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Obsession

Rocket KiddRocket Kidd Members Posts: 2,212 ✭✭
edited September 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
OBSESSION

Shhhh, be quiet everything will be alright.
Don’t worry love, I’m gonna hold you tight.
Tonight we’re gonna have a great time.
Dude’s thought I was buggin when I said I was dating a dime.
I loved you from the 1st moment I saw you.
Every day searching for your number so I can call you.
Always blowing you kiss when I see you on TV.
But in my heart you know u should be here with me.
All of your posters on my wall and the new shrine I just built.
Any guy disrespecting you was a guy I would’ve killed.
One day I felt real bad and started snorting coke.
It got worse when I saw you on TV kissing that Irish bloke.
I was hurt, sad, confused screaming “WHY WOULD U DO THIS ME!”
“CAN’T BELIEVE I WAS STUPID ENOUGH TO GET YOUR NAME TATTED ON ME”.
Ripped your posters off the wall, and destroyed that shrine.
At this time, all I can think was “REVENGE WILL BE MINE”
In a coked out rage, I slit my wrist and shattered the mirror.
Blood spilling everywhere but my mind was clearer.
Then I finally found out what I needed to do.
“IF I CAN’T BE WITH YOU, NOBODY WILL HAVE YOU!”
Days, nights, weeks and months have passed by.
Every night I curl up into a ball and cry.
Watching TV and the news said you were havin a premier in town.
“This would be the perfect place, to shut this 🤬 down.
808’s and heartbreak is the perfect album for this.
Because at the end of the night I’m call it quits.
So I waited in the crowd, waiting for you to pass by
You looked so beautiful it brought a tear to my eye.
Then I had that vision of you kissing that Irish 🤬 ,
Thinking “its now or never, do u have the guts”
Heart is pounding, sweating profusely getting nervous
I’m having 2nd thoughts “does she really deserve this”
The struggle within was becoming too much,
“🤬 it, we belong together so I’m taking out the both of us”
Jumped the guard rail, and pointed the gun at you.
Took a couple shots at security then showed off my tattoo
I told her please forgive me, then squeezed off into her forehead.
That way I knew for certain she was dead.
I dropped to my knees and prayed to 🤬 .
Then pulled the trigger on myself so we’d never be apart.

Comments

  • PurrPurr Evil Chuck Season. Jumpman jumpman Jumpman dat girl up to something!!!Members Posts: 32,382 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited September 2010
    Wow. What a dope concept! I love reading words that bring visuals to mind. mmm, the rhythm is a bit off in and out..

    example: I loved you from the 1st moment I saw you.
    Every day searching for your number so I can call you.
    Always blowing you kiss when I see you on TV.
    But in my heart you know u should be here with me.

    I loved you from the 1st moment I saw you.
    Every day searching for your number so I can call you.
    Always blowing you kisses when I see you on TV.
    But in my heart you know u should be here with me.

    by adding kisses it completes the rhythm better sounding in my head or when I speak it out loud.
  • Zone6reppaZone6reppa Members Posts: 926
    edited September 2010
    BRRRR! lol, shouts out to the kidd on dis one.......
  • Rocket KiddRocket Kidd Members Posts: 2,212 ✭✭
    edited September 2010
    Wow. What a dope concept! I love reading words that bring visuals to mind. mmm, the rhythm is a bit off in and out..

    example: I loved you from the 1st moment I saw you.
    Every day searching for your number so I can call you.
    Always blowing you kiss when I see you on TV.
    But in my heart you know u should be here with me.

    I loved you from the 1st moment I saw you.
    Every day searching for your number so I can call you.
    Always blowing you kisses when I see you on TV.
    But in my heart you know u should be here with me.

    by adding kisses it completes the rhythm better sounding in my head or when I speak it out loud.

    thanks for the feedback..i'll make sure to remember that next time.
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited September 2010
    Dam Kidd,

    This jawn right here is very well written and gives me an image, a clear one at that..

    the word play was on point with the rhyme scheme and I enjoyed reading this so keep em' comin :-)

    Btw, you should go drop a few words in the thread I created, "Why do you write" and contribute to as why do you write..

    And thanks for sharing and I hope to read more!
  • cody beachcody beach Members Posts: 10
    edited September 2010
    Be quiet,it is important
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