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NIGHTTRAIN by VSOP

VSOPVSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
edited December 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
some random 🤬 -haven't written much lately.....no MUSE!
comments welcome

btw Merry Christmas to all the WTE heads out there


she dances
to the beat of my hearts drum
bra drops, pants follow
I watch
part 🤬
I got her
my heart
all love
my model
her skin vibrates to my 🤬 thoughts
808 dreams make the walls 🤬
I am in awe
her trebles are troubles and
her LONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGG pauses between moans
has me jonesin for her "OHHHHhhhh's"
the "Aye papi's"
the "OH MY GOOOODD YOURE SO BIG's"
the "oh my 🤬 shes so good"
I'd say goddess like
egyptian eyes
peruvian thighs
puerto rican lips
brazilian hips
colombian ass
🤬 like America's past
she is my everything past everything else
angel halo in Hell's thong
she gives me amazing conversation after the L is gone
she strips to Jamie Foxx's "slow"
the camera's turned on
now go
the blunt's burnin on
so slow
the crib's curtains drawn
nope, nope
she walks to me followed by smoke
she sweats flames
soaked
and looks at me with intentions
we become 69
I 8 sideways
we turned to infinity
us from the middle of 🤬 becomes we
2 of a kind
our love's isotope
3 words are left all over the apartment just like clothes
1 on the fan's blades
1 on the tile floor
I want to take the last one off of you with my lips
when I sink my teeth into your soul
take our time til we fall asleep
then do it all over again in the mornin

Comments

  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited December 2010
    Ahhhh..

    The word play is frigging sick!! In diggin this jawn hahaha..

    Soon imma be writing stuff like this watch haha LOL.. On some love stuff..

    And thank u for sharing as always.. Its been looking over due.. Dammit VSOP! LOL.

    Peace and happy holidays to you and your's.. :D
  • VSOPVSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited December 2010
    Tupacfan wrote: »
    Ahhhh..

    The word play is frigging sick!! In diggin this jawn hahaha..

    Soon imma be writing stuff like this watch haha LOL.. On some love stuff..

    And thank u for sharing as always.. Its been looking over due.. Dammit VSOP! LOL.

    Peace and happy holidays to you and your's.. :D

    you aint lyin-havent wrote much lately like I said and its lookin like I'm not the only one

    gotta love us in the WTE-we all take breaks, then come back for a week or so, retire, then back again in a month or 2

    whaddayagonnado
  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited December 2010
    VSOP wrote: »
    you aint lyin-havent wrote much lately like I said and its lookin like I'm not the only one

    gotta love us in the WTE-we all take breaks, then come back for a week or so, retire, then back again in a month or 2

    whaddayagonnado

    I been on that writers block too as of acouple days now. It seems creativity has lost its flow or better yet I have nothing interesting or positive to say LOL. plus I been writing to much saddistic 🤬 too. I need some positive reinforcement and write about brighter stuff I guess. Ehhh, but that's hard for to do when everything is bad around me or just going thru some 🤬 and almost feel like i can't come back from that.

    LOL at some retire and we come back a month later LOL.. Word to real p.. But we always come back right? Yea we all married to poetry hehehehe...
  • REAL_POETICALREAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited December 2010
    *wipes fog off of computer screen*

    gawddamn vsop that 🤬 was sickkkk....you pretty much killed it with the 808 line...may have to borrow that lol...but anyway glad you still killing it as always with your abstract but effective style...bottom line good work as always...keep dropping the drawls of many following opposites with the gift of poetry my fellow poet

    peace
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