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MY STORY OF NOW by VSOP *written to: Alicia Keys-unthinkable* link inside

VSOP
VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
edited April 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
..its 2 am and I've been workin on this joint for an hour..beat on repeat for an hour. Got right in the head, started blendin D'angelo/Raphael Saadiq's "be here" with Alicia Keys-Un-Thinkable instrumental and that didn't last long........had to stop and write this

heres the instrumental if anyone wants it http://usershare.net/52nvhx8uql98


comments welcome

unthinkable
unbreakable
unattainable
used to be my muse
my most influential
my wishlist
my potential
i was so focused into
she was my motivation to do
my light at the end of the tunnel
would we sit and kiss under a sunset or two?
my need to
my want to
we sinned
cuz it takes two to tussle
she was my aim
my "soon"
my day
my noon
my nights in my room
my wife
my muse
actually she was his wife
i had to take her to nice rooms
cuz she stayed with dude but she liked who?!
i feel like this is the beginning of a story from Sekou
she played dude
came to my spot
liked my cocky attitude
like I'm 🤬
satan's cool
but I'm hot
she finally fell for it
sayin "yeah..why not"
I had tried for years
cuz she acted grown up and well...I'm not
well i wasn't
until i picked up on my hustlin
started liftin weights and puttin down the substances
she got pregnant then married in the meantime
she seemed fine
but she wasn't
she started readin my poems
textin me on some other 🤬
out the blue
minus the "hi how are you"
she jus wanted someone to hug for a second
so I muscled in
hugged her again
that again turned into a kiss
that kiss turned into...this



we started off slow
actually we started off 10 years ago
i had slipped her a note
plus Jon B.'s single of "they don't know"
cuz they don't
...and I guess she didn't either
it took her damn near 9 years to make up her mind
and heres where we stand at this day in time
actually noones standin cuz we're always in bed
the update is
yeah she had a kid
married for a few years
so yeah...she did a bid
me..I outgrew my ignorance
outdrew the bigger picture
her...I guess she started to see what she was missin
her man didn't pay her no mind
playin video games all the time
so she started readin them poems of mine
realizin that maybe..just maybe...
that baby that gave these to me grew up
so she looked me up
askin if I wanted to do lunch
we did
that unthinkable happened
the unbreakable marriage was broken
she came home with me
conversation fast forwarded
action is important
a very passionate moment
no need for a glass of moet
a few pedals from a few roses
no need for backrubs
no need for lotion
lets go on emotions
sweaty,
wet,
screams
loud,
kisses,
hair a mess
ripped clothing,
patience-less
backscratches
skirt yanked down
wifebeat ripped off me
great sex
shes screamin "put it on me"
that was it...i pulled out and put it on her
theres no cause for concern
she calms nerves
she pauses words
I'm in awe of her
damn I'm hard again
time to get lost in her
my lil freak
her different outfits
shes my cop
my nurse
my last which will always be my first

...according to her
its important for her to think I was 40 year old 🤬
the 30 year old version
turned into a certain individual that would steal her heart
make her rethink
think about me & leavin her wedding ring on the night stand
cuz I'm the man that will never leave her lookin elsewhere
and I'm the man that will never cheat and pull someone elses hair
and I'm the man that will forever be there when noone else cares

apparently she figured it out
cuz the papers are almost filled out
she moved outta his house
shes with me now....

my life story almost sounds like the last verse of 10 Minutes...wow

Comments

  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited April 2010
    damn----that was on some late nite 🤬 lol always crazy readin somethin you wrote the next day with eyes wide open ya know?

    comments welcome
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited April 2010
    DAM VSOP!


    this was on some late nite tip LMAO ..

    Fa real fa real tho, I love the word play... it was beautifully written and while I was reading I listened to the beat too.. so it was just ill..

    crazy story too lol. glad it was a happy ending..
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited April 2010
    tupacfan wrote: »
    DAM VSOP!


    this was on some late nite tip LMAO ..

    Fa real fa real tho, I love the word play... it was beautifully written and while I was reading I listened to the beat too.. so it was just ill..

    crazy story too lol. glad it was a happy ending..

    you aint lyin lol i was messin around with music and that beat came on and it was automatic..i HAD to write to it

    its crazy cuz you can see where i stopped to re-read so i could get back on track as far as topic but when i started typin again...i started with a different rhyme scheme lol i didnt even bother fixin it cuz it jus came out right

    thanks for the feedback on this one though--this is definitely my story of now...and now is some crazy 🤬
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited April 2010
    you always dropping something epic with your own flavor to the epicness...i'm feeling this piece as it hit home in my fantasy where I was on the opposite...woman of my dreams all of the suddenly wanting to come out of the blue while you got a woman of lifetime underneath of your nose...lifes a trip but the ending of your piece is like a fantasy coming true..you killed that last part of the piece especially the uniform line....bottom line good work as always....keep dropping those lines of key to lock called poetry my fellow poet


    peace
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited April 2010
    you always dropping something epic with your own flavor to the epicness...i'm feeling this piece as it hit home in my fantasy where I was on the opposite...woman of my dreams all of the suddenly wanting to come out of the blue while you got a woman of lifetime underneath of your nose...lifes a trip but the ending of your piece is like a fantasy coming true..you killed that last part of the piece especially the uniform line....bottom line good work as always....keep dropping those lines of key to lock called poetry my fellow poet


    peace


    appreciate it fam-aint that how it always works? youll be single and WANTIN someone but right when you start movin on and find that even MORE perfect somebody-that ol flame lights back up like "hey how you doin?"

    temptations like a mug lol

    preciate the feedback homie-im proud of this piece cuz like common's song...."this is me"