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Treacheries Thoughts

bman536bman536 Members Posts: 15
edited December 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
Tormented by these treacheries thoughts, I pass the time by looking behind. Blind to what Ill’s me; I continue to step only forward in this retched land, the valley of the dark. A sudden spark caught my eye; I stand as 10 years go by. In a blackened state, a coma I stand, not fully knowing what possesses this man. Frozen in time, constrained by withered vines, soon this secret shall only be mine; a marvelous wonder I’ve yet to find. Beams of breath taking light strike this icy box, creating prisms of light which illuminate all darkness. A rainbow forms, a cloud appear, my destiny out weights my fears. Shear bliss and joy, inconceivable the amount of beauty she employees.


  • TupacfanTupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited December 2010
    I like your word play.

    Kinda wish you went further in this drop tho..

    Thnx for sharing!

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