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If I Told You.....

kzzlkzzl Members Posts: 7,548 ✭✭✭✭✭
edited November 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
If I told you that I loved you, would you prefer the lie?
Cause, boo the truth can hurt. Break your heart and make you cry
I’m not your other lover I’m the one you chose in fact
The one that stole your heart and can also sell it back

Good things in life are free, but freedom’s worth fighting for
So though I hold you with no leash, betrayal means kicking down your door
Anger ain’t the motive, it’s that I care so much
Enough to love you so they hate you, cause you hurt me so much

And hate it they will. they pipes tight and pressure builds
Cause your girlfriends so damn spiteful, she’s hates others having thrills
Your man ain’t my concern and your men’s is all wack
Cause if the fools could do they job, you would've never came back.....

...Or hate me walking by. Not returning phone calls and asking me why.
Sass me bout some woman and get smart when my eye’s stray
Or do the funny things you do, just to get back at me some way

You must love my attention. it seems my passion your addiction
I surprise you with some romance and it’s like our new beginning.
I charm ya for a second, you starve for me every minute
Your life time filled with famine, you’re a glutton, so i stopped time until you finished

So if I told you that I loved you, would you still prefer the lie?
Cause boo I know it hurts. I healed your heart and wiped your eye’s.
I’m not another lover. I’m the chosen. I’m THE fact.
The only one to take your heart and now you’re scared to have it back

I’m glad you finally learned the cost. see sacrifice ain’t free at all
chewed off my leg off for my freedom. Mauled the hand that fed me wrong.
Love my only motive, cause I love us so much
see a truth will set you free, while a lie just left you stuck

Comments

  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited October 2010
    Wow, I'm impressed!

    This 🤬 went hard, I looooveed the flow, the way it was written! 🤬 was nice all the way around!

    Soo relatable too..a lot of words stuck but I'm unable to copy and paste. Anyways good job on this delicate piece!

    Thanks for sharing!
  • kzzlkzzl Members Posts: 7,548 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited November 2010
    Tupacfan wrote: »
    Wow, I'm impressed!

    This 🤬 went hard, I looooveed the flow, the way it was written! 🤬 was nice all the way around!

    Soo relatable too..a lot of words stuck but I'm unable to copy and paste. Anyways good job on this delicate piece!

    Thanks for sharing!


    damn... ummmm.... thanks. i guess i could share the rest i've got. they're only lying around collecting dust, but if others might like it....
    i'm just now venturing into this section, so i'll be catching up and learning from most of you. bare with me for a bit. and thanks to all that took the time to read.
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited November 2010
    kzzl wrote: »
    damn... ummmm.... thanks. i guess i could share the rest i've got. they're only lying around collecting dust, but if others might like it....
    i'm just now venturing into this section, so i'll be catching up and learning from most of you. bare with me for a bit. and thanks to all that took the time to read.

    Your welcome!

    Feedback is def important for any artist!

    I just had to re-read the piece and gawwwd, this is summin else.. I love it! Thank u thank u for sharing again!! This is Def needed..
    But yea post em here, I'm always reading so you got a reader here fa sho! And def take time to peep my jawn too :)

    Peace!
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