What's up everyone. We are doing a contest with T.I. and we are giving away $1200 a day for the next 10 days. Just wanted to give you all a heads up.
https://www.allhiphop.com/ti

Can I write rhymes?

willywanker
willywanker what?Members Posts: 787 ✭✭✭✭
Every day I represent, paying rent leaves my wallet with a dent
before it comes it's spent, every cent like I gave it up for lent
Still I repent then repeat, then repent then repeat
success I'm trying to greet, no surrender no retreat




Am I any good?

Comments

  • Rouge Tha Mysfyt
    Rouge Tha Mysfyt Members Posts: 1
    it was coo....i think delivery would play a great deal on the capacity of dopeness
  • grYmes
    grYmes Diversify your bonds...Members Posts: 2,350 ✭✭✭✭✭
    The message is there honestly it's just what you do with it to make yourself stand out. I remember writing like this when I just started. Try adding a bit more detail and expand on it some more. The foundations there tho.
  • 5onblackhandside
    5onblackhandside With all due respect, I barely respect niggas. Nike sweat suit, I'm ready to check niggas!Members Posts: 2,585 ✭✭✭✭✭
    🤬 sounding like green eggs and ham

    Dr. Suess ass 🤬 .
  • willywanker
    willywanker what?Members Posts: 787 ✭✭✭✭
    Thanks for the feedback guys, yep delivery will be vital with a style like this, been experimenting with different styles lately.
  • willywanker
    willywanker what?Members Posts: 787 ✭✭✭✭
    Plus the last line was rushed I was stoned and just wanted to post something, got some heat in my notebook but don't wanna post incase it gets stolen.
  • Screwtape
    Screwtape Members Posts: 611 ✭✭✭✭
    that was pretty good bro
  • 9TRAY
    9TRAY EverywhereMembers Posts: 6,830 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Keep writing
  • willywanker
    willywanker what?Members Posts: 787 ✭✭✭✭
    Thanks guys appreciate it.
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    Keep rapping,
    You ain't ready cause ya flow wack
    I can tell you tryna be the next white rapper,
    Listen to my boy cappa- dona,
    I'm from the state we call zona!
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