What's up everyone. We are doing a contest with T.I. and we are giving away $1200 a day for the next 10 days. Just wanted to give you all a heads up.
https://www.allhiphop.com/ti

Freestyle thread.

FrozenMind
FrozenMind Members Posts: 1,078 ✭✭
edited June 2010 in Roc Tha Mic
Do any of you think you can 🤬 on me? A sample:


My presence commands respect like a reverend/
I give painful memories a life sentence/
From my thrown which sits on top of the heavens/
My patience allows for constant elevation/
I 🤬 on peasants, as a way to teach lessons/
My foundation is a creation of a new frustration/
For your mind, and to give your 🤬 temptation/
A mastermind on the grind deceiving mankind/
Combined with a click to leave haters blind/
My flows create fear in the minds of foes/
Fantasies of your blood an 🤬 stained clothes/
I will stop your show, turn out your hoes/
Than leave you wishing it was just a broken nose/

Comments

  • junegemini
    junegemini With ya daddyMembers Posts: 2,775 ✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2010
    *🤬 on*

    *drops mic*
  • DarcSkies777
    DarcSkies777 Members Posts: 5,600 ✭✭✭
    edited May 2010
    junegemini wrote: »
    *🤬 on*

    *drops mic*
    [Big Pun Voice] PPPpppppppppppppppppppp!!!!!! Shiiiiiiid on the whole internet! [/BIG PUN VOICE]
  • John_Blazini
    John_Blazini When it comes to half the niggas on the IC's kids...I am the father Members Posts: 14,837 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2010
    yo............... yo check 1 check 2 yo....................... i be like................. yo.... I

    🤬 I lost it bring the beat back.
  • Bwoahmizzee
    Bwoahmizzee Members Posts: 6,962 ✭✭✭
    edited May 2010
    this thread don't even deserve a post from me

    but you should be happy I didn't post for free
  • Cleveland7venty6
    Cleveland7venty6 Members Posts: 1,285 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2010
    i never freestyle for free without chargin 🤬 a fee, it'll cost a brain cell just to cypher with me.

    (only real hiphop heads know that.)

    that 🤬 also said:

    "im the illest lyricist in america, m.c's cant see me cuz im took quick for the human retina to registah..." (register)
  • Keez Of NFBM
    Keez Of NFBM Members Posts: 28
    edited May 2010
    See I got Frozen scramblin' like the Denver Broncos Tim Tebow
    When my glocks get fired like the Chicago Bulls Vinny Del 🤬
    Four bars worth of material is all that 'Keez will ever need indeed
    To show Fro' who's a true pro, you'll never succeed
  • Tha Killa
    Tha Killa Members Posts: 4,451 ✭✭✭
    edited June 2010
    FrozenMind wrote: »
    Do any of you think you can 🤬 on me? A sample:


    My presence commands respect like a reverend/
    I give painful memories a life sentence/
    From my thrown which sits on top of the heavens/
    My patience allows for constant elevation/
    I 🤬 on peasants, as a way to teach lessons/
    My foundation is a creation of a new frustration/
    For your mind, and to give your 🤬 temptation/
    A mastermind on the grind deceiving mankind/
    Combined with a click to leave haters blind/
    My flows create fear in the minds of foes/
    Fantasies of your blood an 🤬 stained clothes/
    I will stop your show, turn out your hoes/
    Than leave you wishing it was just a broken nose/

    I never thought I'd say this, but I would own you in a keystyle battle. You ain't s'posed to wax poetic in a keystyle man, you s'posed to be clever with your metaphors and witty with your similies. You're supposed to be a linguist amongst illiterates. This is just awful for a battle rap.


    With that said, as a regular keystyle, you can use some work on your rhyme scheme, your flow, delivery, and metaphors are all kinda flat, but with some practice you can be pretty dope in no time.