What's up everyone. We are doing a contest with T.I. and we are giving away $1200 a day for the next 10 days. Just wanted to give you all a heads up.
https://www.allhiphop.com/ti

::Along Came A Spider:: Return of the KeyStyl3 !

DOC H0LL!DAY
DOC H0LL!DAY Members Posts: 1,539 ✭✭✭✭✭
A old pass-time on here. Used to be fun.

Wage war pon many, my head feeling heavy
Skeleton is cold plus my soul feeling empty
Skin kinda tuff.. blood cold as Ice Water
Eyes kinda heavy having dreams tryna get me
Always pray to 🤬 but having dreams that I’m Lucifer
best becomes the worse, like a curse getting used to tha
Heart full of emptiness.. born without my fingerprints
Cold upon the touch, My Body laced inside of leopard skin
Mouth full of K-9’s.. fed metal… trey nines
Jaws made of steel, a meal you try to take mines
Heart pumpin hot led.. any 🤬 ?? shot dead
Loud mouths.. hot heads.. coke fiends and 🤬 heads
hands cold as ice, man they right I’m nothing nice
I’m the shadow in ya window Michael Myers wit a Knife..
I’m ya bad dreams. Wit 16’s I guillotine ya 🤬 clean..
Ya top like a vending machine..
Freddy Kruge cept for I touch Ruge's, I never lose
I Never snooze, from under grown like vegetables do
Dip smooth, 🤬 I grip tools by fist fulls,
Rip through.. skin tissue, parked cars and hit schools
Save the tuff guy 🤬 , the guns I get to punch out kids
That lunge out quick… some punch out 🤬
Glass Joe 🤬 I snatch doe.. in plain clothes
Same goes for the rest of you hoes... TBC.


Comments

  • DOC H0LL!DAY
    DOC H0LL!DAY Members Posts: 1,539 ✭✭✭✭✭
    ALCHEMY:

    the ignorant get mad at he who has mastered his sanity
    one who dwells in the canopy of peace forever happily
    and all that im imagining usually starts attracting me
    a one man army made of metaphyics, matter and alchemy
    lonely i dream of peace and my portion of its abundant
    spirit proven triumphant as body and mind become it
    thanks to he I don't want nuthing I'm done wit sufferin
    cold nights of wondering if the heat will ever come from within
    will i forever be true to you through focus and discipline
    that 8 fold path of untold wrath rescuing all who's listening
    purify souls, work through nerve endings and shrink heads
    black magician seem suspicious only to whisper what he said
    guided minds who were once wise escaped from stray atoms
    blind in both eyes but view the times through lines of grey matter
  • TheNeoShell
    TheNeoShell Members Posts: 93 ✭✭
    I'm definitely feeling the rhyme schemes and word play. Good 🤬 .

    The more and more you refine and tighten your skills, which I think is on it's way already; I want to see what you do with a topical joint.

    Write something on one topic and go as long as you can. I'm interested in seeing what you come up with.
  • DOC H0LL!DAY
    DOC H0LL!DAY Members Posts: 1,539 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2013
    I'm definitely feeling the rhyme schemes and word play. Good 🤬 .

    The more and more you refine and tighten your skills, which I think is on it's way already; I want to see what you do with a topical joint.

    Write something on one topic and go as long as you can. I'm interested in seeing what you come up with.

    Thanks for the feed.


    Here go 2 of my joints.

    [video]

    [video]
  • omenREDZONE
    omenREDZONE Members Posts: 1
    not bad there was some good lines in there u should try to find a beat to fit it... how do u post a thread on here anyways? I got a track I wanna put up but im not seeing where I can start a thread
  • DOC H0LL!DAY
    DOC H0LL!DAY Members Posts: 1,539 ✭✭✭✭✭
    not bad there was some good lines in there u should try to find a beat to fit it... how do u post a thread on here anyways? I got a track I wanna put up but im not seeing where I can start a thread

    You need to have 300 post before u can make a thread bro. Thanks 4 tha feed.
  • BaLdFacE
    BaLdFacE Members Posts: 3
    I liked this piece a lot...

    The wordplay was iLL and the whole thing flowed really good...

    FirE...

    FaCe... 6LBS of PressurE
  • BaLdFacE
    BaLdFacE Members Posts: 3
    yo can u tell me how to post a thread