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Nice Day (this is offensive)

TheCATthatdidntDIE Members Posts: 918
edited June 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
🤬 your life- your hopes and dreams
the boil down to an obscenity
a mockery
of what lifes supposed to be.
Knock Knock its reality
and its time for your life to cease

🤬 your life your sorrows and strife
thinking youve got a story to tell
thought you escaped the hell of your life
news flash your there and I am as well

🤬 your fads and the mindset behind them
You all think you're unique but i saw it begin
wear your skinny yellow jeans that make it hard to 🤬
your skarves and peircings can all suck my 🤬

And to the gangstas out there
you're all as fake as the scene kids hair
you are the cause of racial profiling
you yourself say you rep the 313

Now your talking to me and your starting to 🤬
about how life turned the corner only to find 🤬
what the hell do you expect when your only goal is to try and get rich
I shake my head at you fools as i fill up the ditch

When the "bomb" comes you know y'all deserved it
You played the game, cared only for fame, heres your prize you've earned this
and as the explosion tears your life away
I hope your last day was a nice day


  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited June 2010
    great piece! im diggin this 🤬

    can never have too many "🤬 yous" in a poem

    🤬 em all--keep writin fam
  • ThaChozenWun
    ThaChozenWun Members Posts: 9,390
    edited June 2010
    Ill never have a last day, nice piece though. Its good to let the 🤬 yous fly because not enough people express how they really feel.
  • TheCATthatdidntDIE
    TheCATthatdidntDIE Members Posts: 918
    edited June 2010
    thanks all. and youre right, it seems as if people are too afraid to say "🤬 you".
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited June 2010

    tonight isn't one of my favorite nights at all and this piece truly hit the spot...no chaser straight up burning chests to those that are offended...bottom line good 🤬 ...keep droppin the lines of straight up razor sharp truth called poetry my fellow poet

  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited June 2010
    Yo, i digg this jawn, its like you vented and I'm glad you did just that with this piece. and I feel it too... i be in one of those moods sometimes.. f this, f that.. and f you.. lol.