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Something for the ladies

bman536bman536 Members Posts: 15
edited December 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
My Love is Short

Waking, whipping the sleep from her eyes she turns to her side and yet to no surprise her future husband is gone. Not a note or a letter, she knows she deserves better. Just as she begins to sit up a varmint fills her throat. She holds it in and reaches for her phone to call her best friend. Before see can push send the phone rings and on the other end is the boy of her dreams from last night. He says “I don’t want a big fight, I had a great night, but I think we should just be friends.” The conversation ends when she presses end for she can’t bear to hear the truth bend. Slightly stumbling from her bed, a recumbent menace enters her head

Any opinions on how it should end or do you like the kidda open ended ending leaving it sort of to the readers interpolation? What in your opinion do you think the ending suggest? Thanks

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  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited December 2010
    I was waiting for the end! Dammit LOL.


    I think you finish off the end, but its also nice to leave it open and let it be what the readers think as well..

    This was pretty good.

    Thanks for sharing and keep em coming.
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