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Silence

stupot0607
stupot0607 Members Posts: 1,914 ✭✭✭
edited July 2012 in Waiting To Exhale
Wrote this quick poem last night (or early this morning). Havent touched it up or anything, so its still pretty raw and short.

Silence is a hindrance
Waiting on this window sill wishing she was here,
Silence is beautiful,
Alone in the dark responsible for my own atmosphere,
Silence is all knowing,
secrets of the universe will pass through its selfless hands,
Silence is Unique,
Knowing somewhere that somebody never experienced it in gods plans,
Silence is me

Comments

  • silence2dahood
    silence2dahood Members Posts: 2
    Silence is like drinking you gotta build up ya tolerance,
    take 'em by moments,
    Silence is a beautiful woman with hella common sense,
    lock 'er down wit warrants,
    Silence could not be taught how to be,
    it's just is and that's naturally,


    shout out Stupot
  • supYo
    supYo Members Posts: 5,790 ✭✭✭✭✭
    yo

    silence, but myself in my mind fightin
    hear the screams me bitin
    gotta keep grinding, to get out im rhymin
    visions of me caddilac ridin
    chickens opening legs, 🤬 be risin
    aint no hiding, 🤬 will see u
    after the dark comes the shinin, hopin at least
    aint no fool, gets the peace within him
    feel my heart bleed, me swimmin in it
    another morning kid, the hourn hits
    plans i got these, just hope i aint drawin in it..MY blood

    U got?
  • supYo
    supYo Members Posts: 5,790 ✭✭✭✭✭
    supYo wrote: »
    yo

    silence , in thoughts divin
    myself in my mind hard fightin
    hear the screams me bitin
    gotta keep grinding, to get out im rhymin
    visions of me caddilac ridin
    chickens opening legs, 🤬 be risin
    aint no hiding, 🤬 will see u
    after the dark comes the shinin, hopin at least
    aint no fool, gets the peace within him
    feel my heart bleed, me swimmin in it
    another morning kid, the hourn hits
    plans i got these, just hope i aint drawin in it..MY blood

    U got?

  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    Ahhhhh! props to thread starter, and all those contribute to Silence.. I loved so many lines in this thread... Thank you for sharing, I will contribute ;)
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    Silence,

    where my soul breeds,
    my mind's free,
    once lost like the Indian Cree,
    but now I can see,
    now I can feel,
    on a journey to heal,
    enjoy a meal.
    See my brother's been killed,
    Hearts been shatterd and stealed,
    I'm still ill,
    but I'm still here.....