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Land of Ticking Time Bombs

edited April 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
splitting between the lines
red vs blue
the right vs left
the truth vs the view
crime resorting to extortion
anger erupting and violence occurring
flash mobs throwing the trash can
white house is in demand
click...clack the sounds of a lunatic gone mad
high off depression
pain is manifesting
undressing the hoodie with bombs strapped
give dap to the wicked
subway buck 50's, robberies, violence in the name of sanity
hand me the keys to unloosen this handcuff of burden
so i can join the revolution for certain
time is wasting and smiles are fading
kids are grown men like underground warriors
violent by design with a history of violence
21st century land driven madness
all because of different views, lack of pockets
and no sense


  • It's Mook!It's Mook! Members Posts: 23
    edited March 2010
    Wow dis was real dope. I relate alot to dis as far as how da hood I came from is and how I felt about it. At least thats what I got outta dis, good drop.
  • REAL_POETICALREAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited March 2010
    thanks for the props...glad you felt this poem....i was inspired by my roots and whats going on now...once again thanks for peeping this
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited April 2010
    Very much reality today,

    just tune into news at 5 and you hear about all this 🤬 , but I like your version.. it's an everyday occurance..

    thanks for sharing
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