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I loved- By Tupacfan

Tupacfan
Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
edited August 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
This poem is written for a dear friend of mines, I truly miss his friendship today....

I loved.....


how we use to talk into late night hours,
We'd laugh and joke like we was cowards.
I loved it when he'd always reassure he never afar,
He'd play his piano and hyme twinkle little star's.
I loved it how he stopped all my families raging wars,
making me forgive those like my birth mom's,
even when it hurted to the very core.
I loved it when we exchange poems,
performed them on stage mad stoned,
even recited them thru the phone.
OH! how I miss his voice tone!
I loved how he was there for me on day's like chemo,
He help me deal with cancer,
even though he didn't know the answer.
I loved it how he cared for my babies when i wasn't there
He held me down when no one else cared.
I loved the sound of his laughs and his silly dances,
all the while, we were eating poetry enhances.
I loved it when we played question game's,
somethings we've said and in a million year's we'd never claim.
I love how he fell in love with not only me but my culture,
my flesh and blood, and my poetry scriptures...
Today, all these wonderful things I loved about him, I question..
where did we've go wrong?
I know in my heart our friendship was strong,
Now its ripped and torn,
on stage with you, reciting our poems is where we really belong.
Don't you know...
Your smile is the sound of my laugh
your voice is the sound of my poetry
your touch is the feel in my thigh
your kindred spirit is the breath of my life....
And becasue of all that...
I loved you for how you have loved and that I simply loved....


-Tupacfan

Comments

  • dabullsss
    dabullsss Banned Users Posts: 853
    edited May 2011
    this poem reminds me of that song "they burn me" by 50 cent........alot of emotion.
    gggggg-unit!!!
  • Seansosa
    Seansosa Members Posts: 1,430 ✭✭✭✭
    edited June 2011
    nice!!!!!!!!! strong
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited June 2011
    Seansosa wrote: »
    nice!!!!!!!!! strong

    thank you for reading :)
  • I.B. Blackman
    I.B. Blackman Members Posts: 3,323 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited June 2011
    ......Dope. #Thumbsup.
  • RuffDraft
    RuffDraft Members, Writer Posts: 4,753 ✭✭✭✭
    edited June 2011
    Depressing poem, really heartfelt and torn...

    I just lost a friend in a similar fashion, someone who held me down for the past two years. We fell for one another romantically and that was the end of us, now I'm sat there questioning like, what's become of us? It's a shame, but best friends do become strangers and life goes on...

    I think the older I become, the more I realise how brutal the world is... it's mostly filled with pain. Depression. Sadness and in some cases, envy.

    Sorry for your loss of a true friend TupacFan. Thanks for sharing, dope poetry as always :tu
  • MeTaL
    MeTaL Members Posts: 6,553 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited August 2011
    tupacfan wrote: »
    This poem is written for a dear friend of mines, I truly miss his friendship today....

    I loved.....


    how we use to talk into late night hours,
    We'd laugh and joke like we was cowards.
    I loved it when he'd always reassure he never afar,
    He'd play his piano and hyme twinkle little star's.
    I loved it how he stopped all my families raging wars,
    making me forgive those like my birth mom's,
    even when it hurted to the very core.
    I loved it when we exchange poems,
    performed them on stage mad stoned,
    even recited them thru the phone.
    OH! how I miss his voice tone!
    I loved how he was there for me on day's like chemo,
    He help me deal with cancer,
    even though he didn't know the answer.
    I loved it how he cared for my babies when i wasn't there
    He held me down when no one else cared.
    I loved the sound of his laughs and his silly dances,
    all the while, we were eating poetry enhances.
    I loved it when we played question game's,
    somethings we've said and in a million year's we'd never claim.
    I love how he fell in love with not only me but my culture,
    my flesh and blood, and my poetry scriptures...
    Today, all these wonderful things I loved about him, I question..
    where did we've go wrong?
    I know in my heart our friendship was strong,
    Now its ripped and torn,
    on stage with you, reciting our poems is where we really belong.
    Don't you know...
    Your smile is the sound of my laugh
    your voice is the sound of my poetry
    your touch is the feel in my thigh
    your kindred spirit is the breath of my life....
    And becasue of all that...
    I loved you for how you have loved and that I simply loved....


    -Tupacfan

    Awesome poem.
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited August 2011
    Damn really heartfelt, especially with those last 6 lines. Like PAC said "the good die young"
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2011
    thank ya'll for the love, and for commenting.. most importantly taking the time out to read my saddistic ass poems lmao...


    fa real fa real, I appreciate ya'll....


    peace and Jah Bless fam!