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Cancerous Thoughts

cryogeniccryogenic Members Posts: 2
edited October 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
ill empty out the clip before i pause to exhale
while watching you 🤬 run, gettin tortured and slain
my verbal prowess disturbs the sky and devours its rain
you 🤬 with something deadlier and more vicious than payne

thoughts on the cloud reasonating with forces from space
9 in the wild laying your 🤬 henchmen to waste
a 🤬 disgrace, i'll stick the 🤬 knife through your face
and draw your corpse's shape with your 🤬 blood on my cape

im the force that split the heavens and levitated Christ to above
i hit harder than the force of 50 missiles striking a bomb
not your 🤬 equal, if you love life then begone
i stand on top the Roman temples, meditate till the 🤬 moonlight is gone

violent lyric generator, my rhymes cut deeper than hatchets
if your fam dont embrace me, they becoming one with ashes
theres no reason for you to live, all you should see is the darkness
i'll peel your face off with bare hands i'm just that 🤬 heartless

Comments

  • cryogeniccryogenic Members Posts: 2
    edited October 2011
    tell me what you guys think im new here btw
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited October 2011
    I enjoyed reading this jawn, for a minute, I thought to myself, this is a battle type of piece right chere'.. but then reading it from a poetic aspect, i can see that in this piece.

    this being my favorite line...

    "im the force that split the heavens and levitated Christ to above"

    thanks for sharing.. peace.
  • VSOPVSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited October 2011
    cryogenic wrote: »
    ill empty out the clip before i pause to exhale
    while watching you 🤬 run, gettin tortured and slain
    my verbal prowess disturbs the sky and devours its rain
    you 🤬 with something deadlier and more vicious than payne

    thoughts on the cloud reasonating with forces from space
    9 in the wild laying your 🤬 henchmen to waste
    a 🤬 disgrace, i'll stick the 🤬 knife through your face
    and draw your corpse's shape with your 🤬 blood on my cape

    im the force that split the heavens and levitated Christ to above
    i hit harder than the force of 50 missiles striking a bomb
    not your 🤬 equal, if you love life then begone
    i stand on top the Roman temples, meditate till the 🤬 moonlight is gone

    violent lyric generator, my rhymes cut deeper than hatchets
    if your fam dont embrace me, they becoming one with ashes
    theres no reason for you to live, all you should see is the darkness
    i'll peel your face off with bare hands i'm just that 🤬 heartless

    good read fam

    not a fan of the AA,BB form but def a battle piece like Pacfan said..

    keep postin and keep writin

    Bless
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