manifest with loops of time called poetry my fellow poet

    peace
  • VSOPVSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited March 2010
    thanks dog-had a couple months on writers block but i drop a few gems here n there


    everyones had them past flames brah-so hopefully everyone can relate

    be easy homie
  • jayy.primejayy.prime Members Posts: 22
    edited March 2010
    i see vsop is still droppin' bangers.....whas been good my dude??? [its thajuiciest] lol...very nice joint..as always, you mesh music and broken love together and it ends up a masterpiece...if this is retiring for yall, keep being retired...props ;-]
  • VSOPVSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited March 2010
    jayy.prime wrote: »
    i see vsop is still droppin' bangers.....whas been good my dude??? [its thajuiciest] lol...very nice joint..as always, you mesh music and broken love together and it ends up a masterpiece...if this is retiring for yall, keep being retired...props ;-]



    JUICI! aint nothin with me-whas good? i got some music for you whenever youre ready, jus get at me (plus some beats to write too)
    if thats one thing im experienced in, its music and broken love

    thanks for the love though
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited April 2010
    how does jamie fox say it..


    "still got it"


    I like this yo! always droping some dope 🤬 .. make me wanna write and get inspired.

    where you been stranger?
  • jayy.primejayy.prime Members Posts: 22
    edited April 2010
    np homie..and send em on over..🤬 knows i need it...you got my email?
  • VSOPVSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited April 2010
    Tupacfan wrote: »
    how does jamie fox say it..


    "still got it"


    I like this yo! always droping some dope 🤬 .. make me wanna write and get inspired.

    where you been stranger?


    i been here n there

    been dating my muse and every since i got together with the unattainable...ive been in lalaland and not able to write

    but she bought me a pair of those dr dre beats headphones *peep the av* and music just sounds DIFFERENT and so much clearer now so ive been steady bumpin music more than usual, which leads to my insp-her-ation





    JAY! nah aint got the email -hit me up

    [email protected]
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited April 2010
    VSOP wrote: »
    i been here n there

    been dating my muse and every since i got together with the unattainable...ive been in lalaland and not able to write

    but she bought me a pair of those dr dre beats headphones *peep the av* and music just sounds DIFFERENT and so much clearer now so ive been steady bumpin music more than usual, which leads to my insp-her-ation QUOTE]


    I can digg that, I know what it be like when music inspires you too write.. how's that album by A keys?
  • VSOPVSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited April 2010
    Tupacfan wrote: »
    VSOP wrote: »
    i been here n there

    been dating my muse and every since i got together with the unattainable...ive been in lalaland and not able to write

    but she bought me a pair of those dr dre beats headphones *peep the av* and music just sounds DIFFERENT and so much clearer now so ive been steady bumpin music more than usual, which leads to my insp-her-ation QUOTE]




    I can digg that, I know what it be like when music inspires you too write.. how's that album by A keys?

    good album-that and that Erykah Badu be on some other 🤬

    plus that Raheem Devaughn joint-but im expectin to be inspired once that Nas/Damian Marley album finally drops-can't wait to cop that
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