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For a Hip-Hop head does my bars suck?

msmusickmsmusick Members Posts: 57
edited April 2012 in Roc Tha Mic
"My raps are never diabolical
But certainly phenominal'a
mess around and have ya brain comin' out ya follicles
Knowledge is astronomical
Better cop ma module
Genre war movie historical not a comical."

I'm not a rapper, just my way of introducing myself to the IC
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  • _Goldie__Goldie_ ablackweb.com Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 30,349 Regulator
    Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.
  • angrymanincangrymaninc Members Posts: 657 ✭✭✭
    Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.

    pretty much...
  • bankrupt ballerbankrupt baller Members Posts: 12,927 ✭✭✭✭✭
    um.....riiiiiiiggggggghhhhhhhtttttttt
  • msmusickmsmusick Members Posts: 57
    Thanks for posting. But again it was just for fun.
  • _Goldie__Goldie_ ablackweb.com Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 30,349 Regulator
    msmusick wrote: »
    Thanks for posting. But again it was just for fun.

    No problem, now drop that proof pic
  • msmusickmsmusick Members Posts: 57
    Lol I should've figured eventually I'd be asked for validation. I'm technologically incompetent so here's my facebook link


    http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100000691996309
  • BlackAX410BlackAX410 JEFF AXEL DA GREAT Members Posts: 35,416 ✭✭✭✭✭
    yea feel free to post anytime we need more females on here anyway
  • msmusickmsmusick Members Posts: 57
    yea feel free to post anytime we need more females on here anyway

    Thanks for the welcome. I've been checkin' out this sight for a minute so I figured what the heck. Might as well join.
  • SnowBunnySmangerSnowBunnySmanger Members Posts: 277 ✭✭✭
    Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.
  • msmusickmsmusick Members Posts: 57
    Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.

    Thanks. But it REALLY wasn't a serious rhyme.
  • _Goldie__Goldie_ ablackweb.com Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 30,349 Regulator
    msmusick wrote: »
    Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.

    Thanks. But it REALLY wasn't a serious rhyme.

    Dat link didnt work for me , send some pics to my inbox
  • msmusickmsmusick Members Posts: 57

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    Dat link didnt work for me , send some pics to my inbox[/quote]

    I'm not sure how that's why I was hoping that the link would work :(

  • loch121loch121 Members Posts: 12,884 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Not bad at all
  • msmusickmsmusick Members Posts: 57
    loch121 wrote: »
    Not bad at all

    Thanks!
  • Florence52Florence52 Members Posts: 7
    . Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.avatar4.jpg
  • rapriteraprite Members Posts: 3
    Here's something

    “Where did it all go wrong”

    Its tough when you’re on top, then you start your drop
    Imperfections, 🤬 spots, big cracks in the rock, find out
    You’re no longer the man on the block
    Cold slap in the face, don’t look so shocked
    We had it all, we had it cod locked
    Look at us now, what the hell’s going on
    Somebody please tell me where the 🤬 ’d we go wrong

    Behaviors contagious, no matter how outrageous
    Like hating with rage, making slaves for your trade
    Putting weed smokers in cages, 🤬 rich getting ageless
    Aint there anyone out there to gauge this
    Aint there anyone there that can step up to the plate
    And save us
    🤬 I can’t tell you how bad that I hate this
    Someone please tell me what the 🤬 ’s going on
    Someone please tell me where the 🤬 ’d we go wrong

    Chorus
    Don’t make any sense
    We had it good for so long
    Somebody please tell me what’s going on
    Faith in a Nation that once was strong
    Somebody please tell me where it all went wrong

    Just a few years back, seemed we were on track
    Eastern Europe had began to 🤬 , then just like that
    The Berlin wall came crashing down
    Commies seemed to be coming around
    Peace it seemed was the new kid in town
    Well we can’t have that, a small scale attack
    Then just like that, we’re back on track
    🤬 that peace, we’ll find a new home in the Middle East
    New place for fun for the 🤬 guns and the bombs
    Find a new place for our troops to call home
    Where homesick boys can write home to their Moms
    Won’t matter to much if they lose their legs and their arms
    Plenty more where they come from back home on the farm
    Can anyone please tell me what’s going on
    Somebody please, where the 🤬 ’d we go wrong

    Greed has its needs and it feeds and it feeds
    Fulfills its hunger off of you and off me
    Give me 🤬 amnesty from this 🤬

    Beast or I swear by 🤬 you’ll see someone bleed
    We’ve had it, who planted this 🤬 seed
    Somebody tell me what the hell’s going on
    Somebody tell me where the 🤬 we went wrong
    Chorus

    Seems this 🤬 just gets worse and worse and worse
    Drive this whole administration to work in a hearse
    They grab your 🤬 and they 🤬 and they 🤬
    Circle of 🤬 jerks gone berserk
    Sit behind their desks and they lurk and they lurk
    Want your 🤬 pants your shoes and your shirt
    Want you to lose what they know you deserve
    Want you to choose what you know they don’t deserve
    Would someone tell me what the hell’s going on
    Can somebody tell me where the 🤬 we went wrong

    You don’t pass goal, you 🤬 go to jail
    Unless your part of this big business cartel
    Can’t borrow from a friend cause he’s just like you
    Government won’t take a 🤬 IOU
    It’ Hooray for me and 🤬 you too
    🤬 should have went to business school
    Today’s for me and tomorrow is too
    Guess I’ll just wish you the best of luck fool
    Lucks all you get and you’ll need it too
    Cause it’s my job to 🤬 you and 🤬 you, 🤬 you
    🤬 you and 🤬 you, 🤬 you and 🤬 you
    🤬 you


    RapRite 2012
  • supYosupYo Members Posts: 5,790 ✭✭✭✭✭
    no, its dope
  • LUClENLUClEN Absence makes the heart grow fonder of someone else Members Posts: 20,559 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited August 2012
  • Cmon_SonCmon_Son Members Posts: 7
    Yes.
  • Doubleday4lifeDoubleday4life Members Posts: 450 ✭✭✭✭
    I like homies written a couple posts down!
  • Dzaster31Dzaster31 Members Posts: 2
    This was a good start for you. Like you said, you are a Hip-Hop head and this was for fun. Seems like you are just trying to see how you can manage your own wordplay. Like others have suggested, create a concept and then just work around that. Peace.
  • HipHopisGlobalBitchHipHopisGlobalBitch Members Posts: 29
    I think simplicity and meaning along with flow and delivery make a good spitter
  • HipHopisGlobalBitchHipHopisGlobalBitch Members Posts: 29
    The whole super lyricist thing is played out man.
  • thedesolateonethedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    pretty good for a non-rapper
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