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:: Satan's Death Angels::

death187sin
death187sin Members Posts: 6,098 ✭✭✭✭✭
edited August 2010 in Roc Tha Mic
satans lords, death angels wit black wings who only suface at night,
alone, they stolen jehova's might and sold Christ to poltergeist..
find ya corpse mangled wit frantic soldiers who only revolt in fright,
expose ya souls, beholds as they hold knives to the ghost of christ..
a fleet of astronomers, seeded heathens in preachers commoners,
breath-in, bleedin as the heat decreases freezing theromometers..
purpose to worship worthless circuits of churches is victim of prophecies,
earth is in service to serpents, cursin it's surface wit vicious hypocrisies..
define proof of pure and sacred is superstitious as im blaming myself,
the blind truth, the cure for hatred is religion, got me caving in on myself...
injected a resident, inspite of evelution as parasites climb into reverends,
re-elected a president, despite our revolution of fahrenheight nine-elevens..
killed our own children with psychological weaponry bred their discrepancy
filled our own buildings with biological weaponry, spreadin our leprosy..
spray the fumes, blinded heavenly minds meaning the crusade is doomed,
they raid the tombs, behind enemy lines tryna fight off brigades of goons...
omnipotent ones of intricate sentences witness spun, imprisoned his son,
indigenous run, ignorant innocents sicknesses hung to diminish the sun....
despite it’s appearance, my skins unbreakable but death swinging the sword,
though righteous their fear is my kin, the unshakable left to sink in the floors...
jesus a non~existent rebel, what politicians call ballistic is vicious as hell,
heathens fight a contradicted devil, as all of his apocalyptic visions dispel...
speared with your suitable lunacy after, fearin ya beautiful eulogy mattered,
your irrefutable foolery’s shattered, here at your funeral u brutally battered..
verses ate em, and regurgitated em whole, plannin a televangelist sacrifice,
terminated, left invertibrated, you fold and fall under a scandalous afterlife..


MurderM

Links on the way.

http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?31493-random-keystyle

http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?53241-RTM-Classics-Hurt-Me-Soul-(2006)

Comments

  • death187sin
    death187sin Members Posts: 6,098 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited August 2010
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  • Legend24
    Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited August 2010
    satans lords, death angels wit black wings who only suface at night,
    alone, they stolen jehova's might and sold Christ to poltergeist..

    find ya corpse mangled wit frantic soldiers who only revolt in fright,
    expose ya souls, beholds as they hold knives to the ghost of christ..
    a fleet of astronomers, seeded heathens in preachers commoners,
    breath-in, bleedin as the heat decreases freezing theromometers..
    purpose to worship worthless circuits of churches is victim of prophecies,
    earth is in service to serpents, cursin it's surface wit vicious hypocrisies..

    define proof of pure and sacred is superstitious as im blaming myself,
    the blind truth, the cure for hatred is religion, got me caving in on myself...
    injected a resident, inspite of evelution as parasites climb into reverends,
    re-elected a president, despite our revolution of fahrenheight nine-elevens..
    killed our own children with psychological weaponry bred their discrepancy
    filled our own buildings with biological weaponry, spreadin our leprosy..
    spray the fumes, blinded heavenly minds meaning the crusade is doomed,
    they raid the tombs, behind enemy lines tryna fight off brigades of goons...
    omnipotent ones of intricate sentences witness spun, imprisoned his son,
    indigenous run, ignorant innocents sicknesses hung to diminish the sun....

    despite it’s appearance, my skins unbreakable but death swinging the sword,
    though righteous their fear is my kin, the unshakable left to sink in the floors...
    jesus a non~existent rebel, what politicians call ballistic is vicious as hell,
    heathens fight a contradicted devil, as all of his apocalyptic visions dispel...
    speared with your suitable lunacy after, fearin ya beautiful eulogy mattered,
    your irrefutable foolery’s shattered, here at your funeral u brutally battered..
    verses ate em, and regurgitated em whole, plannin a televangelist sacrifice,
    terminated, left invertibrated, you fold and fall under a scandalous afterlife..


    MurderM

    Awesome from a lyrical and technical standpoint... the beginning and ending were top notch. Didn't have much in terms of a memorable line/punchline but the vocab and rhyming were on point. The complexity of the bars may be to blame for that. Instead of the punchlines, you delivered some mean alliteration and internals though. I couldn't get it to flow too well in my head, but maybe you had a particular flow in mind that works for you. You seem to like the darker content in your rhymes, I remember from your last piece. I'd like to see what else you've got in your arsenal but this was great. Keep it up.
  • tenthirteen81
    tenthirteen81 Members Posts: 6
    edited August 2010
    as He walks in the room of cyberspace, monitors shake.
    the thermometer breaks, crippling time and the design of fate.
    the Bible makes you believe that it's comprised of hate,
    but when your mind awakes, you're crying 'cuz you don't wanna die.
    the time it takes to just acknowledge His existence
    must not fit in your schedule, but that doesn't get rid of Him.
    when your faith is low, leaving you to write lyrics of damn,
    just remember: it's His footprints in the sand.

    you should thank Him.

    -SS
  • supaman4321
    supaman4321 Members Posts: 946
    edited August 2010
    dope internal rhyming and schemes but the bars seem a little long for it to flow fluently to me, another dope piece nonetheless though