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edited September 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
What did I do to make you fall so close to me?
Crashing into each other as the waves into the sand
Where our separate worlds collide like night and day

I know tupacfan youve been telling me to finish my poems off but this one feels complete to me.


  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited September 2010

    That's awesome, if you feel its complete to you is all that matters. But whenever you feel those emotions described inside or in a situation in particular, you should add on to it... Inspired be different stages of the same situation or emotions could be one of kind piece for future reflection..

    anyways, thanks for sharing like usual and I look forward to reading more of your material.
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